Harry Potter: I Open a Wish-Granting Shop in Diagon Alley

After chasing for a long time, I finally caught up with the main force. This book is naturally very interesting, but I don't know why it took a tie to reach the passing mark. As for the current plot of this book, I have a little opinion, so don't criticize me if you don't like it: The protagonist's personality is actually very consistent with most people. After all, normal people don't have the temperament of "fearing that the world will not be chaotic." The protagonist is very consistent with the image of most people in the world today. Although ordinary, he also has his own brilliance in this wizarding world - after all, who has nothing to eat and takes the initiative to cause trouble. The personalities of others are also very good. Both the wizarding world and the Muggle world belong to humans, but they are divided into two groups because of the difference in magic. Luna, Rabbi, and Muggles try to use modern methods to study wizards. These are all manifestations of this difference. At present, I don't feel that there are any poisonous points, so why is the score so low? After reading a round of book reviews, I feel that what other readers mainly say is that the details are still lacking. At the same time, some other side descriptions can be more, and at the same time, some linkages and jokes can be added to earn more book reviews to increase traffic, and more eye-catching links should not be too lengthy, so that it can be very attractive. That's all. It's my first time to write a long review. Please forgive me if I don't like the part. This is my current opinion. This book is indeed very good. I recommend other people to read it. That's it.

Look! ! ! Good early redemption! My already cold body suddenly started to emit a warm light when I saw it [I almost cried] [I almost cried] As for the later plot, I haven't watched it, so I don't know what it is like, but it shouldn't be broken anyway. The current evaluation is full score

There are a lot of personal details, and I wrote down the facts that I once feared, thought about, and didn't want to face. When magic and Muggles confront each other, 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 I don't want to see wizards fighting each other, I want to see them fighting in unison with the outside world, oh no, this is a rare good book for me. Not only does it not have an AI flavor, but it also has a novel concept. In line with the choice of the times. But why do I want to cry more and more😭 Four stars fair review. In the early stage, the daily life in Diagon Alley was warm and delicate. In the later stage, the battle line between wizards and Muggles was full of emotions, tragic and tearful. The characters broke through the classics, the positions were written very realistically, and the sense of substitution was strong. However, the worldview is too Western-centered, and the description of Eastern magical forces such as China is too thin, weakening the rationality of reality for dramatic conflicts. It is overall good-looking, but the logic of the pattern is flawed, and it is worth reading. 🙄 Say important things three times, The Chinese Ministry of Magic will never interfere, and ordinary people will not act so greedy if they know about it. The Chinese Ministry of Magic will never interfere, and ordinary people will not act so greedy if they know about it. The Chinese Ministry of Magic will never interfere, and ordinary people will not act so greedy if they know about it.

Nora's story is really amazing This book really has great potential. I hope GGAD will get back together It's a really nice book If it's in my bookcase, it means it's really good. I've browsed hundreds of HP's books, not to mention thousands.

A super nice book. It doesn't revolve around the protagonist group like other fanfics. It has its own adventure [laughs]

It's good-looking. Except for the early part of Lin Yue's book, all the ones I've seen so far are good-looking. The plot is exciting and deviates from the original story line. It's a bit like a whole new world, but it's not completely separated, and the rhythm of the story is well grasped. It's not too invincible and can't be pushed straight away, nor is it like the kind that's so weak that it can't change anything. It's the kind that gradually gets more exciting as you go to the back, and it's very interesting to watch.

Overall, it's okay. If you look closely, the author has obvious signs of cheating (although the author doesn't admit it, and I haven't seen it acknowledged so far), the combat power system is slightly broken, the characters' personalities change suddenly, and it feels like there is no outline or the outline is unclear.

I have always had high requirements for novels, but this one, I feel the characters are very well created. I highly recommend everyone to read it. You will definitely not regret it. The friendship between Luna and the house elf is also very touching. The protagonist is also very gentle, capable and powerful. I like this kind of subject very much. In HP novels, this kind of thing is very rare. I will always support it.

I was very attracted by the setting of the wishing shop! The daily life of the heroine opening a store in Diagon Alley is so interesting. She purchases goods, receives customers, and fulfills her wishes, which brings the fireworks of the magical world to life. The interaction with Draco and the mutual quarrels were so funny, and it was so cute to see the tsundere lady being tough-mouthed and soft-hearted!

This article is quite well written and is a pretty good HP fanfic. I can't go into some details, but it's a cool article. It's really novel with the addition of futuristic elements. The descriptions of some of the characters getting along with each other in the article are very delicious hehe. The author is really good at foreshadowing. Some members of the Pioneers did escape in 1991, so they later defected to the United States and besieged Nora in 1996. The logic is very consistent and worth reading. I just have a question, why didn't Nora summon the ancient giant in 1996? Which is more powerful, ancient giants or nuclear bombs?