You Abandoned Me? I'll Rule the World with Seven Goddess Mechs

I originally wanted to give it four stars, but after thinking about it, this book still deserves more than five stars. The pace is okay, there is depression and release, and it is not a traditional cool novel. The character of the male protagonist is good, but there is a hint of idealism. The wasteland did not soften his spirit, but destroying his will only gave him more ruthlessness. The most rare thing is that he still retains the most basic kindness, which is difficult. Yes, it is impossible to find. Generally, those who climb up from the bottom are inevitably gangsters and ruthless. They survive based on that thing, and it is inevitable to insist on conscience and morality. To put it simply, it is generally impossible to be good, you can only see how bad it is. The male protagonist also belongs to this category, but this is also his ideal place, because he still respects life. Life, revere technology, value commitment, and have one's own persistence. The early part of this book was a bit depressing, especially when a small villain did not die cleanly, and when he found a backer to prevent the protagonist from taking revenge, it felt aggrieved. Fortunately, it was mentioned in one sentence and was not mentioned repeatedly later. The protagonist's performance in the follow-up was not bad, and he overcame the aggrievedness. To sum up , it is not a traditional cool story about seconds and seconds, nor is there any invincibility all the way. All the decisions made by the protagonist in the early stage are just to live and live better. This situation only begins to improve after entering the first large map of Gear Town. The protagonist has a brain, will make mistakes, but will also admit his mistakes. The first female protagonist who has appeared so far is not brilliant, but quite satisfactory; Off-topic: But it's still the same problem for new authors. Without a reader base, it's hard for readers on the Tomato platform to have the patience to read a book. Most people will delete the book and run away when they see something they don't like. The books are good, but if you want to be famous on this platform, you either have to publish one book after another to build up a foundation, or you can improve the quality and update volume to impress people with your talent. Your rhythm control is good, but it is a bit slow on this platform, and there may be some minor problems in the future. Finally, I hope you can write more smoothly,

I have read Chapter 100 so far. Let me talk about the problems I see. First of all, Romon has lived too long. If the second wave of protagonists don't say the last sentence, they can kill him before the night blade arrives. Secondly, I really don't understand the supporting characters in Storm City. The protagonist has already established his power when he first came here. Almost everyone has a copy of that image. Why do some rookies come to kill the protagonist and the supporting characters and say that this guy is dead? What's more, that white knight, why do you mean it's a black swan when you let the protagonist go to Storm City? The protagonist cares about it but you are afraid of being abandoned and indifferent to the protagonist? What's the point of not reporting a sniper when you encounter one? When I play a game and meet teammates I don't know, I will tell them their points. Finally, the protagonist's mecha has been used by multiple people, which means that this mecha has had many owners. Readers have been reporting that this is a hidden cow, but the author has no response. He replied with three expressions and I don't know what it means. But the subject matter is really good, with the wasteland style and the machine girl, there are very few people writing about Tomato. I originally wanted to give it a three-star rating, but in the end I changed it to a four-star rating to support it. I will leave a comment after the tasting is completed. It can be seen that the author wanted to write a cool article that is not just a cool article, but wanted to write an article with deep thoughts, but the writing style is limited. The biggest mistake most novels on Tomato make is the exaggeration of emotions. I can't count how many times Qian Duoduo broke down and shed tears. Whatever happened to the protagonist, the fat guy would collapse, and the left and right brains were fighting each other. Earlier, he used biological cores to allocate mechas, and later he said that it is impossible for living beings to build mechas. The officer Reg received the order and subconsciously objected to it. Can a person with a rebuttal personality be a handsome man? Also, if the combat writing is not well-written, it will lead to mindless repetition of the qualities shown in the battle. The description of the cooperation between the white knight and the black swan will always be in the same few words. To be honest, the force formed by the protagonist is very ideal, because the protagonist wants to be a hero rather than a tycoon, so when facing a riot, he has to take his reputation into consideration and dare not attack those who are trying to steal food. In that environment, it is much better to be a tycoon than a hero. Awe in a very evil place is more loyal than worship. In fact, I don't recommend writing this because the writing is not good enough. In this way, readers will not feel happy after reading it, and they will not understand the depth of thought. Finally, I just want to complain about some enemies that the protagonist refuses to kill. For example, Cang Xuan, the commander of the Iron Legion and the leader of the Tiangong omnics who has been chasing the protagonist for three to four hundred chapters, did not kill the commander because he wanted to accept the surrender of the Iron Legion and gave him a position in name only; because of the advent of God, he reconciled with Cang Xuan and announced it to the outside world. The author wants to write this way to really reflect the hero's image of the protagonist taking the overall situation into consideration, but it is not what readers want to see, because Cang Xuan's character is not well-shaped and readers are not allowed to see the charm of his character. Reconciliation will make readers feel that the protagonist's suffering has been in vain, and the viewers will be very upset. The main line of revenge is inexplicably cut off. Nowadays, the mainstream character creation of protagonists in novels is that those who follow me will prosper and those who go against me will perish. Except for some works, the protagonists of highly rated works are all murderous and decisive. I can look down on you, Cang Xuan, because you are just walking a crazy road of redemption for mankind, but in the end I will still choose to kill you because you want to kill me.

There are two key points in the entire opening. 1. The protagonist gets a mecha 2. Unexpectedly weakening the mecha The mecha needs rare materials, so it will waste its remaining health everywhere, because the protagonist is also seriously injured, and then he is hunted endlessly, wandering around the world, and the injury heals even slower, who knows when the injury will heal.

The characters are good. I was attracted by the author when I read the mecha novel for the first time. It's a pity that it's just not pretty but not popular.

No one has read it. The writing is really good.

Don't be cruel to my tsundere girl [smile]

Why does the author update so quickly? Is it written using AI, or is it stocked in advance? I see your other books are being updated

Go faster! Hurry up [cry]

It looks so good, why don't you rate it?

It's been a while since I've seen this type of mecha text.