Harry Potter: When the White Raven Falls

Thank you to everyone who has read this book. When I first started writing this book, I really wanted to write a mindless and refreshing article, but as I continued, it became like this, hahahahaha (I'm really sorry if you feel the content is abusive, because I didn't feel it when I wrote it...). This is my first time writing an article and there may be some shortcomings. Thank you for your tolerance. Some settings may be different from the original work. Thank you for liking [Selwyn/Ravel] (Bow jpg.) The reason why I wrote this book is because I had a dream last year, and suddenly I dreamed about Harry. Before that, I had not paid attention to HP for a long time, for various reasons. It can be said that Harry really helped me in reality, so I had the urge to write this article. (Hahahahahaha, I had a dream at night and I had all the settings figured out the next day. I was so imaginative!) The setting I wanted to write at the beginning was not that complicated, it was just a story about a bad native family. However, I am not very good at writing about this kind of ordinary family pain. I feel a bit embarrassed, and I tend to fight when I encounter problems. When I was writing the book, I foresaw that if I really wrote about the pain of the original family, I would write the book as a fighting novel... So the next day when I started writing, I suddenly had an idea and thought of a source of pain that could not be solved with violence, so I came up with the setting of Selene. One person's sorrow is not as heroic as a collective tragedy. The pain that can't be overcome for generations is unforgettable (what the hell am I talking about.). It belongs to yourself to torture yourself... The original ending was that Seth pretended to join Voldemort but was actually an undercover agent. The final ending was that Seth lived in seclusion and completely lost his emotions. His relationship with Harry was also the kind of soul mate but not together. But it is written that she will not join Voldemort after being discovered, and I have already written a fanfic, so why do I need an ending where my character is protected and secluded! This is too frustrating! (Xiao Sai, rise up!) She doesn't like the feeling of being manipulated, and what she always pursues is freedom. So apart from some basic background settings that would be abusive, I didn't want her to feel uncomfortable in other places, nor did I want her to wait for redemption. Passive redemption is actually a kind of shackles to a certain extent, and Xiao Sai himself would not be willing to do so. So the writing is a little different from my original setting, but fortunately the final ending meets my inner thoughts unexpectedly. This is the best case scenario. During the writing process, I was still afraid that Xiaosai's setting was not Slytherin enough, but after thinking about it, how could the setting of the sorting be described in just a few words? I'm sorry if it doesn't fit your idea of ​​Slytherin, but I won't change it. For me, this book is a product of self-happiness. I feel comfortable writing, and someone resonates with my thoughts. Every foreshadowing I write is logically rounded out without my knowledge. This is okay and makes me very happy. Thanks again to everyone who has read this book. Thank you. If there is anything you don't understand or the setting, you can post it under this book review. If you can understand it, I will express it in a more logical way. Thank you and wish you happiness.

