The Manga Changed Because of Me, but I'm Not in It

Five stars, but I have to scold you first: the abominable dish name is Xiaohuo. Why do you make me stay up until two o'clock in the morning? At two o'clock in the morning, I deplore the American schedule. But fate brings us together? I planned to "go to bed after reading this chapter", but the protagonist made a beautiful reversal and dumped me like a fish, and then irresponsibly left me awake all night long with revenge.(￣へ￣ )┍ But Brother La Tiao's setting is really attractive. . Latiao seems to be your anchor. While he was calculating all the plans, he said harshly, "I'm just an ordinary comic lover passing by", haha. Who ordinary fan can play the plot in a roundabout way? (So ​​cute. Although the system and the original plot are useless) But his high intelligence is not suspended, and every reversal is traceable. I even went back to look for clues and found that the boy Nana had laid the clue long ago. It was me who was blind. Eh. Why did I pick up a new book again? This foreshadowing is like bread crumbs scattered all over the floor. I have already started to pick up clues. (Author, I heard that someone updated 100 chapters and gained 1 million fans. Can you learn from it? ⊙᎔⊙ Also, oh yes. It is rare that the supporting characters in the author's works are not "human figures serving the protagonist". Each little guy has his own little abacus and shining point. The name of Xiaohuo is very good. Everyone has his own obsession and weakness, especially this brother Hao: Do you have a problem? On the other hand, maybe it's due to the author's hand addiction? There seem to be too many non-but sentences in the text, which breaks the immersion. It seems that I have gone through AI polishing, but I am not sure about criticizing others. The plot outline is quite novel, so I should practice my writing skills. All in all, all in all. Well, five-star encouragement for the new book! If you want the kind of novel that makes you want to shake the author's ears and ask about the next chapter after reading it, this is it. Qi Jisheng, I have already spoken. Those who love spicy strips will not be too bad. Woo. One o'clock in the morning, be more rigorous

I am writing this book review purely to prevent the author from thinking that I am giving up. Dear big brother: Your dear reader is going to raise a book because she is going to school 😄 (No hehe, I tied it in a few hours. I'm so awesome. Please keep updating) Of course, such a delicious book should be promoted more, so that everyone can taste this shocking deliciousness together (*˘˘*). .:*♡ Brother Latiao is very cute and smart! Shen Shen Shen Ling order order order order order order order order order order orders orders orders, I just have to study (go to school), it's not like I don't love you anymore (they say love is where the money is, so I'll show you an advertisement for the teacher, I love you so much (´∀`)♡ Request again, please don't stop updating!!!!! (இωஇ ) Never!!! Readers who love you admire you I also want to reply (try to activate the skill "Readers want it, readers may get it" to initiate a cute attack (๓´˘`๓)

The book is super super beautiful!!! The protagonist is called Qi Jisheng, he loves to eat spicy sticks, and he is called spicy sticks brother. Is he smiling? [Forgot the name] During the battle, let your teammates... [No spoilers? Hehe, I'm not good at expressing it so I won't write it down] was sent to the broadcast room, and then the protagonist used super cool powers to solve the problem of Smiley Face [? ] But the protagonist also fainted because of this, and later went to the hospital. The protagonist's friend brought spicy noodles to see the protagonist, and then... [Omitted] Mentioned that the smiling face will come again. The protagonist's monthly exam is about the smiling face that happened in his alma mater. The protagonist will enter reincarnation. How will the protagonist crack the conspiracy of the smiling face? If you want to see more, go and watch it ꒰˶>ᗜ<˶꒱

Ahhhhhhhhhhh this book is really all about my XP. I wonder how there is a book that completely matches my thoughts... Every setting is the kind that I like very much. It is the perfect XP work in my mind... I will never scold you again, foreign persimmon. Thank you for recommending this book to me, old man. It's amazing. The logic flow is super solid. The group portraits are also very well written. It feels like a storm is about to come. Brother Latiao has a kind of personality charm... Even the settings such as super powers and smiling robes are very good. Boss, I will always follow you... Come and see. Come and see...

