How Did I, a Rich Young Master, Turn Into a Cute Rich Girl?

It is well written and contains many funny elements. Although the writing style is still unfamiliar in some places and the description is not detailed enough, overall this book is acceptable and worth recommending. It's just that the author is slow to update. I hope he can update it soon.

I really like the interaction between Su Bingbing and Qing Moxuan [adoration][adoration][adoration] Cars also go fast [laughing evilly]

@Moyun Author, please listen to me. Your article is not decorated with gorgeous language, but with plain and true feelings, it touches the readers and goes straight to the heart. The language is smooth and coherent, without any sloppiness or complicated and heavy sentences. The characterization and detailed description of the article are very successful, giving people a sense of endless aftertaste. From a literary point of view, the subject matter is very novel and eye-catching. The angle clearly shows that the language is plain yet elegant. Simple yet meaningful. Moreover, the article uses many rhetorical techniques such as metaphor, personification, antithesis, parallelism, etc. It can be called a model article! This article. It shows extraordinary literary skills in the ordinary. It can be said that every word is precious, every sentence is classic, and every paragraph has connotation. It has reached a height that is beyond our reach. From an artistic point of view. This article could be improved. But its meaning is far greater than success itself and the use of punctuation marks is just right. After reading your article word for word, my heart cannot calm down for a long time. How could there be such insightful articles in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. You gave me a deep understanding of the saying "There are people outside the world, and there is a sky outside the world." After reading the article, I did not dare to reply easily. I was worried that my vulgar language would pollute this rare article in the world, but I still replied because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such a wonderful article, it would be a legacy of my life. No matter how gorgeous the rhetoric and beautiful sentences were, it would not change the brilliance of this article in the slightest. It, this unique article in the world would be so beautiful! This article also echoes the saying "This thing only exists in the sky, and humans don't have it"! So I just want to say, your novel is so beautiful! How about... One more chapter? ㅇㅅㅇ

Come on, update (ง•̀_•́)ง, code like crazy, and look forward to the next plot.

This is the first novel I have finished. Although the number of words is relatively small, the whole story is humorous and lively without being boring. The system also has personality. The whole story is well organized and allows readers to figure out the next story. The character development of the protagonist is also OK. There is also the nostalgic transition brother. Due to the number of words, many CPs are passed in one stroke. I think I can publish a separate book to tell their story (middle-aged chapter). Finally, thank the author for dedicating this wonderful novel.

I read this book in five days, and another book with the same 400,000 words, "The Wolf King Reborn, Go to the Road to Order Egg Yolk Pie" at the beginning, took a full two and a half weeks. Of course, whether it is five days or two and a half weeks, it naturally does not mean day and night, but refers to the leisure time during this period. What I am trying to illustrate through this comparison is not how much I couldn't put it down, but that the book is too watery. Water is reflected in two aspects - language and plot. In terms of language, the language style of this book is extremely funny and informal. It often makes dramas or adds irrelevant sentences to reduce the density of information. It feels like a cross talk to me. It's a "style," so I wouldn't say it's "bad," but I'd still say it's water. Some readers also expressed the same opinion in the comments section. This is not unique to this book, but it is the only one where I highly agree with other readers' "water" reviews. As one reader said, linguistic water is the lowest and most annoying. The plot is watery, especially in the first half. On the one hand, the scarcity or even absence of exciting exciting plots and the abundance or even repetition of daily mediocre plots lead to a loss of plot tension and a lack of interest for the recipients; on the other hand, the loose connection of the plots and the disconnection of logic dissolve the coherence, and excessive jumps make it difficult for readers to have coherent ideas, but instead become fragmented and the main line is unclear. Most plots with slight twists and turns are not very exciting. For example, in the first two kidnappings, the process and results were relatively similar, and the already low tension was reduced again. I don't know whether the author's physical and mental condition affected his writing mentality and motivation. In the latter part, the plot purpose and the emotions of the characters have improved significantly. In terms of plot, influencing Xiao Muxin and defeating the Gu family are long and clear-cut parts, and some of the plots are intertwined with each other, increasing the tension; in terms of characters and emotions, from the exposure and confession of being kidnapped for the third time to the two of them working together to convince Su's father, the core concept of the entire story is finally fully analyzed and expressed, and the atmosphere reaches a climax. When reading this part, my speed slowed down significantly, and my mind finally felt a little affected. Although there are still a lot of trivial daily plots in the back, it is overall good. Even though the first part has exciting and tense plots, the tone is still heartless and disrespectful, but in the second part - at least on important plots - the language style becomes solemn and serious, which is a good change. As for the ending (the "extra" part), some people talk about the knife, but I don't think it counts. Birth, old age, illness and death are human nature, and being able to grow old together with the one you love is the best ending. Another factor that improves reading speed is the setting of this book - it cannot be called water. The style of the novel is multifaceted, and language is naturally important, but what is not inferior to this is the setting, in other words, the worldview. The world setting of this book can be regarded as a kind of "cool writing", and it is more of a mindless type. Whether it is the conditions and behaviors of the protagonists, it is considered a mindless and cool story, and the same is true for the characteristics and relationships of other characters. It's good as a casual read when you have nothing to do, but as a fascinating and exciting novel, it's too demanding. What is a little strange is that many of the settings in this book are already brainless, but the author tries to make them reasonable in some aspects, which seems a bit nondescript. Maybe it was revised after being criticized, but I personally think that if you want to be brainless, you will have no brains to the end, and too much explanation will be superfluous. The strange thing that surprises me is that the ratings of this book are quite high, and few readers show strong malice in the reviews. Although the above-mentioned readers commented on "Water", I did not read from their tone of voice the maliciousness similar to other book reviews. I don't know whether the subject matter or the style of this book met their needs, but what is certain is that their evaluation standards are different from mine, and our hopes are different. I don't read many daily life themes in online novels, but I'm not very interested in the parts that focus on this theme. Therefore, it is easy to be subjective first, so I will not make too many comments, so as not to affect the judgment of other people whose standards are fundamentally different from mine. Perhaps the greatest value of this book to me is that it makes me no longer want to read online novels for a while, so I have more time to do business. In addition, the author of this book spends a chapter discussing some political and social issues. I think this is very good. The author has both correct values ​​and the courage to put them on the table. Although doing so would cut off the plot of the novel, it is understandable and even justifiable. However, the above certainly does not mean that this will be a plus point for this book. An evaluation of the author's character is one thing, but an evaluation of the book—or even an evaluation of the author's writing quality during a certain period of time—is another. Note: The previous article mentioned "not to make too many comments", and I mean it seriously. 1,400 Words is not a lot: I rarely write book reviews that are less than 1,500 words, and the most are 25,000 words.

I'm really addicted to this book. I can't stop reading it. There are only two chapters updated every day. How can I read it? Not enough, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I have to say, he is indeed the author! This car is very skillful to drive, okay! Very beautiful, highly recommended

Good books, good books. ——After finishing a whole book, I was suddenly given a knife at the end. This knife was not sharp. On the contrary, it was a little frustrating, but it penetrated my soul easily. I couldn't figure it out. I tossed and turned, unable to sleep. Finally, I read the entire book again. Among the densely packed words, I saw the two words "yearning".

Daily easy and funny route, [driving, not fast, just describe it casually] There are no chapters that cannot be reviewed, no unnecessary nonsense, and no rambling. It is a masterpiece in my mind. The fragrance of wine is not afraid of deep alleys. The only shortcoming is that the author does not update very quickly. I am a student and don't have much money to reward, but I still support it.