High Martial: I Awakened the S-Rank Ability D4C

The plot is relatively good, and the character creation is also relatively good. There is a high probability that the heroine will kill without regrets. However, the current combat performance of the protagonist can better reflect the unique wits and twists and turns in JOJO. It is recommended that it be added appropriately in the future, but it should not weaken the ability of D4C. Although there is currently no wits, the strength of D4C is well controlled. Here are some suggestions that the author can refer to or think about: 1. Use the [Saint's Remains] in the original work to give the characteristics of a substitute. In the later stage, let D4C awaken the ability similar to the corpse and give others the [Stand-in ability]. Moreover, this kind of grant can give orders to the given person like White Snake's Disc. It also allows Fani to recruit subordinates. He has many abilities. It's really good. [Men's Domain], [Metal Products], and [Yellow Control] are all very good but not particularly strong abilities. They can be similar to the team system under the boss, and can be used to team up many stand-ins with strong abilities, such as the Hanged Man and the Man in the Mirror, the Rainbow Catcher and the Weather Forecast... 2. You can set up a small boss in the early and mid-term. If you follow the setting I mentioned earlier, a cultist son will go undercover to steal Fani's Disc ability, and Fani will give him a super flying man or a cheap trick. Another way is to give him BIG, but he doesn't know how to use the Deathrattle stand-in, so he thinks the protagonist is fooling him, so he turns against him and is killed by the protagonist. The plot is fast-paced and relaxed. At the same time, in the battles except for the scavenger, it shows Valentine's calm thinking of countermeasures in danger, and also depicts the battle of wits. This is very good. Not only does it not bring down the style of D4C, but it also provides a wonderful mental duel like a battle of wits. The battle I recognize the most is when Valentine faced the danger of encountering the cultist Ming Yu for the second time. He dealt with it calmly many times. The hat decoration given to Valentine by Murder without Regrets in the previous article happened to be a key prop for Valentine to use his D4C ability to escape danger. This pavement The pad is very good. At first glance, you don't think it is a deliberately drawn key prop. It is just a small gift from a friend. Then during the battle, you use the top hat to trap yourself and escape. At this time, you will have a very surprising feeling: It turns out that the top hat is a foreshadowing! Although I didn't have to fight the person who made Valentine feel sick in the college entrance examination chapter, I was still looking forward to it. There was also the cultist Zoffie, who seemed a bit funny at first glance, but when you step into the role of the dean, it would feel very scary. I am looking forward to the battle between Valentine and these two people, and I hope that more details can be portrayed. Finally, I would like to encourage the author to keep writing. I am also sending electricity for love [sending my heart] [laughs]

It was so good that I had an orgasm inside my head. The author is so good at writing exciting plots [blowing kisses] without insulting the readers' brains. A fanfic about a great president. It's rare to see a tomato. It's so good!

Hmm! Hmm! This is so refreshing, so refreshing that I really want to sing a song. Even after reading Qin Hai's book, I have never felt so comfortable. The author's book is so beautiful! I'm so high!

Some of Tomato's top books are not as hilarious as Dali, but they are a little more emotional and profound. They are worth reading. The foreshadowing in the book is quite skillful. It can be seen that the author is passionate and pursuing.

The battle of wits in the scene between Fani and Ming Yu was amazing! He has responded calmly many times and perfectly combined the "lucky" character design with the actual layout. In the world of Gaowu, we don't rely on brute force but brains. This kind of battle makes me excited and excited. Finally, Gao Wuwen understands the "fighting of wits"

"The combination of high martial arts + superpowers + black humor really impressed me! The protagonist Fannie Valentine's self-confidence of being the boss of heaven and me is particularly contrasting in the world of high martial arts, and also has the energy of black humor, which makes it very easy to read. In addition, the setting of D4C, the imagination of superpowers is also very interesting, and the single female protagonist's line is also exciting. I hope that these themes and elements can be better integrated in the follow-up, it is confirmed!

This is my favorite book, five stars directly

It's really good. There aren't many good books on Tomato. This one has a complete outline and plot and some level divisions. The plot is also very interesting and has no flaws. It's worth reading. It has a lot of laughs and makes me feel bored.

In the vast world of novels, it is like a bright pearl, exuding a unique and charming light. This novel, with its light-hearted and funny style, intelligent characterization and superb writing, made me immersed in it and couldn't put it down.

The battle of wits in this book is so on point! When Valentine uses D4C, he does not rely on brute force. He really calmly thinks of countermeasures in danger, especially the foreshadowing of the top hat. In the past, he thought it was just a small decoration, but during the battle, it suddenly became the key to escape. This reversal is so JOJO-like! The intensity of D4C has not dropped, and I look forward to more famous scenes of this kind of mental duel.