Fresh Out of the Jianghu, I Was Raised by a Cold Immortal Maiden

Finally, Shili has made a fortune, as long as he keeps updating😋 Also, it would be better to pay attention to whether the number of female protagonists in harem novels is high or not. I just saw the latest chapter, it's okay, just a bit literate

The book is relatively slow to pick up at the moment. I have read about half of it. The elder sister of Qing Leng Nian Shang [Adoration] is still Bingjia➕arrogant and possessive. She will get angry whenever she is next to the protagonist [laughing] But judging from the label, there are many female protagonists. I look forward to the plot of Shura Field in the future. It is so exciting. Master is a woman who can be my mother [shy]

The rough reading feels good, the plot is coherent and not jerky, and it is not toxic at the moment. One problem is that some parts are too delicate, which is reflected in the first three chapters (many descriptions of appearance) and the modifiers in the dialogue parts of other chapters, such as the tone is light, the tone is light, and the tone is flat. In fact, words that have no effect on the character and plot can be omitted. The language is still a little more feminine, the corners of the mouth are often "curved", and the male protagonist's ears are red more often than other female characters.

Very good, I like this kind of novel author who has the awareness of lightning protection and writes in a relaxed way. Overall, it is edible [thoughts] History [laughing and crying]

In the early stage, you spend some time grinding on the mountain, and then turn on the road text mode after descending the mountain. The multiple heroines will definitely accept them all and won't cause any mess. Lou Yao definitely doesn't know how to eat, nor does he pretend to be a pig to eat feed. If you have any comments, please leave a message, thank you. I was also convinced. I was originally writing about the youthful spirit, but why does everyone want to write about your lifeless character? Must it be boring, must it be forbearing, must it be cold? I originally came from Wudi Liushuang, so I have to pay attention to the character's personality, story, transformation and other things. I tried to avoid lightning by all the tags I put in my profile, but I also got into a lot of trouble. I used the harem tag. Some people said that it would be better to give a negative review if it was a single female protagonist, but I didn't say anything because it was okay if he really thought so. I used someone as the background, and I didn't say anything when I gave it four stars because of the facts. But I can't help but write a female-channeled novel. My protagonist's personality is obviously biased towards the young Yang Guo, okay? Yes, yes, you have to kill decisively, you have to be cold-faced, you have to have everyone surrounding you... My evaluation is that The Dragon is a female-channeled novel and the protagonist is too cowardly. The Condor is a female-channeled novel. The protagonist has a strange scent and was bullied in the early stage. Moreover, he is a lonely kind of person. Has my protagonist ever been deflated so far? Didn't even eat it! He often recites female-channeled novels, making it seem like he has read many books. Have you actually read a girl's video, and how many books have you read?

Just read it, there's nothing wrong with it. The male protagonist is cute in the front, and he grows up quickly in the back. It's basically an invincible article. It writes a group portrait of a story. The character description, writing style, and story direction are all very comfortable. The writing has a bit of a literary youth flavor, but it's not a whining. It's a good writing style. The writing style is also relaxed and relaxed, with a touch of Jianghu atmosphere, and it is very powerful in mobilizing readers' emotions. It is indeed Shili's Gold Rush, the highest praise. The main problem is that the previous male protagonists are too young. I feel that these female protagonists really need to be impressed. Also, the update is too slow, so the author has to speed it up.

So far, it seems to be a good martial arts novel, and it follows a refreshing flow. However, I feel that the realm rises too quickly, and the martial arts may collapse a bit later, and it turns into boring daily life, resulting in a hasty ending [plus one on the bookshelf]

What a good book. I haven't seen any serious points so far. The plot is quite coherent. The author has literary talent, but he should talk about it or not. The master should be telegraphed. He is so dazzling at the age of 14.

It's pretty good [laughs evilly], it's not a cliche story. Each character has his or her own fate and calamity, and the daily life is well written. I just don't know how the harem line will develop, but I hope it won't become a repetitive plot like "robbing-imprisonment-robbing-imprisonment" in the heroine novel hh. However, the male protagonist has a good character. At least he is frank in his actions and will not make big mistakes like "concealing things". It feels like there is a lack of process and details in some places. Just like the relationship in the article, it is just mentioned as "gentle and humorous". However, judging from the personality of the male protagonist in the front, it is really hard to see where the humor comes from... The same goes for the subsequent conversations, which are often silent and never a dialogue maker.

It's a very interesting road story, but how does the male protagonist tell it? I always feel that the structure lacks a bit of charm. I don't know if it's because some of the dialogue fragments are too complicated. However, the outline of the storyline is very interesting to read in depth. You can also use AI to polish it appropriately to provide you with some other ideas. I feel that the number of female protagonists should be limited to 5 to 6 at most, otherwise it will be very easy to get tired after reading the later chapters. Master, it would be best if there were interspersed ones in each volume. I wish the author's books will become more and more popular and the scores will be higher and higher!