Naruto: The Lespedeza Flower Among the Senju

Personally, it's considered a fine product. Some people say that the natives are not good, but for people like me, who have seen many poorly dressed Hokages, being ordinary is the real A[like]. Most of the descriptions of the characters are consistent with the original work. There are no unappetizing conspiracy theories, nor are most of the anecdotes mentioned in the reviews. Although it is true that the protagonist does not have much role in the third stage of the Chunin Exam, it is obvious that the protagonist has his own story line. It is already rare to see this kind of article on Tomato, not to mention there are many more authors, so why should I choose?

It's really good. I've read a lot of Naruto fanfics, and they're all about novices who keep pushing girls, pushing girls, being semi-invincible at the beginning, and pushing them flat all the way. This kind of clone is really eye-catching at the beginning, and you can see the protagonist's growth all the way. The most important thing is that the heroine Ino really cares about the hero. The third generation is not that kind of big conspirator, but an old man who is dedicated to the village. The description of each character is okay. This cannot be said to be the best Tomato Naruto fanfic, but it can certainly be said to be in the first echelon.

It's a very delicious novel. The protagonist is an aborigine who doesn't know the plot, but I have no regrets. The plot changes are not big but not too abrupt. The relationship with Ino is also a long-lasting one. The most comfortable thing is Ino's concern for the protagonist and the redemption of giving the protagonist a home. It is not the kind of love-making (some novels are like this, the relationship is very abrupt). The young couple also follows the path of pure love, and they like this kind of relationship. Regarding the growth of the protagonist, this is not an invincible flow❗❗The protagonist was beaten a lot in the early stage, or lacked chakra, but I think this description is more realistic. Compared with the beginning, the protagonist is only 12 years old. If he is invincible, his combat power will completely collapse, Senju Hashirama 1 When I was 2 years old, I was fighting with Madara, but after all, I have a relationship with Senju Hashirama, so there must be something involved. The current protagonist (15 years old) already has the appearance of the first generation, and he looks more and more like Hashirama. Haha, I am looking forward to meeting King Wang Wen later... Anyway, I just want to watch Wudi Liushuang. This kind of story is about a long-term and slow-paced growth-oriented protagonist, but I think it's pretty good. It has both daily life and fighting. It feels good to see the protagonist grow up little by little.

How can I put it this way? I actually didn't expect this book to have such a response [face covering]. Of course, if there are good reviews, there will definitely be bad reviews. After all, this is Tomato. But regardless of good reviews or bad reviews, I will never take the initiative to delete reviews, whether it is a book review or a paragraph review (although I was so angry that I wanted to block the review and delete it, but I really haven't deleted it [crying]), if you find that the paragraphs and comments are missing while watching, it is actually caused by the bug typos I made at the beginning of the month [face covering] (Let me tell you a little secret, the number of comments is actually very important to the writer, regardless of good or bad reviews, it is not convenient to tell the reason, for fear of being pinched [face covering]). In short, if you have good suggestions and comments, I will consider adding them; if you have any problems, you can raise them, and I will reiterate that if there are no problems, I will explain them, and if there are real problems, I will humbly accept and modify them; but my bottom line is to reject all mindless bad comments.

Xicran is absolutely logical, the characters are firm, and the works with distinctive personalities are really rare. The story is told much better than those mindless white novels that don't even have the original work and the underlying logic. I sincerely recommend it to the bookworm who has a stock of Qidianqianxian for ten years.

Not bad, not bad. Keep writing. I felt very unhappy when I found out that I was an indigenous person at first. There is no God's perspective. Later, I felt that it was okay. It's pretty good. It depends on how the writing goes later [laughing] But I have a small suggestion. You can increase the amount of chakra in the future. After all, many Hashirama cells have increased chakra. This pure cell clone must be a chakra after all [laughing]

There is a feeling that the writing is getting better and better. It is indeed a low point in the early stage, but it is reasonable. What I don't understand later is that since the male protagonist is a clone of Hashirama, his physique and chakra should be different from ordinary people. I feel that the male protagonist's physique is about the same as chakra, which is normal. Come on, author, believe in yourself I can feel that the author is very careful in writing, and it can be seen that there is indeed room for improvement in expression. Ino always tells the male protagonist not to get hurt, don't get hurt. I can understand that this is to express concern. However, you might as well change it to another sentence. If you always say don't get hurt, it is too naive and a bit willful to emphasize not to get hurt, and it will appear that Ino is making trouble unreasonably.

For me personally, this is a masterpiece. I am a person who likes Ino and Tsunade very much. When I saw the female protagonist, I came in to read it. The male protagonist is a local setting and a little bit of plot. I really like this kind of work. I have almost 100 chapters and have not yet reached adulthood. I feel that if I follow the plot, I should be able to write a lot. I just don't know how much the author plans to write. I hope it can be done. I just keep writing, and I don't want it to be finished with more than 200 chapters like other fanfics I read. I personally have no resistance to the integration of local people into the plot. I can only say that it is a personal masterpiece. Ino, a local, and the plot, completely touched my fantasy of the Naruto world. It feels like the author wrote all my fantasies. I hope the author will work hard [punch out]. I really like it.

The writing is okay and nothing bad, but the original plot is too long and too long. The latest version is at least 80% original. Although there are some minor changes to the protagonist, it is still boring. There is no new plot at present.

Yes, I have read Chapter 30 so far. The emotional scenes are very delicate and the development is very smooth. I personally hope that the follow-up will slowly deviate from the original plot due to the butterfly effect. I personally don't like it if it follows the original plot from beginning to end. If it deviates, it means starting to be original. It is more difficult for authors to be original. [Laughing] Some people like to follow the original, so I just personally like to deviate. Well, it's currently four stars. I may change the rating in the future, or I may just not review it without reading it. Well, I'm very strict in my evaluation, and there are basically very few five-star reviews. Two stars is very bad, Samsung is average, it is really average, you can watch it or not watch it, it is a little bit toxic, so I mostly choose Samsung. Four stars is okay, not bad, little or no poison points. Five stars means you are in a good mood or really look great.