You Didn't Tell Me the Cannon-Fodder Class Clown Would Be Everyone's Favorite

The characters and plot are quite exciting, but it may be because I am a newbie, and my writing skills are not enough. The article contains a relatively large amount of objective description, and the focus is on description, and there are many summative and general words. As a result, the character image is written out and directly determined, rather than established. If the reader is not allowed to experience it for himself, the sense of substitution will be weakened a lot, but it is still worthy of encouragement. Five-star apology [send heart][send heart][send heart]

It's so pretty and delicious. It's so cute with a weak, venomous tongue, a cold face, a hard mouth, a soft face, a cold heart, a warm heart, a beautiful, strong, miserable baby, and a friend who looks like a home invader. It's so cute! The teacher is cute too! The protagonist is very happy to watch it, I really like it, it is shocking and delicious! In fact, I first found out that there was a fandom fan pushing this article in Old Ford. It happened that the fanfic in big letters and the other two articles that were promoted were my favorite type. Although this book only has 10 chapters now, it is still a baby novel, but I really like it very much. The author's each article is really long, and the writing style is also good. I haven't found any surprises yet. The small observation diary or summary at the end of each article is very cute. It was so enjoyable to watch, I was thinking that I didn't discover this shocking and delicious thing. The protagonist really likes this kind of heartthrob. And I feel that every character has its own characteristics. They are lively, arrogant, cool-faced, and have a vicious tongue. I am looking forward to some new characters that I will meet later, and some of the stories that will happen to them later. Come on, the author. Although this new article has only been updated for 10 chapters, it will be on my bookshelf in the future. 😘Author, I will support you fiercely!

Like! The friendship in the house robbery is really wonderful. The protagonist Ni Qingjue is slowly integrating into the movie. The rhythm is very good. Ni Qingjue probably belongs to the command position. It is delicious, poisonous, delicious, sickly, delicious. In summary, it is so delicious. I am slowly accepting the protagonist group, although I still have a venomous tongue. Cute The system feels a bit like a human trafficker, but the protagonist is a Lezi person and seems to be acceptable. The original comic protagonist group is also cute Su Xiaogu, reckless but sincere, sandwich dream guy (?), Silly and sweet (?), Drawing inferences from one example, cuteness Mu Mian is arrogant but has a hard mouth and a soft heart. The arrogant kitten cannot compete with the protagonist. She can knit scarves. Although she is not very skilled, she is cute. An Yihuai is scheming but reliable. His observation skills seem to be on par with the protagonist's (?). He can observe secretly and openly, and he is cute. He Lanzhi has a controlled appearance but is attentive. He is so cute. He likes the main character (drawing) and is so focused that he doesn't even talk. In the early stage, he basically just praises the main character. He is so cute. This author is even more adorable, very active, I forgot to update anything, but I have to update my words carefully (and study hard); the content of the chapter is very substantial, the battle is well written, the position of each person is roughly figured out, and the scene description is good; I am so excited after reading the special edition Yes, it is cute, close your eyes and watch the cuteness! Open your eyes and see the cuteness! Look cute from the front! Look cute from the back! Look cute on the left! Look cute on the right! Looks cute above! Look at the cuteness below! Lie down and watch the cuteness! Look cute when you suddenly get a serious illness! Use your iPhone to watch cuteness! Use Huawei mobile phones to watch cuteness! Use your Xiaomi phone to watch cuteness! Watch cuteness on your Samsung phone! Look cute with OPPO mobile phone! Watch cuteness on your vivo phone! Look cute with Pineapple Phone! Happy New Year! I wish you all success in your studies and career, happiness every day, and good health. I wish you all the books you read will be to your liking, the books you read will have a good atmosphere, the writers will never get stuck, and there will be many, many people who love you and the characters you write!

