The Sky Screen: I Made Up Wise Emperors, and They Took Them for Real

Write a book review. First of all, although this book can be regarded as a canopy and spoiler type, after adding the element of "deception" by the protagonist, there are more variables. This is one of the reasons why I find this book much more interesting than some of the usual canopy genres. And now I am looking forward to the second volume and even the follow-up, because the second volume may not be about how big the prince will grow, right? But there is a decisive difference between Volume 1 and Volume 2. The background given in the first volume is that of refugees. In terms of ancient control, if a monarch finds that he cannot find something, he is more likely to suspect that he has not searched enough. This is no problem. But the second volume is different. The background is that of the prince. This is a clear and fixed character. If the prince becomes a little more sensible and realizes that he is not so wise, what will be the reaction? I think the author needs to control this carefully. Finally, imagine two possible plots. One is that in addition to the comments of later generations, the original text of the "Historical Books" will also be used to convey information. Then the ancients may not doubt whether these original "Historical Books" have inaccurate or taboo parts. After all, even the "subversive" Bamboo Chronicles were unearthed during the time of Emperor Wu of the Jin Dynasty. It should be possible for the ancients to think of this aspect. Another thing is that there are also cases where some conclusions have been overturned. Then perhaps we can design a plot in which the protagonist's research is not rigorous enough and contains content that people at the time could recognize as wrong. Then the reaction of people who see the marquee should also be very interesting (this kind of reaction should be regarded as the essence of the marquee style)

Previous article [At that time, Tan Hezhi was in the Song Dynasty and had no aspirations. Hearing the name of Taizu, he led his troops back. Taizu was overjoyed and thought he would conquer the south. He then ordered He Zhi to lead his fleet to the south and win a series of battles. The leader of the Song Dynasty surrendered in front of him. Later [when Taizu of Qi raised troops on Mount Tai, He heard about it, looked up to the sky and sighed: "Oh my god! If he can deceive me for ten years, I will definitely surrender."] 🤦

I just want to know if Qi Taizu will write it in the book? Mainly because many people were waiting for him in ancient times [laughs awkwardly]

To be honest, it's really good. It doesn't even have a vague main line. It's rare. The content revealed here by the author, Prince Song, is obviously a lot different from the previous article. . . . We are here to read novels, not the author's political thinking.

The writing is short, the dialogue is concise, there is no redundant sensationalism, and the white space is high-quality; however, the conflicts are weak, the resistance in the court is lacked, and the details of the market are few. The underlying atmosphere can be supplemented. It would be better to enrich the content.

The new patterns in the Tianmu text are quite interesting to look at. The classical Chinese sentence structure is natural, with ancient rhyme but not stiff. The use of allusions shows skills without showing off. The whole book reads smoothly and elegantly. However, this classical Chinese sentence structure looks a bit "boring". After all, I have to go through it again. Converting the brain into vernacular, which affects emotional investment; and compared to the fabricated story, the real development of the whole article is not attractive enough. If the correspondence between the fabricated story and reality, the balance and conflict of promotion can be grasped well, this article should be a hit! The last few ideas that the author originally planned to write were also quite interesting. I felt that the second story was better than the first, and it should have gotten better, but it's a pity that I didn't continue writing it!

It ended so quickly. I was quite confused at first. If I put the history of Mingjun that does not exist, I would not really put this virtual character into the world. What is the use of writing it? Then I found that the author's arrangement is very good, and there will be changes when you see it. People with lofty ideals will not stop taking action just because the virtual person does not appear. The world may not need a perfect savior, but it needs many people to realize that change is needed and use actions to change it.

The writing is very interesting, I admire it

The marquee could be written a little more, but I think the changes in the marquee are too detailed and the progress is a bit slow.

Very inspiring story