The Outcast: A Real Game

I didn't tense up when Su Nuo's finger came out. It's so pleasant. I'll probably have a hard time forgetting you. The author, the strongest Lao Tianshi in history VS the strongest Wang Wu in modern times. Facing the Lao Tianshi who has both life and death, a born strong man, the resulting loneliness, what kind of existence is waiting for him? It's so delicious. I'm full [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face] The weather outside the window∽🎶 Wang Wu: I really didn't expect you to get to this point. Zhang Chulan, the third level of reverse rebirth and Qi body source, combined with the golden light spell and thunder method. Just like your expression~🎶 The machine beast and the big-eared thief corpse puppet are on both sides of Wang Wu. The strongest in history VS the strongest now. Wang Wu successfully defeated the old master. Zhang Chulan: I'll give you a chance to return to Trinity Gate and be punished, but you won't die.

The plot of the protagonist of the game is really well written. This light yet humorous writing style is very readable and not tiring. I tied it in one breath and now two chapters a day are not enough. And it is true that compared to the game plot, the realistic part is a bit boring, but overall it is still very interesting! And can the author create a story without cp and heroine? I feel that the combination of Wang Wu and Zhang Jiu is already perfect. The other female characters currently appearing are not very popular.

OK, brothers, after reading the comments, let's briefly talk about it [thinking] [thinking] [thinking]. The first is the issue of male and female protagonists. There is no heroine, whether it is Zhang Jiu or Wang Wu, there is no heroine. I have read many books, but without exception, I can't write emotional dramas and have little experience in this field. Therefore, the female characters who appear in this book all appear to promote the development of the plot. After all, if they were all men, it would always feel weird. Of course, sometimes I get stuck and I have no choice but to drag these characters out to make the plot fluffy. (Ps: I respect women, understand women, tolerate women, and wish I could become a woman) The second is the reality part. When I first started reading this book, it was entirely because I was reading novels on Tomato and saw novels of the same type. My brain suddenly twitched and I suddenly had an inspiration☝️ So there was no outline or anything like that (I felt like fans didn't need an outline). Later, I saw other people writing about reality, and then I crossed the river by feeling the stones. As a result, when writing about reality, I accidentally substituted part of my own unlucky life, which caused bad feelings for some readers. All right. Sometimes after completing several tasks in the game plot, I get stuck, and I have no choice but to pull out the real-life plot [shy] Result, result, result, when I wrote the seventy or eighty chapters, I clearly felt something was wrong. Looking back, I couldn't change it. I could only try to reduce the reality in the subsequent content, or make the reality a little more interesting. But the main body is still in the alien world. The third thing. This book has been written for two months so far. When I first came up with the title of the book, it didn't work out well. During the verification period, it only received 3,000 reads. The first release coincided with the May Day holiday, and May happened to be the month when AI is most rampant. [Pouts] So this book has never been available, costing more than ten yuan a day. Fortunately, the other data in this book are good. Later, I started a book test of 200,000 words and prepared five book titles, just in time for Children's Day. (Oh, what a bad luck) After the best book titles were released on May 31st, there were more than 2,000 bookstores every day, which was slightly better than the first month. In fact, to a certain extent, it can be considered a failure in the book test. [Punch hard] But this book still needs to be finished. When I started this book, I had not written for nearly a year, so it was a bit unfamiliar. Now, when writing fan fiction, I practice writing skills on the one hand, and plot plot on the other, laying a solid foundation for future writing. So be it. If you have anything to ask, you can leave a message directly in this book review and I will reply as soon as I see it. [Blowing kiss]

It's very good, novel, and I love watching it. One suggestion: Can the real-life plot be reduced a little? Everyone should watch Under One Man, not the revival of spiritual energy. In reality, the woman is a bit redundant. Although I don't care, some people should be uncomfortable with it. After all, some people adhere to the principle of not watching if there is a woman. To be honest, the real-life plot is a bit cliche, but it still deserves a higher score. Come on [blow a kiss]

I personally give it a score of 7.4. One of the bad points is that the protagonist does not know the information about the period of time Wang Wu spent without being possessed. I hope that an action log can be added to let the protagonist know this part of the information. Otherwise, the subsequent plot may easily collapse. There is another person who hopes not to accept girls. Although the man named Song is a negative person, if the relationship between the two parties is not handled well, it can easily become a poisonous point. The overall evaluation is food and grass, with good potential.

It's really fun to watch [laughs] It's hilarious. The plot of the one-person world where the protagonist plays the "game" is fun to watch. The shortcoming is that the plot of the protagonist's own world is a bit boring. It's not that it's not boring, but the plot itself is thin and boring. Although the main focus is also on the plot of the one-person world, I still hope to add more. As for the storyline of the protagonist, I don't see much charm at the moment.

It's not bad. It doesn't just follow the original animation timeline, which is a good point. Strictly speaking, the dual protagonists of this book, or the behind-the-scenes/villain in the box type (just talking about style) "game" world feeds back reality, and reality helps the "game". At present, there is a bit too much writing in the real world, but it is still acceptable. Although I said I wanted to use the female tenant (I didn't remember the name) to praise the male protagonist for getting stronger and now being awesome, but it felt like the opposite, and it felt like I wanted to force the two of them to get together. Don't force most of the real plot to be tied to her, if you don't plan to sell CP. Also, the author gives me the feeling that he is not very good at writing about emotions. Wang Wu's colleague (can't remember) unless she has a heavy proportion/foreshadowing in the follow-up. It feels a bit "weird" (?) That she always appears from strange places, like the protagonist of the Tianxiahui celebration party who wants to take her with her and transfer her to the headquarters. She is usually bickering + caring. I can feel that I want to push this pair. After all, normal people would not take someone with them, even if they have a good relationship with them, to a large event celebration banquet (except for relatives), and they have wanted to take them with them many times. As for the "game" world, there is currently no problem. By the way, can't you change the title to something else that's interesting and funny? This book has been on my page many times, just because the title has never been clicked on.

It's very interesting. It's one of the better-looking fanfics written recently. Whether it's the protagonist's calm fighting feeling when he rises, or Wang Wu's own cowardice, it's all very funny, and you can see the growth trajectory of the protagonist (Wang Wu), and I'm looking forward to the next plot.

Invincible is so good-looking, and his entire plot is completely divorced from the original work. Do you know how rare this kind of fanfic is? ! ! ! I've read a lot of fics before, and they basically follow the route of the original animation, and then end at the latest updated chapter point. Because it is a bit difficult to create a purely original battle plot without being OOC. But I have read dozens of chapters in this article, and most of them are original plots. It's really rare. Very fresh! ! ! Come on, author, this book shouldn't have such a low score. Why is it so low? Who is giving low marks? Were you persecuted by the studio? It seems that this is not a book that can be produced by a studio! Looks good, I tied it in one breath. Because it is the protagonist who controls Xiao Wang's body, the protagonist and Xiao Wang create the effect of "teasing and complimenting" in cross talk. Xiao Wang would be a bitch from time to time. It's not against the rules at all, it's really funny. I hope the author can keep writing. I really don't understand why the rating is so low. It is definitely a high-scoring work in my mind.

(♥∀♥) It's good-looking. It's not like most of them follow the protagonist now. We Wang Wu are really strong.