Have You Forgotten? We’re Mortal Enemies!

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The writing is very good, the emotional line is very delicate and smooth, not laggy, not too fast, does not make people feel slow, the plot is not laggy, not cumbersome, and is on the same level as the emotional line, complementing each other, it is a very normal and smooth plot and emotional line, the writing is not amazing, but I must praise the smoothness of the hand, the teacher is very good at writing, the emotional line is not greasy, smooth, and smooth. There are not many books as smooth as Tomato. There is the fact that although the protagonist is a bit emotionally slow, it does not make people feel stupid, nor does it really make people feel that the protagonist is slow. Instead, it makes people take the perspective of the protagonist and feel the feeling that the emotionally foggy window paper cannot be broken, but it is undetectable. The book never mentions it, and never describes this aspect positively. Even the side description is broad and distant, but it is not annoying, because this layer of paper is not often seen by you, and only one or two sentences are occasionally used to make people doubt the existence of the paper, which shows that the author's writing skills are very deep. This is what a full-length novel should be like, instead of forcing it to be too long with most of the content in Tomato obviously only being enough for a medium-length novel. At this point, some people may think that since the protagonist is slow, why is the emotional line smooth? Because even if the protagonist is a little slow, the emotional line is very sweet, making people feel a warm current in their hearts, just like soaking in a hot spring, slowly being soaked with temperature and water vapor, and the water mist is misty. A truly smooth emotional line is one that makes people unaware. The author's fluency in the emotional line also extends to the advancement of the plot and the description of the characters. The plot is detailed and appropriate, which is really rare. Mommy, we like you. It does not dominate the subject, and the emotional line and the plot are not separated. Unlike some books (which do not mainly include the plot), there is a plot, and then a relationship, and there is a sense of separation. Then there is the character image, which is also very similar to the emotional line. It is delicate, but broad and not obvious. The truly advanced brushwork is the air without any sense of existence. It is refreshing, fresh and natural, and has a very daily feel, like soaking in a hot spring. In terms of writing, all the above are reflected. To talk about something extra, the teacher's writing is not gorgeous, and even has a low sense of presence, but it is very smooth, like colorless and odorless water, just right. I like this about the teacher very much. The plot and emotion are not procrastinating, and the character description is not cumbersome. In addition, there is no subjective psychological description in the article, and even all psychological descriptions are like profile descriptions. This is particularly good, and it is also a natural contribution of the writing style, which allows people to naturally enter the story. The teacher's unique writing style also makes the knife in the article very inconspicuous, like glass powder, which occasionally reflects in the sunlight in the water. This also makes the knife in this article tender, not annoying, or making people feel obviously sadistic, and the knife is very real (I personally think it is due to the wonderful character description and profile). The characters written by the teacher are very human, everyday people. Moreover, even if the person written by the teacher has a positive image, it will not make the article feel too false, and the negative image will not make people feel false. In short, they just look like people. This is probably related to the large number of side descriptions, so even the emotional substitution is quite detailed. The teacher's writing style has always been light and warm, like soaking in a hot spring. It is also colorless and odorless like water, which is refreshing and smooth. Spoiler warning There is a plot that is particularly well written. I like it very much. When Lian Yun encounters a fantasy in a secret realm that makes people feel the best thing in their memory, it is when Lian Yun drives Mo Zhenqiu down the mountain, and then looks at Zhenqiu all the way down the mountain, staring at it closely. Oh, I don't remember whether Lian Yun did this. I cried, but I remember this part. I just don't remember it very clearly, but I remember that Lian Yun stared at him closely, and then laughed and cried. It seems like this. I don't remember, but the emotional description in this part is really amazing. Well, it is not a positive emotional description. The emotional description from the side is really amazing. This relationship is very, very interesting and very spiritual. Especially when he regards this as the most beautiful thing in his memory, it is very interesting and a very unique emotion. This emotion is very interesting and a very special one. The emotion of the meaning is, can anyone understand it? Hehe, uh, of course when I wrote this plot, it was not revealed yet why Lian Yun was, um, just a foreshadowing, driving him down the mountain like this. But even if you don't know the truth, the emotion you felt at that time is very interesting. Speaking of foreshadowing, the author's foreshadowing is also very good. First of all, he can make people doubtful, but he will not always make people worry about it. He will not make people feel uncomfortable. This is one of the reasons why I say the plot is smooth, because every foreshadowing and plot description of his They are all interlocking, and it progresses slowly, or rather smoothly, and you will have doubts, but he will also give you some side descriptions of the plot, side descriptions of the characters, etc. Then you have speculations about this matter, so this book is really smooth, and it is particularly wonderful.

It's nice to read, and the writing is very good. It was quite funny at first, but suddenly I started to get angry while watching it. Didn't I come to see the rival duo? Why do you want me to see the knife?

Yes, this book is okay, the writing is good, and the characters are okay, but it may be a bit bad at times, but it is very good, it can reach more than 9 o'clock, holy shit, why are so few people reading it? Sometimes I read more than 9 point articles, but they are not as good as the writing style of this book.

It's a very gentle book. The encounters and interactions between the senior brothers and sisters are really warm. It has a feeling of a long flowing water. I like it very much. Please keep writing it.

It's so delicious, come on, author, you will succeed in whatever you do with such a delicious work. 👐👐

It's very beautiful, I really like it, it's a little bit sadistic, but everything else is very beautiful, I recommend [Blow Kiss]

It looks good, but I really want to know about the situation of my brothers and sisters. It feels like it will be very sad later, and it feels like all the brothers and sisters have been seriously injured, or someone has died.

It's really super, super pretty! ! ! All the characters are very vivid and three-dimensional. The author is really attentive in giving life to the characters in his works! All babies in this world should be happy ///\\\ | ^ ^ | d ● * ● b

It's great, but the plot feels sadistic.