The Alchemist in Hunter X Hunter

Although the various foreshadowings are a bit long-winded, it is acceptable, because I have read many fan stories, and I think the failure to save Salazar, which led to the birth of the brigade, is a poisonous point. I think it would be better if the foreshadowing chapters are used to change the details. Of course, there are no major problems in terms of logic and character setting. It can be considered a good hunter fan and I will give it five stars. It's too watery, and it's even less watery. One event cannot be written in a week. According to my experience in reading books, I will either remain half-dead or become a eunuch. It didn't feel good at all, and there was no need to be emotionally incoherent for a few days.

So far, it's pretty good. I hope the protagonist won't be written as a nanny. The nanny has eyes full of doting. . . . .

Seedling Protection, a good beginning of a full-time hunter, describes the character interaction of the brigade in more detail than the previous books, and the protagonist also cares more about the "equal exchange" steel power system. It is also interesting to change the main line of Meteor Street ecology by showing strength to make V5 afraid. This path has not been achieved by the Hunter Association, and even Nitro has to succumb to V5 and die with the ants (based on his own will to pursue martial arts, the crusade against the Ant King will definitely not conflict with V5, but it is impossible to be willing to bring Rose to fight the Ant King), so to achieve this goal, the brigade is at least stronger than the Hunter Association. It cannot be reasonably achieved without the help of the power of the Dark Continent. If the plot is well written, this Hunter has great potential. Come on, author!

The description of the brigade is very good, and the replacement of the leader is quite natural, but it is written too slowly! Do it faster! So pretty! It is the most logically logical Hunter novel I have ever read. Come on, author

The writing is good and the plot is reasonable. I haven't seen any bad points so far. It can be seen that the author has worked hard on the original work. It is a rare good grass in Tomato. I hope the author can keep writing.

It's okay, but I hope to write more new things. I also feel that the protagonist's strength has improved too quickly, and the gap between him and other team members has been too big, which greatly weakens the role of other team members. I feel that the protagonist's telekinesis ability is only one alchemy, and it may be better if the other seven deadly sins are not needed. After all, alchemy itself is relatively versatile and can be gradually developed and strengthened.

I don't quite understand why the rating is so low! The worldview created by the author is not said to be novel, but it is also created within the scope of rationality! The only thing I think is a bit too much is that the protagonist's abilities are too strong and given too early! Maybe the author is a little anxious after reading the ratings! Hunter fics are already very unpopular, and Steelmaking has even been restricted due to issues with its author! At least in my opinion this fanfic is definitely worth reading

Oioi, kid, I feel a little hot, the writing is so good, I'm dying [please taste it carefully]

The subject matter is very good. In other parts, I danced a lot of childish things. There are too few hunters, so I'll give it a 5.

It's pretty good. Except for some minor problems at the beginning, there are no other bad points. Afterwards, when writing about alchemy, the author can write a lot if he uses his imagination. Needless to say, there is no need to say more about the scientific research and development of alchemy. There is no truth in the Hunter World. The protagonist will then take this position to spread this system and become the truth of this world to counterattack. The world collides with the truth of the world. There are many routes that can be written and developed. It depends on the author's choice.