I'm Just a Bystander, Yet I'm Correcting the Main Plot

So far, it's good - it's delicious. [Send heart] [Send heart] But there is still a little problem that needs attention. I always feel that there are shortcomings, well, it is the description of shortcomings, other people's reactions when Xiao Shen changed the node, description of battle damage, etc. Others have the same idea. That time in the library was: change node - discovered - injured - and then It's time to go to sleep, and I've gone over it in one stroke. In fact, this is a place where I can write more, the reaction to subsequent changes, battle damage, etc., And I can also lay out some foreshadowing (oh, I can also make up the word count [get it] [get it]). This is a must for this type of novel, otherwise the plot will feel a bit flat, after all, it is a team comic novel. You can take a brief look at it, and then you will be so inspired that I will update it five times a day (bushi) [please update more] [full] [full]

Alas, I'm halfway through the book. Although I already knew that the protagonist's role was less, I didn't expect it to be so small. After reading more than sixty chapters, it's still like scraps. The protagonist's name appears only a handful of times in each chapter. If you focus on the protagonist's name, you'll be turning the pages. I understand that the author wanted to present more of this comic story, but there was too little writing and ink used to portray the protagonist, which made it a bit tiring to read. And the strange thing is that the character settings in it are actually quite classic, and a lot of words are spent in the article describing their interactions, work, etc., But it just feels like plain water, bland. Maybe there are too many people writing about it, and the ones given are spread out. At least I haven't found a character I really like as of now. However, the advantages are also obvious. The author's writing style is still good, and the setting and plot control are good. Things can also be explained more clearly, and the main line can be advanced more smoothly. The most important thing is that you can see the author's sense of responsibility and creator's love for the characters and the world he wrote. The author is really responsible for his own works and is willing to devote his sincerity to the works. He does not create with the attitude of an assembly line commodity of pre-made dishes. I feel that this is the best place to look and feel.

Recommendation + demining 1. The writing style is like warm water, but not boring. The daily writing is very interesting, and the major plots are quite passionate. 2. The protagonist is completely cold-faced and cute, a calm person, reliable and calm, smart and gentle, and dares to break the rules and resist fate. There are many cool points in the big event (monthly exam) 3. The world consciousness is completely affirmed by the protagonist, especially gentle! It will also filter out bad barrages, making the overall atmosphere of the barrages more friendly. 4. The sense of group portraits is outstanding, the protagonists and other supporting characters are vividly and three-dimensionally created, the world view is very complete, and the overall narrative is relatively grand. One thing that needs to be noted is that there are many plots that transition to daily slapstick, which is indeed very slow, and the protagonist's presence is not very high in the early stage (before chapter 70), because the protagonist does not talk much and spends most of the time "observing" But it got a lot better later on, especially the second monthly exam. I felt so happy going there! I still want to show my holiness before a good person😋 I feel like the more I write, the better I get. I'm really looking forward to the future. It shouldn't be that easy to change nodes to save others. In fact, I kind of want to suffer the consequences of the battle. (Also, I often write down the content of the class. The settings are very detailed, but it can be a bit boring. I think you can just take a look at these things.)

Such an interesting book, I like it very much... World Consciousness, you are so well-behaved and cute, and Xiao Zhi, you are so cute just like this! I really like Jiang Weiran. Can you and Xiao Zhi talk more about cross talk? I'd love to hear it! The interaction between the threesome is also very interesting! Now with Xiaozhao's six-member team, it's even more amazing! Sickly good, sickly delicious! The dull yet noisy college life is what I like the most...

I tied it all at once. It's pretty good. Overall, the progress is slow. It's not as intense as other similar books with many big events. It's relatively bland. It feels like it consists of many small daily routines. The progress and rhythm are acceptable in my opinion. But the characterization of the characters is not particularly strong. I hope some small details can be added or how each character reacts after experiencing a certain event. I feel that this will be better. The overall feeling to me is very light, like drinking a bowl of plain water with a bit of flavor, but this white water is quite delicious. Overall, apart from being happy for the protagonist's little things, there are no particularly big emotional fluctuations for me. But I can give five stars. First, it is a habit of mine. I basically give five stars to all books. Second, the writing is indeed relatively good, but it is only more than 100 points. I hope the author can continue to improve and write more in the future, which will be more attractive and impactful. I wish my writing will get better and better in the future

This is a group portrait article. It is lively, has a lot of joy, and there are also places that can be explored, making readers want to continue reading. Just like the protagonist's name, Guan Zhi, he also has special powers. He is a spectator, like the wind. He has a low sense of presence and speaks very little, but his existence will always be remembered. Because of the existence of the protagonist, the protagonist group is lively but does not feel noisy, does not disturb the eyes, and does not make the mood impetuous. Xiao Shen is very stable, making readers feel stable and peaceful, which is quite good. Some of the plots are quite gripping. We are readers. Don't look outside the box. Let us have a God's perspective. Hey, it's so gripping. Very nice, looking forward to further development

The subject matter is so new, and everyone in the main cast has a shot. The characters are very rich in personality! ! I want to laugh when I think of Pei Zhixu's yellow hair (꒪⌓꒪) Shen Guanzhi is so awesome and smart! Jiang Weiran and Shen Guanzhi are so cute and world-conscious. So cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute, so cute...(˘ ³˘)♥٩(๛ ˘ ³˘)۶♥

. It looks good. I haven't written a long review, but Xiao Zhi is really good. The wind type is super handsome. 𖥦 ˂ I particularly like the wind type. Xiao Zhi has a warm pomelo feel. ₍♡♡₎Damn it, it's been so long and it's still so good ദ്ദി˶>𖥦<)✧ (It's so good...) Don't be shy, stay awake... As for the plot, I didn't watch much (not enough, please give me feedback). It's not forced to modify the main plot. This is great. Two of you, World Consciousness and Xiao Zhi, are very cute (´▽`ʃ♡ƪ). Xiao Zhi's dual abilities of wind and probability are very cool. The combination of this is so cool. Xiao Zhi, Xiao Zhi, we like you! Academy, Guixu, there are many characters, spread out the package and look good,,, a big orange plot point and then a forum is really pleasant, although I am very fond of beautiful women, but I have to be good. ꒦ິ^꒦ິ (Bu'shi has a flag feel at the beginning),,,,, and I feel very alienated from the original protagonist and the rest of the group. There is a paragraph saying that letting people follow comics on forums with high expectations and disappointments will hurt themselves. This point is extremely clever... "A small knife makes you happy, but a big knife hurts your body." Come on, author /Let me show you a kaomoji: ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ـ♡ ﮩ٨ـﮩﮩ٨ / If you like watching Gao Zhi's mysterious person, feel free to enter (๑◕τ￩๑)b

It's good-looking. Although the world view may have a knife, it gives me a feeling of being smooth and smooth. What I really like about the character of the protagonist is that he doesn't care even if the sky is falling. The characters are also very distinct and basically have roles. When divided equally, the role of the protagonist is relatively small. However, the author's writing style is quite good, and it can be seen that he put a lot of effort into writing. Come on, it's just that the update is slow [sending heartfelt wishes]

The protagonist is really super cute, and the cold-faced cuteness is the best! ! Please read this book carefully, it's really great! ! The only drawback is that the author updates too slowly and it takes too long. The author should update quickly! ! !