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The character design of the protagonist is okay. He is cold on the surface but complains on the inside. He is a bit salty and is still a white-haired person. But I feel that the relationship between the protagonist and the original protagonist, um, developed a bit quickly and they became friends very quickly. I prefer to take it slow. The system can also open cheats, which is good, and it is a regular channel. I can see that the author has written it very carefully.

It's good to watch, it's tied in one go, but it's too small. It's only chapter 35 so far, and it feels like there are foreshadowings everywhere. Xiao Wen's identity is also very fascinating. The little system mentioned that the ability level rises very fast even if it's cheating, and that strange jade pendant. My wife's "no CP" probably means that everyone has no CP, it seems to have a CP flavor. I still think that Shen Chuan's feelings for Xiao Wen came very suddenly. If there is a little sun, shouldn't normal people be very gloomy when encountering that kind of thing? Why did he directly become the Little Sun? Of course, my wife may have her own intentions, so I will just wait and see. The last link is a symbolic reminder, oh oh oh he is still a baby 😢

It's so beautiful🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women look crazy💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock of vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘It's God, it's my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I'm on the 20th floor The tango danced on the balcony😮 made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I couldn't stop crying. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression😋 is an alarm clock for vegetative people😨It was so cute that tears flowed from the corners of my mouth and flooded into the Qiantang River. It sounded so good🥰It is God, my rose, which illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful.

It's so beautiful🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women look crazy💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock of vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘It's God, it's my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I'm on the 20th floor The tango danced on the balcony😮 made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I couldn't stop crying. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression😋 is an alarm clock for vegetative people😨It was so cute that tears flowed from the corners of my mouth and flooded into the Qiantang River. It sounded so good🥰It is God, my rose, which illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful. It's tied. In fact, after reading it, you can feel that the author's writing style is not very good. I feel very contradictory in some places. For example, some key points are not written in place, or some very passionate places feel very bland and have no feeling to me. There was also the place where they were injured, and they were rescued later, but how did the protagonist stay intact in a few days (it gave me the feeling, and other original protagonists) and sat in the dessert shop chatting with the teacher. He was on the verge of death. No matter how fast people with super powers can recover, they can't recover so quickly. This is a very contradictory point.

The novels written by the author are really beautiful, relaxed and cheerful, and every character in them is very unique. People like me who love reading novels are so lucky. It's really hard to believe that this is just the first time a new author writes a novel✧₍^˶-˕ -˵^₎✧ The author's writing is really invincible and beautiful. Don't think I'm here to comment. Click on my homepage and you'll know that I've read more than 6,000 hours of novels using this Tomato account. Trust me, it's true. The novel written by the author is really beautiful ꒰˶>ᗜ<˶꒱ And I really like the author's writing style. Each character has its own characteristics. The author even introduces the background of each character in the form of self-introduction. There is no heavy feeling. Everyone is relaxed and cheerful. The author's writing style is really happy. The author's writing style and painting style are so relaxed and cheerful. I highly recommend it! ٩(*´◒`*)۶

(Not anti-black) I feel that some parts should have been modified with AI (I should have used beanbags). Maybe I just felt that way when I read it. I just felt like AI for a while, and it felt like it was written by a real person for a while (don't scold me) (I haven't finished reading it, and I don't know if I will continue to use AI for modification in the end). I hope the author will just give up AI and continue to write by himself, because what he writes is many times better than AI (AI has a human-machine feel) Finally, I also know that a low rating will lower the author's rating, so I gave it a five-star rating 😄

Xiao Wen is really cute, like a salted fish who is forced to go to work. Moreover, the bond between Xiao Wen and the protagonist group is very deep. I didn't expect that the protagonist group would come up with such a method to form a team with Xiao Wen. Then the latest chapter describes Xiao Wen's exposed necklace and the actions of the woman in black robe. I feel that Xiao Wen's identity should not be simple. It should have a lot to do with this divine descent. Combined with the name God General, I can speculate that this Xiao Wen may be the god that God General is waiting for. Finally, I think this book is very good-looking. The author should not abandon the article and keep reading. ❤️❤️❤️

Let me give you five stars first to encourage the author to fight. After all, I am a novice🥰 I've seen chapter thirteen. Next is the problem I feel: the relationship between the protagonist and the original protagonist group develops too quickly. In just thirteen chapters, the relationship goes from being emotionless to "must save them". It's too fast... And the chatting between the characters also feels very stiff. "Laughing loudly" and "laughing so hard that the screen is full of laughter" should not appear in the book. It will have a very stiff feeling. Then there is the battle. The battle of the original protagonist group is a bit sloppy and general, and there is no impression. You can write down some details and write it down in detail, or you can find some battle clips from good works to learn from. Also, if you are a novice author, don't write too many characters in the protagonist group. Generally, two or three original protagonists are enough. For novice authors, writing too many characters will make it difficult to describe, and often cannot describe their characteristics. Generally, the configuration of the original protagonist team is: upright little sun + cold and careful + team think tank. If there is one more, it will be awkward and strange, and it may become a background board, which will worsen the reader's perception. I won't comment on the rest yet because I haven't finished reading them yet. But you are a novice and you can learn the above. I am very optimistic about you! Come on come on! 🥰😋

I don't know how to put it, but it's a little uncomfortable to watch, and it may be my own fault. I feel that the author's writing style has room for improvement. The development between the protagonist and the protagonist group is a bit fast, and the image of the protagonist is also a bit fast, but I feel that it is okay if it is fast. I don't know how to describe this feeling (personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it)

The whole thing is super nice, but there are a lot of typos in people's names. I don't know which one is the correct one for a while, which kind of affects the reading. Everything else is pretty good, the characters and plot are pretty good.