The Outcast: A Fan of Piercing Chests and Headshots

The use of thunderous means to show the Bodhisattva's heart is well mastered. As expected, most of the works that do not have the label of decisiveness highlight their essence as a process rather than a fixed setting. It suits my taste, and it has that kind of taste which is really rare

It's quite to my liking. Although there are indeed some plots and settings that are not very good, I can bear it with a few blinks. After all, there are really not many good-looking one-person fanfics. Please keep up the good work, the author.

Give it five stars, after all, I still want to see the follow-up. The plot is coherent and not sluggish, it feels good when it should, and there is nothing frustrating or uncomfortable to watch. Moreover, in the Chen Duo chapter, which is the easiest to write down among the one-person fanfics on Rotten Tomatoes, the author added some influences on Chen Duo before the official start of the plot. It is estimated that the follow-up is more reasonable than the other one-person fanfics in Rotten Tomatoes. But there is also a problem. In the opening chapter, the author focused on the dual personality of the protagonist, probably because he wanted to write it like Diavolo and Tobio. But in the follow-up development, there is basically no protagonist's personality, and there are only scenes where the protagonist Shan Jiantian is able to pass through the soul. (I still really hope to see a follow-up. After all, the description of Chen Duo has already attracted many Rotten Tomatoes fan authors. The author should not give me a eunuch)

Okay, okay, above average level. The protagonist is a golden-chested person with super abilities and a not-so-low personality. He can do whatever he wants and never get frustrated. So far, it doesn't have any bad points for me. I'm just a little curious about Mu Feng's positioning role in the later stage. He doesn't appear very often. Is it just to cosplay the boss? Maybe I got into the trap relatively late, but the author has already changed it. The protagonist basically has no ability to self-destruct, but he didn't hide it on purpose. Guess, the labor and capital values ​​and the mechanism are super strong. Final review: It's good-looking, at the level of an ordinary big cup, the plot has a beginning and an end, the logic is normal, and the holes in the book are basically filled in. The emotional line is only slightly mentioned, and it is not pushed to the point. Except for Mu Feng's character positioning and the plot are a little erratic, the overall flaws are not concealed. It is recommended to read, but it will not be a second-rate review.

I've read the latest chapter now, it's great👍🏻. First of all, the protagonist has his own ideas and does not follow the public. 2. The main character is strong and cool, but not completely invincible, so you won't find it boring after watching part of it. 3 Crimson and a strange feeling, very good. In summary, it is highly recommended to watch it so far.

I don't know if the author has updated it more, but it's quite interesting anyway. The pacing is well controlled and it's a pure invincible flow. There's no frustrating plot, and there's no dragging out several scenes just to show off and slap you in the face. I understand everything on the spot and it's very comfortable.

The second personality has 100% trust in the protagonist. It was very enjoyable to watch. There were no bloody plots. I only saw a Universiade.

Cool. If you haven't watched JoJo, you can actually watch it. It doesn't have much to do with it, just an ability. This ability is easy to understand

I finally saw the Red King using the Heart-piercing Fist. I wasn't feeling aggrieved and even enjoyed watching it.

Hao Kang, when there is a shortage of books, you can tell at a glance that there are too few. A score of 6.0 For dozens of books is very good. Later, you need to control the degree well and the character design will not collapse.