Cultivating Immortality with Chips: Virtual Spiritual Root Guidance Protocol Activated

It's worth reading, but although the first few chapters seem to have big problems like chips, it's a bit awkward to read if you press too hard! I feel that the author's entry point for some issues should be addressed directly at the beginning of the Yaoyuan opening to simulate the spiritual root. Anyway, I feel that the latter part is much more beautiful and interesting than the previous one! Looking forward to the next story! The more you write, the more you focus on the story of a reborn girl and this man who has achieved a golden elixir. The story is so poorly written! Thinking back to your previous content, what attracted me was the cultivation of chips, dealing with things calmly and slowly becoming stronger! What intrigue? Helpful? It's really divisive! I recommend you to watch Immortality: Starting from the Fruit of Taiyin. The others in it are just supporting roles. All the highlights should revolve around the protagonist becoming stronger. Your protagonist is just a roadside character. There are many things that are not necessary to write and unfold. Alas, or maybe my expectations are too high! !

The overall smoothness is still acceptable. Keep watching. It's just that occasionally there will be a small plot that is rough and has pitfalls. We'll see if they can be filled in later. As a system text or AI auxiliary text, it is much better than other plots that only know how to do tasks without thinking. At least every step of improvement is a real improvement resulting from the protagonist's hard work➕feeding data, big data analysis and compilation➕the mastermind's flash of inspiration. The core highlights the complementary route of putting people first and AI as the supplement.

The author writes very well. The author's writing style in "Red Dust Tribulation" is beautiful, comfortable and clean. The protagonist is described vividly and vividly. The descriptions of other supporting characters and teammates are also very good, which is really at the level of bread and butter. I still want to make a few suggestions. First, the Tribulation of the Red Dust should be added, what to do if the chip is discovered, and what to do if the chip is gone. These descriptions should further sublimate the theme. Also, I hope that the protagonist can directly create a spiritual root instead of relying on chips all the time (personal wish) Secondly, there is a bit little description of the enemy's calculations in the book, or the author is not good at writing such direct calculations about the protagonist's cultivation of the enemy, and is a bit too old-fashioned (personal opinion, please don't criticize) Third, based on the second point, the protagonist has too little fighting skills and calculations, and lacks scenes in fighting the enemy. Overall, the book is very well written and I enjoyed reading it. My own suggestions are to hope that the author can write better and better. There is no other specific intention, so the author does not need to mind.

I have reviewed many books, and this one is barely worthy of four stars. The more I look at it, the more I feel panicked. I am a bit old-fashioned, and I don't have enough crisis awareness. I just created one spell of my own and it is gone. I create more formations of my own, and the arrays are all gone. The portrayal of the mortal crisis and forbearance in the early stage is very good, and it has a bit of an AI flavor, which becomes more apparent as you read later. I hope the author will improve and not fall into the dead end of immortality (improve the character, develop a long-term lovable character, don't be so sugary, cultivate immortality, and become a worldly immortal. I think the author's writing is not realistic enough, so I will tell the truth). If it is not good, I will add a comment.

Taking into account the elements of cultivating immortals and science fiction, it is different from conventional science and technology novels about cultivating immortals. It can fully combine the chips of technological products with the spiritual roots of the world of cultivating immortals. Based on the chips, virtual spiritual roots are deduced to achieve leapfrog development from mortals to cultivators of immortals. Subsequent cultivators can fully utilize the performance of the chip and continue to study cultivating immortals with relatively scientific ideas.

It's okay, the rhythm is pretty good, Golden Finger is strong enough but not overwhelming. The supporting characters are basically online and not facial expressions.

The story is relaxed and interesting, the three views are very positive, and the overall atmosphere is warm and healing, making it very suitable for daily reading. There is no deliberate attempt to sell anxiety, and there is no cynical and depressing feeling that makes everything unpleasant to the eyes. It is very comfortable to read.

The logic is okay, but it suppresses the combat power [Start] He died of a poisonous attack. A protagonist who was a master of research and wisdom was discriminated against by his father because he had an illegitimate son and refused to find a formation master. The protagonist jumped out and said that he was a formation master. He did not ask others about the causes and consequences, and directly risked his life to steal things with others. He was almost killed by a bomb + was hunted down. Do you know what you got? Received the thanks of an illegitimate child! ! What a precious thank you! ! [Laugh]

Nowadays, most of the technological immortality cultivation is either not detailed enough, or the level of pseudo-science fiction is ridiculously high. This book is considered to be a very good book on the cultivation of immortality through science and technology. It explains and controls the plot of the essence of aura, and describes the basics of the civilization of immortality such as the analysis of the essence of aura through scientific and technological means.

This is not Shuangwen's happy grudges, but the sound of life joining in silence. It is not noisy, but tough; not exciting, but deep. The various forms of life, the impermanence of things, and all kinds of tastes are the most real gifts of life.