Genshin Impact Transmigration: Becoming the Puppet's Personal Mechanic

Yes, the emotional line is not too abrupt, the daily life is very interesting, and the character design of a tsundere is perfectly written. There is no plot in other novels where the heroine is left aside because she travels to various countries. Good review! As for other parts besides the emotional line... I can only say that it's hard to comment.

The puppet is the crystallization of the Narcissus Cross: the image comes from Marianne, the creation and intelligence come from Alan, the inherited world style comes from Rene, and the character of never giving up until the goal is achieved is most like Jacob. (It looks good, and I recognize the author's cooking skills!)

It seems good so far, but it's time to change the name of Sandone. After all, the relationship has become closer. It should be changed from puppet to "Sandogne". I just saw Daxumi. It is unknown whether the name will be changed later. Hakimimo North and South Mung Beans

It feels like there are not many people and there are no comments. The author really uses his love to generate electricity. This Wenba tastes weird, but I can eat it all the time. It feels like it's hard to find an obvious turning point The main plot is very clear: solve the problem, get kicked out by the rich, get kicked out by the doctor Pretty good The emotional line goes back and forth without much change. It's a matter of language style. But I can sleep on a bed behind the braised pork belly with pickled vegetables, which is a big improvement. Hey Formula tsundere

It's quite good-looking, Sandone's tsundere is very three-dimensional, and the male protagonist's outlook on life is also very upright. The two of them seem to be a perfect match, mainly because of their sweet emotional lines. Others, well, this book is a fanfic after all. It is difficult to adapt the game into a book, and the world view is really not easy to control. Although the world view of this book is not so grand, at least it has not collapsed and can be eaten normally (it feels like it is written with a flavor of MiHoYo. For example, in the last battle in Fontaine, the traveler discovered the purpose of the male protagonist, but after discovering this process, you can feel a flavor of MiHoYo. It is a bit too smooth, or the difficulty is a bit too deliberate)

The writing style is very delicate, and the emotional lines are written very well [crying] I am fascinated by it as a single reviewer. I read the most exciting chapters over and over several times, and it progresses layer by layer, which makes me feel very immersed [like] [like] [like]

I have read all the contents of the current serialization. It is so delicious. I will never read Daozi articles again. Congratulations to the author for breaking through the 200 chapter mark. Unfortunately, the rating is too low. Please work harder. The rating was 7.3 Some time ago and is now 7.4. I have to summon Slice to help.

The protagonist does not understand the original plot until the puppets appear. In order to create plot conflicts, the plot of this book writes that the Fontaine Curse disappears in the puppet emotional module notes, and the puppet emotional module will also disappear (patch: possible), resulting in a change in the protagonist's attitude (to save the puppets), which can be regarded as a second creation that is beneficial to the plot.

The general logic of the book is okay, but the shortcoming is that it is not refreshing and sweet enough when the protagonist returns to Zhidong and is dismissed until the treasure thief is caught. Another thing is that I personally think that if the setting of "God loves the people" is inserted, then the Ice God will not be neutral or supportive of the economic station of the rich, and it will probably not be allowed. Therefore, the rich use the economic lifeline, and the people are safe. When threatening the protagonist and Sandonne, it should be solved directly by reporting it to the Queen. Not to mention that God loves the people, just say that Ice God will not do this if he knows that Rock God is still alive, unless she wants her subordinates to be killed. The protagonist has such a high IQ in time travel, so she should be able to think of it, so there is no need to worry. This is one of the few points in this book that I think is poisonous. Overall, it is very good.

This book is really good, especially when it describes Lu Bu's battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. But Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxus guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. , But I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are also very good.