Harry Potter: Those Years I Spent as the Blacks' Rival

I particularly like this book. I think the relationship between the male and female protagonists is very well written and delicate! All in all, the plot is still very light and enjoyable so far. There are some minor spoilers below, which can also be regarded as some records of my own reading (?): The deepest impression is that Sirius suddenly lay on the sister's lap. The bad and provocative meaning is very obvious and heart-warming 💓 There is also the Hogwarts tabloid. The CP of the Black Brothers is really funny. How did you do it to make the quarrel very ambiguous? Haha, I was very happy when I read this paragraph. I hope the teacher will keep updating! (*^O^*) OMG I'm here again after reading the full text [smirking] [smirking] The second half is particularly pure and pure love between the two people. Due to family environment, personal personality, etc., The two people are destined to be separated. It is very delicate and well-written! The final he ending made me feel like Hart was soft and [I was about to cry]. Time will dilute everything. People's mentality is different at each stage and there will be different developments. They are all trying to understand each other back then🥺 Overall, it's really great! My language skills are really bad, but I really recommend everyone to read it! (I found it on other platforms, and I fell in love with the boss's style of writing at first sight. Come and see if you don't lose money by investing in it òᆺó) Follow you forever❤️Looking forward to new articles hahaha

The writing style is not ordinary and beautiful. I am so happy. It took me two days to read it all. It gave me a withdrawal reaction. Alas, it seems that I will watch the follow-up. It is the best HP fanfic I have read on Tomato so far. I think it is also the best analysis of Sirius in this article. It is really good. I feel that Sirius, the character of Sirius, has a tragic flavor because of his family, growing environment, and subsequent experiences. The author's description of Hate Haiqing's innocence is very appropriate, and Hate Haiqingtian is actually very difficult to grasp. If you don't have a certain literary foundation, it is easy to write contrived, but the big emotions are very natural. I think "It's not the wonderful music that makes the wonderful fingers, just because the flowing water is like a flowing spring." This is the first time I write a long review. I really hope there will be a follow-up. Actually, you lied to us when you said it was the end. [Cool] (Dreaming)

I like the protagonist, but this is my first time reading a second-person novel. At first I was looking for the cover + adding books to my bookshelf, and then I really found something I liked (although my reading standards are not very high, but at least I have to have a comfortable experience, the plot is reasonable, the characters are not too OOC and overly whitewashed) Then, I like the protagonist Very humorous (?) Style of writing (?) Okay, forgive me, I have read too many articles recently and it may be a bit confusing, but for me, the reading experience is five stars, the listening experience is five stars, the protagonist control experience is five stars, and the sense of immersion is also five stars. And, I like the protagonist very much The quarrel in the latest chapter (well... There are some spoilers below, but please forgive me) (it doesn't seem to be the latest chapter, but it's not important). I felt very comfortable watching it for some reason (yes, I am the protagonist). Also, Sirius' cp/scandal/rumor (bushi) in the campus newspaper is also very funny. I really like Sirius's expression when he saw his two "brothers" being rumored to be a couple (one is a biological brother and the other is an unrelated brother), especially when he saw this newspaper in the hands of his girlfriend. It's also very funny that James' pursuit of love was rejected and Sirius' pursuit of love progressed like a rocket. Finally, I really liked the main character Highly recommended reading. Although I haven't read many HP articles, this one is at least mid-to-upper level at this pace. (Of course, in my opinion it is)

The ending of BE gave me the feeling that life is very strange, and many things that happened could not have been predicted by myself in the past. Every time I think about it, it is like a big dream. The ending of HE made me feel that the time frame of the story is particularly good, and there are still many, many people alive. I believe that the little butterfly from Florence flapping its wings can give many people a better chance of survival. This is a story that is so sweet that my teeth hurt, so sour that my heart aches, and full of scars from the times. I think the author's writing is quite good. The text looks very atmospheric, and the effect is doubled when paired with specific music. I think both endings are good, but to be honest, I didn't feel much hatred for Hai Qingtian. I only felt a strong sense of powerlessness and regret in the later period.

This book is really different, and I can't tell why, but no other fan can like it as much as this one. Perhaps it's the author's writing style or the storyline that makes it stand out among the many fan novels. It's like a half-opened rose in the bush. The story is not long, but the fragrance is long and memorable. I like the male and female protagonists of this book very much. They are well portrayed. I never thought of a name like Sirius, the sharp, unruly, and arrogant Sirius who "gave him the star of light, but pulled him into the abyss of darkness." The heroine is also very good, a Medici from Italy, with all the background and foreshadowing filled in. Moreover, the heroine originally had three friends. During the reign of the Dark Lord, one of them went abroad. I thought that the heroine would feel better with the other person, but unexpectedly they gradually became distant. This unexpected feeling was like sweet apricots in autumn, unexpectedly delicious. The most important thing is that both the male and female protagonists are rebellious and want to escape from this pure-blood theory full of bitterness, but in the end they return to the original point. The deep-rooted character dictates that Gryffindor's Sirius is a big insecure dog, and the heroine Leona is really Slytherin∠(｀ω´*)[loving][loving][loving][loving][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS]      This is my first time writing a book review. Well, the teacher rewarded me with a book