The writing is very palatable, (I won't admit that I am the kind of person who likes to read about rationality first and running for the love, although this book is not that, after all, young couples are quite miserable) Selwyn (Sierra): No matter how you look at it, the background of her life is a tragedy. A tragedy occurred in order to escape her fate. The initiator was that ridiculous bloodline, and the father who was looking at the pipa tree in the courtyard yesterday (there is a loquat tree in the courtyard, planted by my wife when she died). Does he love his wife? The answer is yes, but unlike Xiaolong and Luo Sijia, he said that the concept he upholds can be said to be that his wife and interests come first (although I think interests seem to be more important in his heart than his wife). Sierra lost her mother in her early years, and as a father, she only cared about interests, which also led to this disease of emotional understanding disorder. All the self-harm she did when she was young was to protect herself and take revenge on others. ( This is really sad, the way to protect yourself is to hurt yourself), and then through the intentional guidance of her father, she blocked her innocent curiosity that belongs to a child to her subconscious (I think this explains why she is so persistent in the truth, just think of it as compensation for her missing childhood), and only after arriving at Hogwarts, this repressed and emotional situation slowly improved. Harry (Leeds): In fact, it is quite consistent with the original work. To use the original words of a fan author who analyzed Harry's character I saw, "You have no ego, Harry" (Seriously, Harry can maintain his truthfulness, goodness and beauty purely because Rowling gave Harry a Sacred Heart. The most correct sentence Xiaolong said is "You are a saint, Bro↓". Of course, I am talking about the original work, and Harry in this must be Yin. (Ghoul Man) In this book, Harry also has no self, or he is too superstitious about authority. When he was a child, his aunt was authoritative. After arriving at Hogwarts, Dumbledore was authoritative. In this book, Saira is authoritative. Therefore, when I saw the author wrote a line saying that Saira was dead, I felt that Harry's sky must be falling. I also asked specifically, Harry will not die for love, right? (To be honest, I think it would be good for Harry to die for love. If he doesn't do this, he will undoubtedly suffer from mental illness. Suddenly I think of a scene in the Be line. Selwyn: I want to eat watermelon. Harry: Let's cut up a few Muggles. The author used watermelon as a metaphor for killing. Is this what he thought of?) Draco (Little Dragon): Po Te, take care of your people! I'm already too busy to keep my feet off the ground! ! ! (As for the little stoat, it would be more in line with the original work.) The only regret is that Xiaolong didn't come to see Harry on the first-grade train. In fact, I think if there had been this scene, before Xiaolong and I quarreled about the red-haired gentleman who did not want to be named, Sera would have ended their quarrel in another way. And Laojiu, did you eat the enchanted golden apple? High quality and fireproof. By the way, do you have a fan base? Well, okay, let's do this much for the character analysis first, and then do other people's work when I have the chance. Suddenly Cedric is discovered to be alive! ! ! Like the old squad leader who wrote "The Golden Fish Hook", the author who survived after eating fish meat deserves to enjoy the Ancestral Temple! ! ! Suddenly I discovered that the heroine of another HP is also named Selwyn, which is quite a coincidence.

From the beginning to the finale and extras, I can actually tell that the author's writing is getting better and better. I particularly like the current writing style, which is very delicate. Whether it is the B line or the He line, everyone is at least alive and well (not mentally 😋). I love this dumpling-making plot. Selwyn controls everything in this way, not only emotionally, but also in career. Selwyn wants it, and Selwyn gets it. A very cool article! !

It took me a long time to finally finish reading this book. [Laughs] Selwyn is the most persistent fan fiction heroine I have ever seen. She spent her whole life chasing freedom, and she just wanted to have the right to decide her own life and death. It was really heartbreaking to see the storyline where she couldn't even decide her own death. Laveldad, maybe Elise gave Selwyn this middle name because she also wanted him to have the goal of pursuing the truth. Elise might feel heartbroken knowing everything Cassius did to her daughter just to keep herself alive in a physical way, right? Selwyn didn't get what she really wanted even on the line, and she was heartbroken and cried [crying][crying][crying] At first, I was still confused about why the heroine could be so calm and observe everyone in an almost detached way from the world, the kind of objectivity that separates from the world and observes people from God's perspective. But when I saw the truth, I couldn't help but feel sad for him. She was deprived of the right to grow up normally as a child and could not grow up as a normal child. So it was really nice to see Selwyn regain some of her childhood innocence in fifth grade. But if you think about it carefully, maybe Selwyn doesn't need others to empathize with him at all. As the latest chapter says, she just wants to get what she wants, even if it costs her life. She doesn't want pity, she just wants freedom. The Harry here has more love and has no experience of cruel escape. He was happy to see that Selwyn's real name was Selenesh in third grade, but after experiencing life in Leeds, he felt ashamed of himself. Harry was born with the ability to empathize with others. I was really shocked when I saw Harry dressed as Liz. I didn't expect that the cat at the beginning would be Harry, which gave the two people a deeper emotional bond. Harry really only hopes that Selwyn only sees him. It is obvious that Harry regards Selwyn as a truth (not the meaning of the name, but from the time he became a true friend in the second grade, he regards Selwyn's words as the guideline for his actions). It is an honor to see an emotionally outgoing Harry from a large pen. Even after going through the war, Harry has not lost the innocence of his childhood. Amy's death was a huge blow to me. When I first watched it, I didn't understand why she committed suicide by jumping off a building. I was still wondering why that golden cup could make water sweeter? Only when I saw it later did I realize that the gold cup was actually Hufflepuff's gold cup. Amy was one of Selwyn's few warmths during his childhood. She was so kind to Selwyn, and she originally promised to be liberated when she was 11 years old. She wanted to be free, but when she was about to be free, she jumped to her death. Such a kind and compassionate person died just like that. Are my tears so worthless? [Cry][cry][cry][cry] I am honored to read this book, see a different Harry, see a perfect parallel world, and see the unique Selwyn. Thank you so much for recording this story that happened in the parallel world [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] Finally, I want to ask you, is it true that the be line cannot be continued? Does it have to be oe? [Cry][cry][cry][cry]

