The Outcast: One Peerless Beauty, One Peak Expert

The writing is quite good, and the originality has its own thing. However, this Guigu chapter is too long. If you want to explain the history of Guigu, you can add an extra chapter to explain it when pushing the main plot. Such a high-intensity work on Guigu for half a month, I am not interested in reading the chapter titles every day to see if you have finished writing.

Book friends, if you have any comments, please leave them below my book review. The timeline is higher because I have to write original content. I have also thought about this problem because the protagonist is young. However, in fan fiction, it is taboo to change the timeline. If you are the same age and participate in the original plot when you first appear, your combat power will either collapse or be suppressed. Use the original plot to pave the way for the protagonist's experience in advance, and participating in the original plot later will give you a more immersive feeling. For example, after I have traveled and intervened in the original plot, everyone will know me, so I can avoid those plots of pretending to be a slap in the face. Although traveling is also an old routine, there will be no bloody plot later. For example, I am thinking of other famous scenes such as the sworn brotherhood scene where one of the best and the other is the best. After all, nothing in the plot moves. If he is not invincible, why should he be called the peerless one? My idea is that if the fanfic all follows the plot of the original work, then there won't be much point in writing fanfic.

This book is unusual, Old fans will sigh when they open it. I'm used to reading Shuangwen Lu, This book can open a new book. I read now 205, The following article does not dare to make any judgments. Let's just talk about the Gui Valley section. After reading it, my heart was filled with excitement. Chapter 50 discusses cause and effect, Chapter 50 brings joy and sorrow later. One door is hidden in a different world, But there is a place and there are waves. It's not like you just add settings randomly. It's not just a name to prop up the scene. It has inheritance and choices, There are masters and disciples, and there are obsessions. Reading too many people can easily lead to burnout. The starting trend is multi-judgmental. But after reading these fifty chapters, I really feel like the author has some tricks up his sleeve. Some people find it slow-paced. But I feel full of flavor. Because Guigu is not an interlude, But it is really in this world that we are deeply troubled. A few sentences are combined into an article. It's a bit hard to rhyme. If you ask me why I recommend it, Just rely on the Gui Valley section.

The plot is slow-paced, but the protagonist's strength grows quickly and it doesn't give people the feeling of a brainless novel. The author really understands the original work of one person very deeply. This book is really well written. It is the best one-person fanfic I have read so far. Most of the others have put aside the core of what a person is sincere and a human being and written it as a brainless novel. Instead, the author picked up this core and added it to his own understanding to write a good novel. Moreover, the original character sects added by the author are well integrated into the world view of the person.

The writing is very good, the protagonist is not frivolous, but very stable, and the protagonist's abilities are very interesting to write, but if there are multiple female protagonists, you must grasp it well 😫 😫 😫

Okay, it looks good. It is much more novel than the previous one-person fanfics. It can be said to be very different. The emotions and characters are all described in detail. The character design of the protagonist is also okay, and the ability to deal with and describe emotions is also good. Just look at it, it's not poisonous, and Shen Nong can eat it well [send heartfelt message].

The book is good. The protagonist is on the same level as Zhang Zhiwei. Now that I have read it, I feel that the story is in line with peerless writing. I am just worried about the emotional line after reading the introduction. In addition, will the protagonist go to the first stop in the Tuotian Cave?

It's pretty good. The original plot is well written, but I feel that the protagonist's personal main plot is a bit long, and the original plot has few auxiliary plots. People like me who haven't read the original carefully can't figure out where the protagonist is now. I hope the fighting descriptions are more detailed.

The writing is very good. The plot started in the Republic of China. I got acquainted with Lu Jin and others from the Longhu Mountain Zhang Zhiwei Trinity Sect, and he used his own newly created cultivation techniques. It looks very comfortable and suitable for the stomach of Chinese babies.

The writing style is comfortable, the content and stories are interesting, and the logic is organized. It is a world view that belongs to one person, and an original protagonist is added to tell the story. It does not feel abrupt at all, and the character's personality is in line with the original work 👍👍👍