The Mystic Immortal of Mountains and Seas

First, let me give you a good review. Four stars is enough. Don't be too proud (a speech from Tsundere Loli). I wish you write better and better. Let's talk about the setting of this type of book later. There are too few chapters and not much content can be seen. The first forty or so chapters should be set without combat power. It is recommended to hurry up. After all, if the new theme of fantasy and immortality has no combat power setting, readers will run away. If the author has reference from other themes, it can also be a reference for readers, or it can be a continuation of an old book by the author. In this way, the readership will be drawn faster. If not, the only way is to go faster as mentioned above. Let me tell you that as a reader, you can start reading from more than 20 chapters. To put it simply, the protagonist is bullied to the point of being attracted by the fairy fox, and then turns around and defeats the gangsters to become their boss. After gaining some strength, it is basically understandable (the male protagonist could not keep up with his education when he was a child, and he drifts when he has some strength. This kind of thing is basically understandable). After being frustrated, he started to guard against arrogance and impatience. It has been almost 20 chapters here (I skipped to read it, but I didn't look carefully at which chapter it is)

I think the plot of this novel is very touching, and I can't help but feel distressed and moved. The author's writing style is very delicate and can make people feel the sincerity and power of emotions. I really like this novel and I hope the author can continue writing it and let us keep reading it!

The author outlines a colorful world in this novel, and every detail is full of imagination and creativity. The plot of the story is compact and attractive, and one can't help but feel sorry for the protagonist's experiences.

This novel attracted me with its unique story background and wonderful writing skills. The author's delicate emotional descriptions made me feel as if I was personally on the scene and felt the emotional fluctuations of every character in the story.

I think this novel is really beautiful! Every plot makes people feel the sincerity and power of emotion, making people want to keep watching. I hope the author can continue writing and let us keep reading!

The plot of this novel is very gripping, with every twist and turn surprising and shocking. The author's writing style is also very good, allowing people to feel the depth and complexity of emotions. I really like this novel and I hope the author can continue writing it and let us keep reading it!

I've been waiting for updates on the novel, looking forward to seeing that plot twist. The author's writing is getting better and better, able to vividly depict the emotional fluctuations of each character. I hope the author can continue to create and let us see more wonderful stories!

I saw many people writing praises for this novel on Weibo, and I was attracted by their comments. So, I started reading without hesitation. This novel is very connotative, the plot is rich and compact, and it is impossible to predict the next development. It is really a wonderful reading journey.

How should I put it? I feel like there are places where I can make some modifications, but I don't know where to fix them.

The word-of-mouth spread through various channels made me unable to resist reading this novel. And after I read it, I found that this popularity is completely justified! The story is gripping and the plot is tight, making people want to put it down. This is definitely a fascinating book.