A Black Who Wants to Be in Hufflepuff

Based on the number of dark wizards, Hufflepuff should be the most numerous. The wizarding world is not as tender and affectionate as fairy tales, and it can eat people. You entered Hogwarts Technical School at an age when you should be studying, and after seven years of study, if you didn't get any advanced certificates or develop the network of rich second-generation classmates. Then you will face unemployment after graduation. Yes, there are only so many jobs available in the magic world, and family and friends must be given priority. At this time you will find that you can do nothing but magic. You also can't show off your power in front of ordinary people (Secrecy Law). People have to eat. Apart from chewing the old, you find that the only choices left for you are potion experiencers, World of Warcraft abnormal transportation drivers, and uncommon goods inspection-free experts. Offers include troubleshooters for mutual aid organizations, underground treasure diggers, curse experimenters, and scapegoat professionals. These magic spells and methods required for daily work can completely transform you from a white rabbit on campus to a crocodile in Knockturn Alley.

The writing is pretty good. From the perspective of science popularization, I can see that the author is really serious about it. However, some chapters go too far in popularizing science. A small amount of plot is found in a large amount of popular science. After all, anyone who comes to HP Second Creation will understand some background stories. Too much science popularization feels a bit overwhelming, but overall it is still a good HP Second Creation article. Good luck to the author.

The writing is more detailed and flows daily. It currently has a score of 8.1, And I haven't found any outliers. It's worth a read. Author: I want a royal, beautiful and sassy senior Farley, whether it's a family marriage, can I meet my requirements?

The writing is OK, although it may have some AI polishing, but not much. The author also has his own ideas, not just following the plot. I deducted one star because I think the writing is a bit wordy, with long paragraphs of background and setting instructions. This is why I think AI is involved. But despite its flaws, it's still a HP fan that's worth watching.

How to say it? I think the author wrote that the heroine includes Zhang Qiu and others, but not Ginny, so he chose a few ugly ones. Zhang Qiu is an Asian. According to European and American aesthetics, if they think they are beautiful, they should be ugly [Chigua]

All I can say is that the author wrote very carefully. For this carefulness, I currently score 4 points [laughter] [like]. Let's see what happens next. No, [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] I really have never seen Hermione being assigned to Hufflepuff. I must give this author a creative point. I hope it won't end badly or be cut in half or something.

There is too much popular science and the author has to say, so look for the plot in the popular science. The author is very rigorous, but this makes people worry about whether the author will sacrifice the novel's pleasure for the sake of rigor and rationality. For example, some heroines will not be accepted, or the supporting characters will be given CP, or the protagonist will be deflated, or the supporting characters will highlight the protagonist as the background. For those who strictly study the party, the probability of this happening is very high

Among most Harry Potter fanfics I've read, this one can be said to be 99% rare. First of all, the author's supplementary settings alone are difficult for most fan fiction writers to match. Let's put it this way, Harry Potter written by jk is a story, mainly based on plot, and this book not only has its own original plot, but also completes the world view. It has written not only a story, but also constructed a complete magical world from the side. Although it only has a few hundred chapters at present, it can be said that the future can be expected. Then comes the character creation. The author should be a senior fan of the original work, and he should be writing based on the character settings of the original work. The most prominent one is Zhang Qiu. After all, the Harry Potter movies did change part of the plot, but it also affected some of the characters. I hope the author can give them a good ending. Finally, the author's writing style is very good, but I personally think that his logic should be unmatched by most fan fiction writers. I won't spoil too much about the protagonist's character. You just need to know that he is a semi-invincible growth-type character. If you like, you can take a look.

It is a rare novel that changes the branches of Hermione and Neville. The protagonist is also in Hufflepuff, which makes the quality of Hufflepuff students become the highest among the four major colleges. I also like Hufflepuff very much, so I give it a high score. In addition, since it is known that Zhang Qiu is the heroine, and Hermione and Ron have not crossed paths, then who will Hermione be with? I am very curious [exploration] Okay, I read the introduction again and found out that there are multiple female protagonists, which is good. Will there be a Shura field later?

In fact, I feel that the writing is quite good, and it can be seen in many places that the author has really put his thoughts and efforts into it. The only drawback is that the update is a bit slow. It has only been a day since I read it, and I will soon be able to keep up with the big army.