The Outcast: What Do You Mean, You're Really at the Third Stage?

After reading more than a third of the book, I feel that the author respects the original work, and the setting is also very rigorous. I will not just criticize one person's skin and make nonsense like other fans. It fits the character setting of the original work very well. Everyone has their own cause and effect, just like in the beginning The protagonist wanted to help Li Muxuan, but later found that he could not give up decisively. This was right. It would be fair to say that it relied on the subtle influence of time, but how could it be possible to change a person with just a few words, let alone the most stubborn Li Muxuan. The protagonist hasn't started practicing rebirth yet, so I'm looking forward to the follow-up, come on!

The author's writing is very good. I have also read his previous fanfic of Under One Person, and the plot is also good. However, I didn't finish it because I wasn't interested in the male protagonist's character and identity. But this book written by the author is really interesting. He is the heir of the Trinity Sect. What he writes does not feel disconnected from the other person. The friendship between Zuo Ruotong's master and apprentice is really touching, and it also made me feel the charm of Zuo Ruotong, who can say "there are descendants of his own". In terms of plot, the author also has his own thoughts and expansions. Although I didn't understand it, it's still this👍🏻. I still have to lament that I finally found someone who didn't use AI to polish their work. It's not easy. I still insist on doing it by hand in my old life. It's really awesome. Among the 10 books I have read, 8 are all about AI choosing words and sentences. The author's books are really a breath of fresh air, hold on! Author, the rating of this book will definitely be better

I found that some people are deliberately giving negative reviews to the fanfics of Under One Person, and using inexplicable excuses. At least the negative reviews of this book are all inexplicable. They just made up one if they really can't find fault with it. This book is very promising so far and deserves five stars.

The author's writing is very touching, especially the portrayal of Zuo Menchang, which really makes people feel at ease, as if everything will be fine as long as he is there. The author writes very well, I hope to continue writing!

The writing is good, but the timeline is wrong, which makes it awkward and uncomfortable to read. But the characters are well written. One star deducted.

The author's writing is very sophisticated, with many small details and interesting points, and the description of the battle scenes is also relatively detailed. I rated it as fine grain.

It's good-looking, not too toxic, and the protagonist is a bit condescending (perspective) in the early stages, but the plot arrangement is quite reasonable. Worth a look[Like]

Very well written ((*^∀^))👍🏻 When I was young, I almost relied on my own efforts to cultivate.

The writing is obviously good, why hasn't it been updated? [Crying]

The score is low, I think it is above 8 points