The Kingdom of Locke: I'm a Loli Fan

This is one of the few books on Tomato that focuses on the world of Rock Kingdom, and overall it's pretty good. I'd give it 4 stars. The protagonist joins the Black Witch Clan at the beginning and has super strength (he can even stop his heartbeat).

It's pretty good, not as exaggerated as some people say. There are indeed some poorly written parts and minor flaws. For example, the protagonist is individually very powerful, but he's constantly correcting his daily actions, and the villains don't seem truly villainous, and the good guys don't seem truly good (I personally don't think this is a major flaw). Right now, I just hope the Yellow Turban Rebellion starts soon! 😄

It's a shame the mobile game became a hit; the author could consider writing a story about picking peaches that would be popular. 🤦

I suggest changing the book title to "I Was Jia Xu at Locke's" (a famous Chinese military advisor). The following is the original text: "The worst strategy is to rely purely on sheer numbers to push forward, drive the villagers from the villages you've captured to the front lines, let them charge ahead and risk their lives to deplete the defenders' arrows and spells.

So delicious... May the protagonist soon rule the world... There are just too many flaws.

It's interesting, but please, red isn't suitable for Locke. Don't mess around. Some systems work, but others don't. Take the world of Extraordinary Ones, for example. People have different talents and resources. If you give someone the same resources to nurture a gifted person and someone with less talent, and then they fight, who do you think would win?

The king forces you to kneel with worldly power and empty fame; Noxus demands you stand. The protagonist is the same; he wants to make you stand. Well written, at least it's refreshing.

Overall, it's alright, a little toxic. And judging from the comments, the sequel could be revised. After all, I should listen to most readers' suggestions. If you don't like it, don't write it, unless you've already written an outline and don't have the ability to revise it. I wonder if the sequel will be upgraded to five stars or continue to be deducted.

Begin chanting: Are day and night equal? ​​Are the righteous and the sinner equal? ​​If man is born weak, from which god shall the weak find peace? Souls with three faces, heed my questions: If the power and wealth of the strong can conceal their sins, who can judge them? If the weak must pay any price to survive, who can vouch for them? If even the purest and virtuous souls can err, who can comfort them?

The most unique aspect is its perspective from the viewpoint of Locke, who was at the bottom of society. This transformed the Black Wizarding Order into a reformist faction, objectively promoting institutional development and change. Furthermore, the depiction of jealousy and sacrifice is particularly memorable; even in Lockerian, revolution requires bloodshed.