I saw a point before, why Orpheus wants to look back (referring to the be line why Harry can resurrect Xiaosai) From beginning to end, Orpheus was not entirely sure whether the person behind him belonged to Eurydice. Others told him that it was, that is, but he did not witness it with his own eyes. How could he confirm whether the other person was real or false, whether it was Eurydice or the obsession of his memory. Harry seemed to be looking back from beginning to end, but he never saw the real Xiaosai. What he wanted to recover was his obsession, his love, and his desire. However, he did not admit that those actions that seemed to turn back corresponded to Orpheus walking forward with his head down. Reincarnation again and again is the road that brings Eurydice back to the world. Orpheus (Harry) gradually accepts the death of Eurydice (Xiaosai) on the long road. Only when she faces the death of her lover can she truly return to the world. In fact, Harry was right. Xiao Sai's resurrection was indeed the result of the two of them, and they went both ways (smile)

The fragrant rice is delicious. All the regrets I had in the original novel are satisfied. The five little ones are so adorable. I'm not good at words and can't write a long review. I can only say sincerely that your writing is really good (⑉••⑉)♡

Gu Gu Gu Gu! After reading the main text, the author's big words are still too much for my liking. (Bushi) Why are there so few people reading such beautiful books? There are no regrets in the ending of he, and be's stream of consciousness is also very well written (tips: the main theme is still he's goo) The level of characterization feels close to the full score in the HP fandom, and the writing style is also good (except that the heroine is a bit awkward when doing analysis) Most of the heroine's scenes are integrated into the plot of the original work, making it very comfortable to watch. ~~~~~ In my opinion, Miss Selwyn is also the legendary gun-blocking king. I pay tribute to the legendary gun-blocking king Selwyn (gu Blocked second-year Ginny's gun (don't worry about anything else, just say it) Blocked fourth-year Cedric's gun, blocked the gun from the Room of Requirement (let's just say the Room of Requirement wasn't burned down this time, huh) Blocked the gun that went to get the golden cup, paying tribute to the source of all evil (one of them) the Horcrux Golden Cup Blocked the gun from the Lao Deng Resurrection Stone (this one really blocked the gun) Finally, Gu Gu Gu Gu Gu Gu (? How many Gu Gu are there in total above?

At first, I just clicked on this book and was ready to quit at any time. But Selwyn's story really attracted me. Her calmness, gentleness, determination, and complicated and confusing life experience attracted me to continue reading. Reading this book really required a lot of tissues and I cried countless times while reading it. Selwyn is really a little bitter melon. She has been searching for the secret of the curse of her bloodline, trying to unlock the curse and gain freedom. After knowing that she is "Selene", even the right to death is deprived of her. Selwyn is the heroine I care about the most. I hope Selwyn will always be happy and free [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

Wow, wow, super shocking and invincible rice [admiration] teacher, you are actually a god, right?

I know that as long as I keep looking for HP fans, I will always find good ones! I really like this kind of protagonist who is strong in heart and smart and calm. The changes to the original plot are also very beautiful. The main nodes and some classic plots are not lost. The subsequent battles also restore the highlights of the characters. The conflict between the characters was resolved in a way I never expected. Emmm, it feels complete, like, if you put aside Pride and Prejudice, that's how they should be. I always felt that Draco never had true friendship, but in this article, he did. The protagonist is not a time traveler, it's quite sad. To be honest, I don't like the setting that the heroine is beautiful, strong and miserable. The dark tone of the story and the tragic plot of the heroine are really easy to cry. The extra episode also made me burst into tears. This book is really well written. I am an old bookworm, and there are very few articles that can arouse my emotions.