Wow, it was very well written. I had to write a long review to support it after I finished it late at night! The following is an evaluation of the progress so far (may contain minor spoilers): Let's talk about the advantages first. 1⃣ I think it is rare among works of the same type to be more serious and drama-oriented. I personally prefer this kind of more serious writing. The protagonist is not so out of touch. Each story unit has clear boundaries and relevance. It reads very smoothly and makes people want to read. 2⃣ Each character has its own characteristics and group portraits. The developed characters are easy to stereotype and look thin, but at least for now everyone has their own characteristics, and the protagonist is not the only one who is smart, the others are mentally retarded, the supporting characters are also pretty smart, Otoyu, Jiang, and Brother Hao, I like them all, and I can also see their youthful side, everyone from Class F, Shanyi High School None of the NPCs have been mentioned at all, and even the hand gesture dancer classmate became the boss. Who would have thought of the reason why bad things have to be bad? I think the character is very good, and the author is quite careful in naming haha; the plot concept of unit 3⃣ is very good, the starting point of the monsters who compete/pursue perfection is very good, and it is very close to reality. The sense of substitution can be regarded as reflecting part of reality; 4⃣ There is a clear distinction between perspectives. There are obvious differences between the perspective of different characters, such as the perspective of the protagonist of the comic, the time of Jiang, and the perspective of the protagonist of this article. The information gap brought by these perspectives caused them to make different actions, and finally led to a certain situation, which was quite interesting. Then I will also write about the things that I think were not handled well: 1⃣ The forum and the rhythm of the plot are not very well grasped. I feel that maybe I want to write more completely. The main character of this article is mentally trapped in a fantasy world and it is inconvenient to write, so I wrote back to the forum after writing the main plot for a long time. The emotional feedback from the readers of the forum is not so timely. I have to recall it when I read it, okay Switch a little more frequently. For example, I feel that I can cut off the scene with the man in the mall. Saving the comic protagonist can be considered a small climax, and then write an extra to see what happened to the comic protagonist before to highlight the highlight of the protagonist in this article; 2⃣The ability distinction between monsters is not so clear. Can the shadow beast be controlled and recognized like the mother goddess? And it's a newly discovered monster, okay... 3⃣The supernatural organization is a bit incompetent in writing, maybe it hasn't been developed yet, but why do you feel that worshiping gods is so powerful? At present, it seems that the usefulness of the supernatural organization is not as good as that of the protagonist. Where is the tall man who is holding on when the sky falls?! 4⃣The current length of the article is not long, so I have not felt the power of the outline, nor have I felt that the recycled foreshadowing is interlocking. But in short, it is still well written. You can see from my rating that I plan to continue to follow up. The relationship between the protagonist of this article and other people is really delicious😋Writer, please work hard🤲

Daduo will update more, it is very beautiful, the group portraits are very delicious, I like it very much anytime, the friendship bond and so on are simply fairy tales, so I am really looking forward to the subsequent plot. I feel that the plot now has a faint feeling of wanting to put a knife. I am looking forward to it, but maybe it is because reading with an empty heart these days will give me a faint feeling, but I really like DaDa's articles. Please give me more [send my heart] [add one to the bookshelf] [please update]

It's really good, but sometimes it feels a bit AI-like? It was originally a good substitute, but in the end, it forced me back to reality. I felt like I wanted to hit someone. Everything else is very good. Come on, author!!!

! The freshly released book is so sad! Ahem, cough, cough. What do you think, author? 😳😳😳 It looks good. I hope it doesn't lose its fighting power. It gives me the feeling that the protagonist is the strongest this time and the others are just minions.

Oh no, no, no, no, no, this delicious novel has just passed 100 chapters. If the author doesn't work hard now, when will the novel be ready? I will add another chapter today and another chapter tomorrow. It will not be a problem to get a score of nine. Goddess, I love you [KISS]!!! Xiao Qi is so charming. In addition, I support Brother Hao to be the main palace. He is the best in the world in the gravity department and all master nb. My name is unquestionable. The people in the forum in this article seem to be a bit malicious. I need your guidance on what I care about. No explanation. I hope the future plots won't be too harsh or vulgar but I love to eat. Is Brother Qi happy?

Good looking. . . . I like it very much. . . . . After reading books for so many years, I really rarely leave comments. Author, your writing is so good, but the only painful thing is that it is not finished. . . I like to read it to the end, but sometimes it feels bad when I read it. The author wrote this one really well. I have been reading shounen manga type novels for so long, and yours is one of my favorites. . . . So I beg you, author, please update it quickly😭 I still want to read it, but I haven't seen enough. . . . I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see... Our baby Qi Jisheng should be seen, we should be liked by others🖤🖤🖤🖤Who wouldn't like baby Qi Jisheng... It's best to be surrounded by a group of gravity systems😍😍😍🤫🙏🙏👉👈 Well, the protagonist is finished in this life. . .