Return to the Future: I Can Delete Time

Let's talk about the advantages first. The author's character creation is full and the character transformation is natural. He is not formulaic to write some popular plots, but considers the naturalness of the plot, and really pours love into the characters in the book. However, there are still shortcomings in the early stages of this book. Things at the First Line of Defense School did not have to continue to end in such a tragic situation. In the middle stage, there are also certain traces of AI writing, and the plot also has a certain sense of fragmentation. However, after all, the author is a newcomer and can be given a certain amount of tolerance. The plot is currently progressing to "The Stars Shine Tonight", which is a perfect episode in the game. The author's double line is currently written well. It can be said that he has really worked hard. Let's see if it can end successfully. Maybe this is a transformation of the author [laughs][laughs][laughs].

The writing is very good, second only to the Dimensional Game among the 9 fanfics I have read. It is a pity that the author of that book has disappeared. I must keep writing it. Just think of it as using the material reconstruction punch on Shen He for the sake of the readers and the author!

I'm a little dissatisfied because the protagonist didn't do anything except save Schneider.

It's so good. My body felt warm after watching it. It felt as comfortable as Snyder massaging my whole body with his little feet😇😇

It's good-looking, but it's slower and shorter. [Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry][Angry]

This is one of the few fanfics that you 9 are still updating and the quality is good. Although there are some flaws in the early stage, at least the logic is still clear. After all, you are a new author and there is nothing to be picky about. With the little traffic you 9 has now, the author is really passionate about generating electricity.

It looks okay, but the author may have modified it with AI. There are too many adjectives.

1999 New book, I read a few chapters and it feels pretty good, my wisdom teeth are clearing up [please update]

Outsiders can't understand Smecta, but you can tell that the author is still capable [laughs]

Among all the 99 fanfics I have read, the quality is the best