HP: I Slapped My Rival, but He Licked My Palm

Because I personally prefer Harry here, he is not the kind that others bully you, that is, he doesn't refute much, and he doesn't scold you very harshly. The Harry in this book has a bit of a venomous tongue, but a sharp-tongued tongue. You know, I like this better, and he is the protagonist and Harry is the kind of family-oriented person. I think this is good, because I think the protagonist, I still hope that he can have a relative, after all, he will go through a lot later. There are so many sufferings, so I feel very sad when I see him in the movie enduring these sufferings alone, because he is still so young and has to bear these things, which may not be bearable by adults. So if he can have a family and a sister by her side to comfort her and share the burden with her, I think it will be better for her. And another thing is that the enemy turned lover hates Hai Qingtian, do you understand? I think this is very touching. And there is also empathy, and it is one-way empathy. This way it feels very interesting, just that kind of feeling, it feels very good. Moreover, the author's writing style is also relatively good. He will also actively reply to our questions in the comment area and is relatively approachable. So I think this book can be a very good read. 😘つ♡⊂

The heroine's character is very cute, and the setting of her and Malfoy's happy enemies is super delicious😋Can't wait to see the love story (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄) Especially how the female protagonist changes her view of the male protagonist [laughing] There is no common academic prejudice and blood discrimination in fan fiction/black Harry and Dumbledore/blindly whitewashing Snape, and the author's writing style is stable. I have read several other books by the author before, and it is super suitable for those who are obsessed with the original work of Glass Heart! ! ! And the updates are stable, which is highly praised by impatient people like me [Send heartfelt praise] The relationship line with Harry is super good! ! !

The heroine has a very good personality, is sweet-tongued and good at complimenting others, has high emotional intelligence and needs to be strong. Vengeance must be avenged. Because the heroine and Draco don't deal with each other, I think the Harry trio don't hate Draco that much [laughing] Draco was indeed annoying in the early stage, but the heroine didn't feel wronged very much. The heroine's character is not one of being wronged. But the heroine is quite miserable. Her uncle's family treated her very badly. Apart from this, the rest of the plot is quite light and cheerful. Draco and the heroine reconciled very quickly, maybe because the two of them just had a small fight. There is nothing OOC about the characters. The writing is pretty good. You can take a look. In fact, I think the two reconciled a little too quickly. But after the two reconciled, they got along very cutely... Snape was also quite cute, a worried old father... It was quite easy for the two of them to get along after they reconciled. However, a large number of single arrows were not seen.

Forgive me for not being good at writing book reviews, I love the setting of Happy Enemies! ! ! (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ ) (Especially the one who went from happy enemies to a wedding dress!) I also like the setting of Del, she is a super strong girl (*´I`*), the author must make more of it! ! ! ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

When I first read this fanfic, I always put myself in Draco's perspective. After all, when writing fan fiction, I often want to rewrite the tragic fate of my favorite characters. I also thought that he and Del were just happy enemies. But slowly I realized that the character itself has a will of his own Dale is different from those OCs who traveled through time and space. She has no memory of the plot. She went through a lot of hardships with Harry at the Dursleys' house, being beaten, not having enough food and clothing, and not having enough warmth. She looked tough on the outside, but she had softness in her bones. She would tell Harry that I would feel at home when I saw you, and she would use jokes to dilute the heaviness. She was unwilling to show her vulnerability (the author is really good at writing). Hogwarts was her first stable place to stay, and she had a companion here. I gradually began to feel sorry for Del, so I naturally looked at the problem from Del's perspective. I didn't want her to exist just to match Draco's CP. The article assumes that the two disliked each other in the early stage and developed feelings for each other in the later stage. However, looking at it from Del's perspective, it is simply not pleasing to the eye. The plot of the suspension of school touched me the most: Draco provoked the duel first, and then an accident occurred. Lucius used this matter to blackmail Dumbledore. On the surface, he forced Dale to drop out of school, but in fact he was targeting Dumbledore. Draco knew the whole truth in his heart, but he did not open his mouth to defend himself and acquiesced to his father's words. (Maybe not as absolutely as I said, because I am commenting with emotion now) In the end, Del suspended school and went home. Many people in the comment area lamented that Draco was a typical Slytherin who was good at missing out on loved ones. They also envied him for being unconditionally tolerated by his family, who told him that they would settle everything for him, as long as he was happy. Seeing such a strong contrast makes me heartbroken. Dale didn't have a God's perspective, and she didn't know how tortured and isolated Draco would be in the future war. In her current world, Draco was just a rich young man who took the initiative to stir up troubles and failed to take responsibility when things happened, constantly causing trouble for her. Although I haven't seen the emotional development part later, it's hard for me to imagine how Del could have feelings for Draco like this. I will continue to read it. The author's writing is good. I will review it after reading it.

Love it. I love reading it. This book is so good! It's not easy to write a new book, so cheers! A few hundred people watching is just the beginning, good stories will definitely be discovered by more people! Now that I've entered the trap, I've become an old fan! Moreover, the setting is very novel, the writing is very good, and the characters are not OOC at all!

Nice! The Potter siblings are very warm and have good reviews! I was really touched when I saw the heroine secretly preparing a surprise for Harry. She is such a reliable sister. The love line is also very delicious, I really like to eat and make friends, they are so cute. The writing is also very smooth. Just to make the point of synesthesia clear, the abuse the heroine suffered at her aunt's house was written in detail. It was really painful and distressing to watch.

At first, I just saw this title and felt that this setting was very exciting to me, so I clicked in to have a try. After tasting it, I found it was quite delicious, and then I accidentally looked at the author's name. Then... Shuangmu Zelin is so awesome! (Needless to say. It's so pretty😵😵😮😮😋😋)

This is a state banquet. I have read so many Draco novels. The setting of this book is very novel. The descriptions of other characters' personalities and relationships are also very reasonable, and it is very easy to read! ! ! Teacher, you must continue writing without eating or drinking! (Bushi

Come to Liaoning and leave a review! ! ! I really like this kind of hp fandom that has a bit of a daily orientation. It seems very comfortable so far, not too grand, and the plot is well connected. The main theme of the article (same feeling) is also very interesting, not embarrassing at all, and very nice to read. I am still in first grade and am already very much looking forward to the follow-up! ! ! I also clicked on the teacher's homepage and found that I had read several of the books, and the quality was guaranteed! ! ! And the writing is not bad, you can follow it! ! So happy! By the way, I don't know where the prejudice comes from. Many Draco fans think that Malfoy must be high-class. They all talk about pure blood, aristocracy, high status, black magic, and family background. The background of the protagonist is extremely grand. It's not that they are not good-looking, but they are very Mary Sue, and they are all Slytherin-style prejudices. But obviously Draco's fans can also write about daily life. There is no need to pursue nobles with excellent family backgrounds. Besides, the nobles in the wizarding world are not very expensive... So I am very happy to finally see a book that is not set in this aristocratic setting. Obviously this kind of daily-oriented book is the best one to enjoy! ! ! Thumbs up for the teacher again (^^*)