Genshin Impact: It All Started When a Boar Ran Me Over

It looks good, and Golden Finger is quite novel. There are a few points that I think can be improved: 1. The protagonist keeps doing weird things too often, especially with the main characters. You can be a little more steady. The protagonist should have his own ideas and not be led by the character all the time. Daily activities can be fun and adjust the atmosphere, but when doing tasks, I still think it is better to be more serious and steady. Especially when I confront Kaiya, he is very cool and refreshing, and even expresses what I have always felt (the first time I met Kaiya did make me uncomfortable). Don't laugh all the time, and laugh at everything. 2. There are too many Genshin Impact memes and they are too dense, especially with Paimon, as if they are posting posts with Genshin Impact memes. 3. The sword-controlling skills are so cool, but they are not reflected at all. It looks very dry, and one is chirping. Come on, author!

Summary: Genshin Impact To put it simply, the protagonist seems to be a Taoist priest. The setting of gaining abilities by unlocking illustrated books and drawing cards is indeed an interesting setting here. It also satisfies the elements of collecting and drawing cards. This sense of accomplishment is indeed a refreshing point. Then there is the plot. At the beginning, we follow the main line, pave the way for the protagonist's character and growth through branch lines, and then wait until it is "enough" to officially start the development of the plot. But it should be noted that the protagonist's role may be better if there is more foreshadowing, such as using small things to bring it out or other things as hooks. For example, when expressing opinions, the part like Qiuqiu Renren is good. Next is the portrayal of the characters of Genshin Impact. Some of them are good, and some of them are a little bit bad, but it is not a big problem and it does not reach the level of OOC. Generally speaking, it is a decent Genshin Impact fanfic, with no big problems in plot and setting. The writing style also tends to be within the range that I personally think is quite good. This is indeed better than many others of the same type. At the same time, there is no clear emotional line. This is indeed one of my favorite points. I do not like Genshin Impact fans who have a clear cp direction from the beginning. This book has done a good job in this regard, so let's stop there. There will be CP in the future, that will happen later. Personally, I still like to lay out the plot more in the early and middle stages. It will be much better to slowly lay out the emotional line in the middle and late stages. Finally, through the book title, introduction and writing style, I personally think that the protagonist can be given a label or a cute setting, such as the same type, Bai Guo, Luo's story book and other character characteristics. For example, give the protagonist a setting of being hit, Mondstadt's wild boar, Fontaine's trap, Inazuma's demon. If there are no major problems in the follow-up, having a distinctive and interesting feature can still attract non-readers.

The key to my giving 5 stars is. The protagonist's thoughts and values ​​will not follow those of the author of the original company. They have their own independent values. As early as the release of the game Genshin Impact, I couldn't agree with the thoughts shown in it, but this novel expressed this opinion for me.

It's more casual, and the bond with the protagonist is not very deep, and it's not like walking around with a dog like a female traveler.

It's okay if there is no heroine

I feel that the writing is quite good, but I am afraid that by the time someone reads this book, the author will not know how long ago he has been gone.

It's pretty good, but there are too few chapters.

What's more attractive is the shaping of the NPCs and the protagonist's own thoughts. There are a lot of stereotypes in the character design, and some female characters are inexplicably shy. It's still very beautiful. Teacher, you must work hard.

Comrade, you have to work hard, there is not enough to eat 🤔🤔🤔

I haven't read it yet, but here are the good reviews. Please pay attention to your comments. Shennong is about to set off.