Transmigrate into a Book as the Villain, and Kill the Dragon-Ao-Tian Male Lead from the Start

(Disclaimer: I am not a human computer, I just prefer to comment like this) Positioning: Upgrade flow + dual strength + two-way redemption Content: The writing and plot are both online. It has a strong male video flavor and a complete world view. The foreshadowing mentioned in the introduction has begun to take shape in the chapters that have been updated so far. The theme of "destiny" is destined to not be simple in the follow-up plot. I look forward to the author's exciting follow-up content [Blow kiss] Characters: ① Protagonist: "Mu Feng ! And the contrast is quite big. When I was reading, I kept going back to the introduction to double-check who Gong was. Haha, Xiaojiang is really cute [laughing and crying] ②Supporting characters: Due to the limitations of the current chapter, there are not many supporting characters. There are some who show off, and some who are pretentious. Personally, I feel that they are in line with the atmosphere of the book, but is it really okay for the spiritual pet to be bald [face covering]. What interests me more is how the author will handle the creation of Jiang Junyuan's "confidante" character. The two characters that have already appeared are the senior sister Ye Ning, who is as gentle as jade, and Hui Zhilanxin, who loves but does not entangle; the formation wizard Su Qingwan is witty and cunning, and fights wits and courage with the protagonist. Both of them are independent and sober. Let's set it up as a big hostess `▽´๑)۶ Summary: Although the pace of the first few chapters is a bit fast and has some shortcomings, the concubine is so obsessed with pleasing me that the native dog said "I love watching!!" (´▽｀)ノ♪ Also, is the author reading this? Very good, still watching! The child is starving to death! I want to update (whispering) 2026.3.1

The boss wrote it so well😋😋There is no inexplicable backlash between boys and girls, there is no emotional pull to deliberately lengthen the front, no one is suppressed and aggrieved, only one can quickly understand one's own feelings, and take the initiative to confirm the relationship with a straight shot after an accident. Mu Feng 99, young lovers 99, always support the two strong! Although I was very angry that the bad mouse ate the protagonist's first fruit, I was relieved when I thought about it and thought that the fruit was not actually obtained by the protagonist after a lot of effort, and it was not unique. Otherwise, I would have been really angry. And the role of mice is really great, it doesn't hold anything back. Anyway, boss boss, your writing is so cool😋😋

The two of them have saved my life just by standing there. It's been a long time since I've seen two people whose characters are both stable and I like them very much. Mu Feng is one of the few people I've seen in Yangshizi who is really cold. There is no deliberate description but his character can be reflected in every word. The same goes for Jiang Jun. He has a clear distinction between love and hate. He has a playboy side and a serious side. What I like most is that both of them treat each other seriously. The double strength is great. . . Evenly matched is the best. . It's not enough to watch at all. This is the first time I am so eager to follow a series. . . I really want to travel directly to the end. Sir, I will always support you woo woo woo Jiang Mu99. Is Jiang Mu happy? .

The plot writing is online, the emotional line progresses very quickly, and it feels like it should be a medium-length novel. I particularly like the two characters! Jiang Jun has a strong sense of humor and is sometimes very delicate(?) In his youth, and has the image of a casual and carefree young man. Mu Feng is decisive in killing but a little clumsy emotionally (especially towards Jiang Jun). Both of them are types with low moral sense. The only drawback is that it's painful to scratch your head and wait for updates every day! I'll eat it all over again when I'm free!

Really super pretty. The relationship between Jiang Jun and Mu Feng progresses very quickly. Although it is a bit abrupt, it is easy to get along with each other. Senior sister Ye Ning is also very good. After discovering Jiang and Mu's feelings, she let them go without getting entangled. However, Jiang Jun's treasure hunter rat is bald. This is the first time I have seen such a unique spiritual pet.

It's nice. It's nice. I haven't seen any curse words so far. It's not a mom's boy or a girl. It's a real rivalry. It's a real fight. It's cute even after becoming a young couple. It's cute. But the process of Mu Feng's falling in love is too fast. It's a bit abrupt. There's nothing substantive. It's a bad feeling. How can you fall in love with someone so quickly after staying in the apocalypse for so long? I don't have any worries and I can use my spiritual power as soon as I cross. There are no words or scenes described in the introduction. Just those few words where the two of them hacked each other, it was a bit of a waste of expectation. Overall very good

I go, it's so beautiful, not only are they two strong men, but they also have a complete world view, and they have strengthened their strength through career training. It's so cool, and their emotional lines are not abrupt at all. I really don't think their emotional lines are fast. From the beginning, they were on guard against each other, to later they saw the essence of each other's souls, to falling in love with each other, and trusting each other. , Defenseless, and I really like the character of the protagonist. One has a high coolness and can follow his own will, with a good harvest of strength and emotion. This sense of control and the courage to act, while the other is a soft-spoken but kind of protagonist who refuses to admit defeat, wears bright clothes and rages on horseback. They are attracted to each other and pull each other! ! That's it! Perfect match! ! Jiang Mu 99! ! ! I really, really, really like this way of strengthening one's own strength while taking care of love. I am not addicted to love, but I can have someone behind me to accompany me on the road of continuous advancement, so I am no longer lonely. I'm really looking forward to future developments! What is the origin of this master? Is he just a supporting character being played around by the protagonists at will, or will he grow up later on? I'm still looking forward to it. Is this book halfway through? Tiandao seems to have compromised? Are there other conspiracies behind it? OMG so looking forward to it! My lord, this is so beautiful! ! ! _(:_‖∠)_It's great

Although the plot is a bit abrupt, the best thing is that the characters of the two people are great. The old enemy is the wife. The old enemy is the enemy in fate. The fate of meeting and killing each other. The author really wrote out the feeling of the old enemy. It's awesome.

It's okay, the logic is clear, the characters are vivid, and there's a sense of life. It's rare for me to read a Qing Qing Shui Shui article. This article is very interesting, but it's a bit short. I hope the author can write more!

So far, it seems to be okay, the characters are very good, the plot is online, the IQ is online, and the author has great potential. But there are also some shortcomings. For example, the past mentions of the two protagonists are very one-sided descriptions. At least I cannot empathize with them. I only know that they were miserable before. There are also some parts that are always brushed off, which gives me the feeling that the protagonist becomes stronger all of a sudden, which feels a bit fast. There are also two protagonists, the characters are very good, but they feel that there is no growth (maybe they lack inner thinking). For example, in the time and space turbulence, they have language and actions, but what about the heart? Aren't the two protagonists worried that they will die? And I personally feel that the two of them have tried their best to survive from the past, and their desire to live should be relatively strong. They cannot give up their lives easily just because the other person is dead. Instead, it is more in line with the characters to take a gamble and keep both of them alive. All in all, the author has no basic problems. He has great potential to produce better content quality. Don't abuse it just for the sake of sweetness. Control the rhythm of the plot and put some effort into the protagonist. The quality is absolutely nothing to say. Of course, if this was just a purely sweet article, it would have passed the test. [Send heart][Send heart]