Harry Potter: Would a Gender-Swapped Peter Be the Marauders' Favorite?

Very nice. There are too many prophetic dreams, accounting for almost half of the total chapters. Compared with the prophetic dreams, I am more looking forward to the story of the protagonist's life. I think the author said it was for foreshadowing, but there are too many. I feel like the pace could be sped up a bit, and some of them could be written in one stroke or in a few sentences.

It's very cute. The heroine's hamster appearance is vivid and the various descriptions are super cute. The interaction between the four people is also very like real partners and very loving. It's just that the length of the prophecy is too long. After calculation, it takes up most of the entire text. This arrangement is not reasonable. I hope it can be reduced appropriately in the future. 😓Um, I feel that the direction of the plot has been a bit inexplicable since the heroine's identity was revealed. Especially the writing style is obviously not as delicate as it was at the beginning. The writing is messy, pretentious literature suddenly comes out, the dialogue is very childish, there are many language errors and a strong accent, which is a bit disappointing. .

At first glance, the setting was quite shocking, but I really couldn't find a good HP novel that I hadn't read before, so I had no choice but to grit my teeth and give this one a try, and I was surprised to find that it was pretty good [facepalm]. The author's ideas are very novel, and the logic of Pedro's perspective in predicting the world in the dream is quite good. It's just that there are too few updates. I finished reading it in one go. I hope the author will update it soon. Please update more often. I was a little disappointed when I saw the end. After the misunderstanding in the parallel world was resolved, I didn't really like the process from the ambiguity between the four people to their love. Some of the details the author added to improve the logic are very good. But in the four-person romance in the main storyline, I don't like Peter's character very much, and it also has some influence on the characters of the other three. Before the relationship was finalized, Peter was too entangled and cowardly. He gave me the feeling of wanting and wanting at the same time. Oh, by the way, he also smelled like the brainless and weak heroine in ancient romance novels. However, in the novel, Peter also invented things such as the Wolfsbane potion and the anti-soul curse, which made me feel that he should not be that kind of person, which made me feel very conflicted. Watching the plot of four people falling in love did not give me a sweet feeling. Instead, I felt very embarrassed and wanted to skip watching other plots quickly. It can only be said that the author made a plate of dumplings for a dish of vinegar. The dumplings are very good, but the vinegar is not good. The dumplings are not bad when eaten alone, but they are ruined when they are dipped in vinegar.

The writing is quite good. I hope the heroine will bring dogs, deer, and wolves into her harem! And I also really like the friendship between the four of them. And I really like how the author made the heroine very smart and have strong magical abilities! There is no aggrieved feeling that the heroine is mediocre.

I have always been disgusted by the HP of the protagonist Peter, but this book is really a masterpiece! I feel sad when I read the latest chapter. It's really good. It's not a superficial nanny story. It's about redeeming yourself. It's sad and heart-warming. It's just too little. The author needs to be more powerful. Please give me more.

This article is super awesome. Klaas is super good-looking. My writing skills are amazing, and the writing by Huama Na is super good! It has a bit more flavor than other Peter's sexual stories (not just a bunch of things). The prophecy of dreams is quite long, but it's also very interesting! But I still want to see their current life. [Love] Simply shocking and delicious. Meng Qingyuan, who are you?

Isn't what the teacher wrote about my dream of childhood sweethearts exploring each other's bodies? Wc This is too fragrant, but the post is very gender-neutral. . Hey hey hey, this youthful atmosphere I originally saw it before but because I wasn't interested in Peter, I didn't click on it. Click here to give it a try today, it's so delicious! ! Is this the kind of rice you can see in Tomato [Adore][Adore][Adore] The character descriptions are very detailed, and Peter being a girl is completely different from the original novel, which is very cute. And the deer, dog, and wolf characters are not OOC either, which makes me happy.

Shockingly delicious! I feel like the author has come to the wrong platform. I usually don't read many male protagonists, but the setting here is very reasonable. The female protagonist Peter is not a heartthrob. Because he has lived as a boy since he was a child, the boundaries between men and women are blurred, and then he is taken advantage of without realizing it. He has a good time with Sirius! Remus' words touched my heart deeply, he said that he decided to stay with Peter forever. What used to be friendship was now something more! I like it very much! We haven't gotten to James' plot yet, but we're about to start Shura Field. I'm looking forward to it, but there are too many prophetic dreams, so I just skipped them [face covering]

I saw the title many times and didn't dare to click on it when I passed by it. This time I finally got the courage to read a chapter. It felt good so I continued reading. The whole plot from when the heroine was discovered by Remus behind her was very awkward. I saw the word "confused" no less than 10 times, and pouted, and then I finally couldn't stand it anymore and rated it.

The writing is very good. Looking at the cover, I thought it was a gorgeous and unreal sweet Mary Sue style. I didn't expect the writing style to be so delicate. It's very beautiful and fits the character very well. Worth a look