In fact, I have read this novel on Tomato a long time ago, but the score was too low, so I never clicked in to read it. Today I realized that the low score is because the plot is not novel enough, nor because the writing is too cliché, but because the ending given by the author to Sirius and Leona is not what most readers like and adapt to. Its ending is regrettable. The author put Sirius Black's character is well described. His charm is that he possesses the unique character traits of the Black family, but at the same time he is also a symbol of freedom and bravery. He is contradictory. Although Leona Medici's family is not perfect, she has a sense of belonging to the family that gives her warmth and has family members. She has the responsibility to be with her brother. Together we can lift this family together, so in the later period, when Sirius invites Leona to elope with him, the ending can be imagined. I haven't finished reading the book. After seeing them together, I thought of their ending and turned to the end. Although I couldn't accept it in my heart, in fact, after thinking about it, this is the most reasonable ending. After seeing the author's comments, I still felt It's very emotional. If I didn't watch the last episode, I think I would have been miserable for a week. Haha, the author's description is very real. In fact, it was also the first time that I broke through myself and read a fan article. I felt disappointed and unwilling to accept their ending. But according to the characters of Sirius and Leona, this is actually a perfect ending. Finally, I also hope that Sirius and Leona will be fine in the parallel world in the book (*^ω^*) PS: The author needs to work hard! (ง•̀_•́)ง

This book is very in-depth, not just about the protagonist's opposition to pure-blood theory, but also about deeper interests. The author's thinking is very in-depth and very creative. Many people like Snape because he has been bullied, is a double agent who wanders in gray areas, and has deep love for Lily. But in fact, the original Snape is not a good person. He is a supporter of blood theory. He desires power and status and does not give up his career for Lily. He also uses teacher-student bullying against Harry and Neville. Don't look at others one-sidedly. Sirius also has an arbitrary and sensitive side. Everyone is not black and white.

Thank you, teacher, for letting us see a carefully crafted Sirius. The be ending made people feel disappointed [almost crying] [crying]. It was a grand be ending, if... No, there is no if. And the ending of he is also tear-jerking [almost crying] [crying]. Sirius suffered a lot, as well as the heroine's helplessness, powerlessness, and despair. The understanding between the two parties when they finally met, and the conflict of separation when they were young were understood, tolerated, and relieved due to growth and time. For me, this he is semi-open-ended. After reading it, I can't help but extend my imagination of the subsequent scenes: whether/how they will defeat the darkness together, their relationship with Harry, what their post-war life will be like, how will both parties learn to tolerate, understand, and cherish? All this is unknown, it just depends on everyone's thoughts... Finally, goodbye. Congratulations on the completion It really captures the sweetness in the early stage and the feeling of heartbreak and loss in the later stage. It is rare to see HP have such an ending. It is not torture for the sake of torture. It has a perfect source of conflict. At the same time, the ending of he is not casual, but really realistic. It is relieved, tolerated and understood due to time and human growth. When I saw such a short chapter, I still had some doubts about whether it could be written with so few words and whether the character settings could be written perfectly. It turned out that it was possible. I rarely leave long comments, but I think this article by Teacher is worth it in my heart.

The author writes very well!ヽ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ You can feel the emotional changes between the heroine and Sirius, and the character creation is also very clear and complex. The pace of the plot is fast and not laggy. More than 40 chapters have already told the life plot of the college, and you can also understand the reasons for their separation. Moreover, the heroine has her own friends, and their friendship is also very sincere. Not as long as most hps on the market? Maybe it's because I personally prefer a faster pace. I was also attracted by the cover at first. The author's writing is very good, very graphic, and also feels very fatalistic? The description of the meteor in the last chapter (so far) is particularly beautiful and shocking. I think this article is a very good article. Well, what strikes me the most is that the heroine is a three-dimensional image. He has his own family and friends. Will he protect his family for his family? Forgive me for not being able to describe it. In short, I hope that this article will be discovered by more people. The author's writing is super good╰(*°▽°*)╯

Completely magical. This definitely ranks in my top three Sirius fanfics. The plot is not sluggish, the timeline is handled properly, the author's writing style is rare and makes me very comfortable to read, many metaphors are very relevant, and the short story is very good at shaping the characters in such a three-dimensional way. I like both endings very much. BE has a touch of sadness. I personally particularly like the song "Young and Beautiful". When I listen to it with the music, it actually takes away some of the sadness and gives me more of a sense of relief and deep memories. After all, I was once so passionate and so young. Plus I really love the character of Sirius, and I couldn't help but cry when I saw him inevitably fall into the Curtain. HE I think it is more logical that Leona will return to the UK. Whether it was when she first learned that Sirius was in prison or when, what I knew about her was that she would definitely come back to England, and she couldn't let it go. I can't let it go either. It's just that in the BE ending, to a certain extent, we have not escaped the trick of time. The author chose the timeline of Gouzi's release from prison twelve years later for them to reunite. I think this time point was chosen to have a sense of fate and drama. It was very comfortable to watch and I liked it very much. I personally don't like to classify articles according to their endings. For example, this is a he article, that is a be article... A good article is a good article, and the ending of a good article must have its own reason. Whether it is he, be or oe, it must be very natural and comfortable. This article must be a fanfic worth reading. So don't shrink back just because you hear about be. This is true for any article. Of course, I still have to mention some small details in this article. For example, the Marauders did discover the secret of Remus being a werewolf in the second grade, but mastering the Animagus should be after the third grade. More reasonably, it should be in the fourth or fifth grade, but it will not be as quick as the second grade. Also, Lao Deng would not let James Siris and others, who were still students, directly contact the Order of the Phoenix. When they were in sixth or seventh grade, they should have been very yearning for the Order of the Phoenix and decided to join immediately after graduation. At that time, their position should have been clear, more like non-staff members, but there would not be direct training or anything. There will be no such thing as "joining". But these small details do not affect the overall situation and I think they can be ignored. I think I've read countless Gouzi fanfics, and the Gouzi in this article fits my image quite well. I also like Leona's character very much! Anyway, thanks for encountering this treasure. Big thanks to the author. Highly recommended to everyone.