Naruto: A String of Crushing Defeats Since Ninja Academy

Very well written. Characters do not just have personal labels, but have their own feelings and ways of thinking. It feels more immersive. And most of the characters are not OOC. Hope the author continues to do so. 👍 I feel that if the protagonist is written in such a different way, it will be difficult to write this direction well. Even the boss of Novice Village, Orochimaru, couldn't be passed, and then the cheats were eliminated. With things like this, how can the protagonist be worthy of serving in the ninja world? There will be no chance of becoming stronger in the future. Even if the Sharingan turns into a kaleidoscope, he will still be blind sooner or later. In order to show that he was kind and righteous in saving Shizune, he directly gave Orochimaru a big gift package. Jiraiya and Naruto couldn't find a way to save the protagonist. Even Sasuke has a protagonist aura than this original protagonist.

It's already tied, and so far it's been very good-looking. The emotional line of the Hayate Team that the protagonist joins is particularly good, but there's a bit of a knife in the back. I'm still looking forward to the protagonist getting in touch with the roots later, because there are roots in the latest chapter. But the protagonist and Orochimaru probably won't be able to cooperate. It's a pity. I remember that the system rewarded scientific research talent once, which should be useful later. Anyway, I am looking forward to the follow-up development. The author will update it soon!!! (A small suggestion, just a personal opinion, don't comment! I don't really hope that the protagonist will establish an organization by himself later. There are many fan fiction protagonists who will establish their own organizations in the later stage. I personally still don't like this kind of thing, because it will be very, very confusing in the later stage, and then it will basically be unfinished. I still hope that the author will follow the main line of writing.) This is the first time I post such a long book review, so the language may be a bit awkward, but this book is really good. Can you write without CP? Please🥺

It's okay. It mainly depends on whether people are used to it. I've seen various protagonists, including troublemakers, funny, invincible, multiple girls, making up for regrets, etc., Etc., So I may not accept it. I think the protagonist is not great, and there is no regrets, etc., And it also intercepts the two characters of lustful Sennin and Tsunade, lustful and gambling. Personally, I can wait patiently until Chapter 47, and I am unlikely to follow it for a while. 🤦

The process of joining Hayate's team was quite harmonious. Saki and Takuya had been teammates for a year and got along well with each other. Hayate was very attentive and willing to teach. The daily writing is also very comfortable. There is no sudden pretentiousness or slap in the face, nor does the idea of ​​​​having a female protagonist start to give away the daughter. For these reasons, it is worth reading and giving it a 5-star review. It would be good if the female protagonist is not written. Many emotional scenes are not well written and it is easy for me to give up on writing. If it doesn't work, it is also delicious to use Konoha's traditional art - Konoha's bond. (Isn't this how Naruto chases Sasuke in Shippuden 😂)

I have a plan. Wasn't the main character's original body taken away? It's equivalent to becoming stronger and acquiring the Oni Bud Technique. Taking the original body back and combining it to see if it can become the next door spell "Rang-men Su Nuo". Two mouths, two pairs of Sharingan eyes and two hands. 😎 Just put two different ones at once. Ninjutsu combination or melee attack with one hand, another pair of seals, two pairs of Sharingan can also open four kinds of pupil techniques, 🍉 There is also a chance to fuse the two pairs of eyes for eternity, use the vacant position to dig Danzo, and use the forbidden wood as a backup 🤔🤔🤔

It's pretty good. The making-friend scene is not as awkward as expected and is more natural. There are probably one or two sentences in Chapter 56 (?) That feel more AI-like, and the rest are like hand-made, making a wish without cp [laughs] Five-star support

Two chapters a day is not enough Brother, give me one more chapter, I'm dying, please Brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I can't stand it anymore. Brother, I feel like my whole body is shaking and I can't breathe Brother, please Brother, just give me one more chapter, just one more chapter. Brother, I will never touch you again, please, brother, really Brother, just one chapter, I swear I will never touch this thing again. Brother, I really can't bear it anymore. Please give me another chapter. Brother, I'm dying Brother, please, brother. Brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on me Brother, I feel like my whole body is shaking Brother, I can't breathe Brother, please.

So far, the writing is okay, although it's not very exciting, but the plot is very straightforward and comfortable, the plot is steady, and the characters' emotions are not stiff. I hope I can keep writing it, the rhythm will be tighter, and the plot of the protagonist will be more exciting. It will be better. Come back after fattening up [grass has been planted]

As the title says, it was indeed a complete failure. From being planted with a cursed seal by Orochimaru, to being planted with a cursed seal by Danzo, and finally being instantly killed by Itachi's illusion, there really was nothing he could do. The protagonist gains a lot and loses a lot. All in all, it's a pretty good Naruto fanfic.

Yes, the plot is smooth, and it's not awkward when making friends, which is good. "'(<(: Forgot to rate:)>)'" 1111111111111111111∧V∧V∧V∧V∧V