The friendship that waits silently is beautiful, but the friendship that resembles a home invasion is even more interesting. This kind of Qingqing must have such a friend! (๑´0`๑) A weak-tongued beauty! It really touched my heart♪(´∪`●)ゝ A sunny and naive little hamster. I think he especially loves sandwiches. He is good at learning and can draw inferences from one example. He is so sincere. The arrogant and soft-hearted Mianmian kitten can weave towels, which I didn't expect. Please note that Qingqing is not in good health and is afraid of getting cold. ദ്ദിᵔ.˛.ᵔ₎✧ The shady and reliable Huaihuai little snake has really good observation skills and is as good as Qingqing. I feel like I am always observing Qingqing. Lan Lan, a little bear with a quiet appearance, really loves to draw. ദ്ദിᵔ.˛.ᵔ₎✧I feel like I can draw anytime and anywhere. I look forward to his album collection (★≧▽^))★☆ And our sharp-tongued and weak Qingqing little red fox, つ♡⊂, is slowly integrating into them. This is great. I think the poppies on the cover are the decorations of Qingqing in the future or the flowers that Qingqing looks like. Or maybe they will go on a picnic in the future, and there will be a poppy flower bush Qingqing next to it or something (★≧▽^))★☆ And our Instructor Zhou is a really good teacher. He is not too excited even if he is given a nickname. He also cares about the health of his students. You can definitely survive until the finale! (●'◡'●) I don't know what the next plot will be, but the identity of the protagonist should not be simple according to common sense. Well, if both parents are dead, is it possible that he faked his death? Or are the parents twin kings? Or if the parents are ordinary people with such a clear identity, they must have that order. Well, I guess they are high-level officials of the mysterious organization. But this is a routine after all. If there is no special identity, I might not have any special identity. However, I still feel better. After all, it is more refreshing that way. But if you don't take the ordinary path, it's okay if you don't have it. Come on, boss (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on I am from all Qingxiang (ﾟ3ﾟ)～♪

The progress in friendship is very fast. It can be said that it only takes less than ten chapters to go from a stranger to a partner who can trust half of it. People who want to watch chaotic fun can quit, but if they want to watch hard-mouthed and soft-hearted people, they say it is delicious. It is a very typical hard-mouthed, soft-hearted, cold-faced and mean-spirited person. The protagonist says he is lazy but he is actually quite diligent. This is just a way of talking bad to himself and to others at the same time () There is a heartthrob. The forum guide in the author's article is very good. There is no cp-oriented description except for the protagonist. But the characters are flat. . ? Everyone has their own unique features, but the features are so prominent that I can't see the inside. Maybe I don't see enough. . . So four stars()

It's super beautiful, and the character descriptions are really vivid. Everyone has their shortcomings and strengths, and it's very vivid. And I love Qingqing's poisonous tongue characteristics so much. The combination of beauty + sickly character + poisonous tongue is really annoying to me (actually, I was attracted to it by the cover at the beginning), but there are just too few of them! ! ! ! Why did I read this book so early? Woohoo! !

Super invincible and beautiful! The character with a venomous mouth but a soft heart is simply my xpTop! ! ! Long red hair and blue eyes are also the first choice among seasoned foodies [Adoration] [Blowing Kisses] The overall rhythm is also very good, neither urgent nor slow, just right! The writing is still very solid. There are currently no embarrassing plots like this that usually occur when crossing comics. However, I have a question. There is a vest in the tag. Is this vest given to the host by the system for the host to control and act, or is it a vest worn by the protagonist himself? [Shy] All in all, it's well worth getting into. The disadvantage is that it is too short, and it is still a novel for a young person. You can save more before reading.

Subjectively, I like the character of Qing Qing with a poisonous tongue, because it is the first time I have seen this type of protagonist, and it feels very novel. Objectively, there are many problems that can be mentioned, probably because the author is a novice. Many descriptions in the article are repeated, some paragraphs appear before and then appear again, An Yihuai keeps pushing up his glasses, Qingqing always turns the corners of his mouth up a little... And other writing problems. Generally speaking, the characters of the protagonist group are very eye-catching, but there are also problems. I hope they will get better in the future. And so far, I can't see where Qingqing is having fun. I'll comment again after the tie is reached.

In fact, I feel that the whole book is very good. Because it is a new book, it is short in length. I hope you can work harder and not stop updating it. But there are two chapters in the middle where comics and reviews are written, and the previous story is repeated, but it feels like there is no need to write so much, and there is no need to repeat it again (just like the story of the Peach Blossom Spring, the fisherman later reported to the army, so the story of what happened is not repeated, because the readers already know the story, and writing it again will feel complicated and protracted). But it can be used as a small theater, otherwise it will feel more and more boring the more you read it. The subject matter and characters of this book are quite good. It is worth reading. I hope you can continue to work hard [shy]

Although this article is very daily, there is nothing wrong with it, but there are a lot of overlapping words in this article. If you don't mind, you can read it. Also, the author's writing of this book gives me the feeling that it is like a memoir, that is, everything has happened, and then the memories in the memory are written out. Everyone has a different perspective and a different angle of recollection. It is really like a memoir! ! The more I read it, the more it looks like a memoir. I don't know if it's true, but it feels a lot like a memoir to me. Of course, for example, there are a lot of repeated words in the text. If you just want to relax, it's okay. However, if you are in a bad mood that day, it is still recommended not to read it, because reading too many of them, especially when listening to books, will make you a little bored. But if you don't mind, you can still read it, and it is still highly recommended.