Starfall on the Cold River

If nothing else, the emotional writing of this book is truly first-rate.

Not bad. Although it is traditional, if it is written well, it will still look good. It is rare to see such a positive protagonist, but the previous performance was too naive. Maybe he is used to seeing those who are decisive and evil, and he is a little uncomfortable with it. But when you bring the protagonist's living environment as a child (except for the initial difficulties, he did not meet any bad people, he is as naive as a contemporary college student who has not been out of society, and does not think so much), his behavior feels quite normal. I hope I won't be a eunuch or a bad guy,

Currently following the latest chapter, I personally feel that the male protagonist is particularly likable. He is thoughtful, not lewd, and low-key. He is dedicated to achieving his goals, and occasionally helps people in difficulty. I feel that as he grows older, he will definitely become a very old devil in the future. Very attractive

I haven't had such a good time reading it recently. I stayed up late to read it. It's well written. I think it's the author's first time writing it. There are some minor issues. It's already good on Tomato. First of all, every time I open a map, it's like playing a game. Missions are automatically triggered when you arrive. It feels too mechanical. Moreover, the protagonist automatically receives missions. Some small sub-plots should not be mentioned in a sentence or two. For example, if you don't move, Sending letters and conveying news has nothing to do with the main plot, so use something else. The second author likes to use flashbacks and interludes. The first chapter is fine. Starting from more than 400 chapters, for those who read quickly, it is easy to get confused. You have to read the previous chapters carefully. Others are just small flaws in my personal opinion, not a big problem. The most important thing is that one update a day is too few. I hope I can write more.

He is a rare decent male protagonist. I support him.

It's okay. The plot progresses slowly. It's not a regular cool novel. The character portrayal is okay. The protagonist never knows what the poisonous effect is. I guess it's because the author is afraid that it will be difficult to write emotional scenes later, right? [What] [What]

The protagonist looks a bit like the anime version of Old Devil Han

It feels like the best mortal person I have ever seen cultivating immortality. However, I feel that the progress of multiple female protagonists is slow, and only a few have a tendency to date.

This is a novel that suits my taste. I still like the male protagonist to have a positive image. Those who are both good and evil would be boring after reading dozens of chapters as a cool novel.

The Story of Xuedi Wa's Cultivation to Immortality