One Piece: Nami, I Have to Control You Now!

It looks good. Focus on the world of pirates and don't write too much about the real world. Many books about this subject are addicted to the real world 😫😫. The writing of pirate world is very interesting. I hope the author can work hard 😘😘😘 just don't interrupt the update 🤭🤭

The plot is very smooth. There are no tricks and no misfortunes. Pure comedy with an unparalleled lawn-mowing plot. I am looking forward to seeing Nami defeat the three seafood generals. Then mow the grass at the Battle of the Top. I hope the author doesn't let the protagonist know that this is not a game. I can't accept falling in love or the protagonist's mother's heart will not cut grass in the future.

This is what real players should do, stripping off clothes manually and randomly playing around with the whole thing. There is no small poisonous point of overindulging in the plot and committing the plot of helping others. It is purely about strength. People skip the plot and just want to have fun. The fun factor is full. The forty chapters of Seedlings are currently very enjoyable. I hope to keep writing at the same level. After a break of updating for a few days, finally a special pirate article is gone?

I give it 5 stars. It's a good pirate story. It's not good to take away Nami's power when you don't control her. At least leave the boost to Nami to protect herself. I can't even imagine that I will be able to reach the general level in the future. Nami becomes an ordinary person once the protagonist is offline.

The writing is very interesting. There is nothing toxic so far. I just hope that there won't be any plots in the future where the protagonist loses his horse and loses his position. The author has cut off the book. I had a bad feeling since the author made excuses to delay the update bit by bit. I didn't expect it to be true. It's a pity that the writing is quite good. In my heart, it is at least 8.5.

I have finished reading the latest chapter. The viewing experience is good. The writing is smooth and the logic is rigorous. At least the current content is like this. I can look forward to the future. The protagonist controls Nami as a player through a computer game, but does not know that the computer is actually a real pirate world, so he can write a new story and fill his regrets. The setting is very interesting. Let me talk about the shortcomings I feel. First of all, it is too big. It has only just started, and I have already fought with Garp back and forth. This is still a small problem. As a game, the purity is very complicated. It stitches all kinds of strange things, such as poke balls, Superman glasses, sure-hit guns, etc. One Piece does not have the look of One Piece. I prefer that skills and items are built in the world of One Piece, so don't mess in. As the background world of the game, the performance of One Piece World in this article can be said to be like a sewer. It has no sense of realism or grid, only a sense of virtuality, because the protagonist can stop, teleport, save and load files anytime and anywhere. He can still do many operations while stopping, go back in time and resurrect at will. It's indeed a game, and it's a relatively low-difficulty game. The whole world seems to be at your disposal. This caused me to only regard Nami and the others as a bunch of data when I was watching them, and I couldn't empathize with them. I would recommend making the world of Pirates a bit higher level, not so low-level, and closer to the kind of game system where Nami obtains data and digitizes herself. The essence of the world is still the world, rather than the world being digitized into a game.

It has a unique setting and the plot is pretty good. As long as the protagonist's character can't be removed in the later stage, I probably won't give it two stars. Just let him think it was a game.

Let's do this for now, I hope it won't change later. After all, we are players. Normal players are already very restrained by just slashing twice without seeing anyone. There is no need to have empathy. The protagonist and Nami communicate too much. I hope there won't be any pattern where the protagonist listens to Nami's instructions, even if a mission is triggered. The fourth plague is not called for nothing

It has everything it should have, the cool points are well managed without turning into poisonous points, the plot has a coherent rhythm and the characters are brought to life. For the protagonist, this is the virtual world, and for Nami, this is the real world. They can be separated, which is done very well. The aspect of becoming a naval hero is very novel, and players enjoy fighting. Nami becomes a captain in this story line, and I look forward to the follow-up. I looked at the comment section and everyone was afraid of accepting girls. I think the "game world" is the main line. There are more scenes in the story line process. Players mainly provide the fun of the fourth natural disaster.

This book is very good. It describes the characters of the players and the original characters. The game manufacturer is a foreshadower. I don't know how to deal with him at the moment. This is a fun article, so those who mind may read it by mistake, but if you want to try something new, it's not a bad idea.