Sky Screen: The Fifteen Heroes of Wenchuan and Their Daring Leap

Overall, the author's writing style is very comfortable, and the content of the inventory is sufficient. It is organized and organized without any hard problems. I just have a small suggestion to make: the dialogue scenes between historical figures from various dynasties feel a bit dense, and many exclamatory dialogues can appear slightly redundant and cumbersome. Sometimes it takes a long time to go through the interactive dialogues between characters before getting to the core inventory content. The look and feel will be a bit slow, and occasionally it will make people feel a little suspicious of hydrology. Subsequent updates can appropriately streamline unnecessary exclamations and chats, weaken some redundant character conversations, and leave more space to the core inventory content. The rhythm should be more streamlined and beautiful (only personal subjective evaluation, you are right if you argue)

Deduction of one star for not having predecessors

Read Chapter 1/75 in one go! It's quite fun to talk about history in a light and joking tone paired with internet memes [laughs crookedly]. I hope there will be commentary on cemetery tours by these celebrities later, wouldn't it be more fun [laughing]

Give yourself a full score [shy]

The author's writing is very full, the emotions are on point, and it is very tear-jerking. The first part is a little too funny, but the second half is full of knives. I recommend it, but try to be mentally prepared later. (óò｡)

When I read a book, I basically give it a five-star rating every time I finish reading it, and then I don't rate it much. Including now, I have rated no more than three books in total. This skill is so good, I really can't help it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I won't comment on other things. I won't talk about other things. I'll just talk about chapters 200 to 201 and 204 to 206. They are well written. You don't need to read so many, just read these chapters. And these few are enough to get this evaluation of 4 stars.

Very well written and exciting! You can take a look.

Good writing and clear content

Give me some help, the writing is still good, come on