After the Power Went Out

In fact, the subject matter written by the author is very novel, and the writing style is also very good. There are repeated paragraphs in some places, which makes people a bit verbose. Then there are the conflicts mentioned in the comments. First, the power outage only takes a few days to cause disorder. This is really untenable. If you want to write about the evil of human nature, you need to add more violent materials at the beginning, such as extreme weather + power outage + monsters (you don't need to mention this at the beginning, just a serial murderer is enough) It will be revealed later that it is a monster) + an anarchic special area (this is rare or the novel has a special setting of anarchy) so that you can start chaos after only a few days of power outage. In the current article written by the author, it is a bit strange that he knows everything, but what he does is another matter. When there is no system at the beginning, the male protagonist is too vigilant, and indeed it feels too big-hearted. If the system is there at the beginning, and it indicates that the world is ending, the male protagonist's character will be very reasonable, and the male protagonist is always on high alert. The IQ and force value are not enough to deal with the things brought about by this high alertness, and I feel that the male protagonist has a bit of a knight's disease. He is in a bad situation but is willing to help others. He can't contact his family. Except for the worry written at the beginning, there is no contact with the Internet and phone later. He cares a lot about others and clearly needs to reduce the sense of presence. Indeed, he keeps brushing up the sense of presence. The current character design is not very pleasing. I hope it can be written more excitingly in the future. The dogs and cats are well written. I like it very much. I actually like that kind of thing that is still being planned in the building to escape. I also like some small descriptions of the male protagonist and cats and dogs being together, but based on what the author has written so far, they may have to "change homes", and it is really difficult for pets to survive in the apocalypse without a large hanging rack. I hope the author can give the male protagonist a space to hang up, to store food and drink for cats and dogs. It is a bit too much to write. This is my first comment, so I typed so much unconsciously. I hope the author will update more.

There are so few comments... I've read half of it so far, and it's different from the brainless Internet articles that are refreshing. As a post-apocalyptic novel, it is very logical, the angle is very special, and the details are well described (this reviewer praised it). When I first watched the first half, I felt that the pace was very slow, but it became exciting from the beginning. The psychological portrayal of characters in extreme environments is very accurate, especially for marginalized people (elderly and children) who are rarely written about in apocalyptic literature. It is very immersive and real. Sisters who like apocalyptic stories (not mindless cool stories) can feel free to read it. Updates are being updated. I will give you a good review first. To add to this, the male protagonist's character made me anxious in the early stages, a bit like a holy father... I hope he will be more selfish in the later stages. There is also basically no description of the zf in the early stage. I hope it can come back in the later stage. After all, if something happens to our country, it will definitely not be completely chaotic in a few days. And a little more drama about the emergency nurse.

I see 29. I'm curious why you don't go out and take action during the day. Is it just because of the power outage that it becomes scary? It seems that there is something terrible hidden there. On the surface, there are only power and water outages. Then why don't you go out and look for it during the day? And when I looked at it, it felt like there was no daylight at all.

Predicted to be popular! I like the narrative style and rhythm so far. As long as the follow-up plot doesn't change, this book has great potential! More updates from the author!

The protagonist is really the Holy Father. No matter what others want to do, he can't kill anyone. It doesn't matter if one of my own dies, I can just run away. If you catch someone else, you can't kill them, they are human beings. It seems that the plan is complete, but I don't know what I want to do after being busy. He is really a great saint. I don't know if he is trying to survive in the apocalypse or just playing house.

The AI ​​writing is artificially polished, but the ideas and subject matter are good. I can see that I have my own ideas. I would like to give you a suggestion to delete some of the nonsense words. The AI ​​writing is very easy to talk about such things. The overall look and feel is okay.

The plot feels good, but the feeling of doomsday created at the beginning of the power outage is not good.

The writing is very good, Goldfinger is not too perverted, and the plot is reasonable and smooth. I was so nervous every time I was in danger. Come on big

Let's occupy a building first. The book is quite good and I think it will be popular.

Very nice. The content is compact and every link has something to watch! I hope the following content will be as attractive!