The Outcast: I'm Lu Family's Retainer. What Do You Want?

It's really a masterpiece. Even though it has a single female protagonist, there aren't actually many emotional scenes. Most of them deal with the elderly. The male protagonist is strong but not outrageous. In short, this is really good among tomatoes 🍉 🍉 🍉

A very good fanfic about one person, with a single female protagonist (Lu Linglong), the protagonist is strong, young, and senior. There are relatively few emotional lines, and it is more about Lu Linglong chasing the male protagonist, in addition to advancing the plot. I think one of the highlights of this book is the interaction between the male protagonist and the Heavenly Master. In some places, the author has completely immersed himself in his art, and many places are very funny.

It's great to watch. It's top-notch among the human stories I've ever read. The plot is dense and the characters are reasonable. The plot goes by quickly and the content is compact. The quick transition to the follow-up made me enjoy watching it! It's different from other human drama Luo Tiandajiao where every scene has to be written about the storyline. However, the foreshadowing of helping Tian Lao is understated. In addition, without saving Tian Lao, it feels a bit like relying on the plot line to develop. There are also some small problems such as Zhuge Bai's appearance as a mere pendant or not appearing after accepting the apprentice. However, the overall shortcomings are not concealed. I look forward to the follow-up content.

Top grade I recommend reading a few "One Person" fanfics before reading it. In a sense, it is very OOC, but the writing is very in line with my taste. The interaction between the protagonist and these men is very interesting; on the other hand, the plot has not changed much. Now that I read the "Xilingol Grassland" part, I basically follow the original work.

Among the fanfics under one person, it can be regarded as the best work 👍, don't stop updating 😢

The writing is good, and it can be considered a masterpiece. The character of the protagonist and the story are what I like. The story is humorous. My evaluation is Author, you are so awesome!

I forgot to review the book unless I mentioned the author. I have read hundreds of fanfics by one person so far, and this one is my favorite. I don't like to watch cheat-on cheat systems, and the love lines are not too abrupt. The protagonist's strength is also online and his seniority is high

Well, I personally like Lu Linglong as the heroine, so I won't explain why it's five stars.

Don't stop updating. Just settle it with one person. The part where you confirm the relationship is really good. Spend more time with Linglong in your daily life.

I want to see the sweet emotional line with Linglong 🤤 [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]