The Fragrant Allure of Immortals

Okay, straightforward. Grasp human nature without artificial description

Hey, don't tell me, she's pretty good-looking [laughs evilly] I thought it was an imperial letter, but when I looked back I saw it was as plain as water and I didn't eat anything [smile]

It looks great, I haven't seen such smooth rhythm in a long time. This is a novel where the villain has a brain and his combat power is not broken for the time being. Sign up quickly, I want to reward you!

The plot is compact, and the protagonist has an advantage in my opinion. I can add a bit of a badass feel.

It's good-looking, and the heroine is well portrayed, but there are too many characters at once, and some characters are replaced by another one [smile] The front part is good, but the back part is incomprehensible. Several female protagonists have been offline for a while. I don't know what I'm writing.

About why not get the storage bag can be patched. But this point is harmless. The overall narrative rhythm, characterization and writing style are all very good, and the male and female protagonists are all created in the type I like. Come on, author, update fiercely [blowing kiss]

Charming but not coquettish, good

Why are the direct disciples of the sect master in Tianyin and the sect master's daughter in Liuli Mountain so different in realm? They are indeed good friends. How do they play together with an appliance and a host? The sect leader's daughter is so rich. Why can't she buy thunder demon elixirs or thunder demon beasts? Anyway, she can arrange a lot of things. She is rich. Feelings after Chapter 79

The plot is smooth and the content is excellent.

It's not bad, it's a semi-cool novel. It's written in a subtle way, and the protagonist has a lot of little thoughts.