(Harry Potter + Locke, everyday-life story. The heroine is a shapeshifted elf. Furry content, so please steer clear if that bothers you.)
This is the story of a little Locke who, while hunting for a shiny variant, accidentally transmigrates to a certain Harry Potter world.
The collision of elves and wizards, and the clash between Locke magic and wizard magic. Embracing all traditions, in the name of Locke, he kindles a new wish and achieves eternity.
Hagrid: “Oh! My goodness! Locke, I have to say, you really are the world’s greatest expert on Fantastic Beasts! Um... I mean, could I see the Bone Dragon of Annihilation one more time?”
Professor McGonagall: “No! Absolutely not!”
Dumbledore: “Oh! No wonder you’re a young wizard recognized by starlight! Starlight magic... what wonderfully pure magical power! Little Locke, you’re the purest young wizard I’ve ever met!”
Some Noseless Freak: “Pure? Dumbledore! Can’t you see the purple-black magic swirling around him, the power that nearly drove even me completely insane?”
Snape: “Foolish Locke, do you think waving your wand and mixing the ingredients together will make a po...tion?”
Locke: “Professor? Say something, Professor?”
Snape: ...
Harry: “Locke! You said my Cold-Sound Snake can turn Voldemort back into a baby with cuteness? Then doesn’t that mean I...”
Ron: “Locke, you want to trade an elf for my Scabbers? Oh, you know, Scabbers may only be a rat, but he’s my dearest friend, my brother in arms! One elf won’t do. Make it two!”
Hermione: “Chrysanthemum Pear is the smartest elf in the world! Ah↗ ah↘ ah↗ ah↘”
How can I say that the subject matter is okay? Locke Kingdom itself partly borrowed from Harry Potter, but the writing techniques and segmentation are not that good. Some of the content should be polished with AI, which may be restricted. After all, Tomato strictly cracks down on inferior AI. It is recommended that the author cannot directly cut the flow of 150,000 words and write another book with the same theme. The plot speed will be accelerated.
It would be nice if there were pictures
It's amazing. Come on, I'm looking forward to it.
It's good-looking, but there are too many scenes with the bag. As a heroine, that's understandable, but what about Dimo? The first elf didn't have much of a role, just a little bit.
Very interesting, good luck to the author
It's quite good-looking, the flaws don't hide the good points😄, it's a good fanfic
Very novel subject matter and very interesting 😄😄😄
Five stars must be five stars, I want the people in the Kingdom of Light to read such a good book
A good idea. This book is very interesting so far. I look forward to the next content.
Well, five-star praise! Feel free to express your true opinions. Well, this book focuses on two-way adventure. Elves will appear in Hogwarts, and Hogwarts students will also have the opportunity to adventure in the elf world. There will be many interesting collisions between elves and wizards. They will not send elves to other countries at will, and they will not teach grunt balls and alchemy techniques to other countries. The protagonist takes the lead, and there will be no poisonous point of giving away the elves casually. Chapter 9 reveals the behavior of the elves in the world, which will be explained later. These are all foreshadowing for the future.