The Witch’s Self-Improvement

It does not completely continue the world view of "Witch 1994" like the fan "Witch 1999" from Qidian. Instead, it uses the power system and world framework like the fairy tale. It can be seen that the author has his own ideas. This approach of using only the power system can also completely avoid the risk of being backstabbed by the boss cat. After all, this is equivalent to another parallel universe where witches exist. The new book of Big Cat has also been completed. I hope the new book in March will be Witch 2. If not, then you are the author of the new Big Cat. Meow! (But no one seems to say that there can only be one meow from the big cat) Cats want to see the radiant witch, the great witch, the assistant minister, the lord, the cat concubine in troubled times, the great courtesan, the great group pet, Ovi's sweetheart, the giant cat lord, the third Erin Ring champion cat, the cat lantern flow to the sage, the fog fairy giant cat lantern - Jiang Han from Wutai Lake, meow! ! ! ! I'm a little curious about whether it can be linked with Witch "1994" Meow

As long as you give the order, the cats will immediately recommend you as the true cosmic pigeon [thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking]

Because it is a relatively rare witch theme, I gave it four stars as an encouragement, but the actual level is probably only three stars. At present, it seems that Quanmin's shadow is very large, and the witch flavor can be considered to be created. But the problem is that the author seems to have learned from Quanmin's writing method of having no main line and writing wherever he thinks. At least until Chapter 24, the book still does not have a clear enough main line. It can be said that many later witch novels fell down on this problem (this kind of writing can often only attract fans who already have some understanding and interest in the witch world view, but it is difficult to attract new readers who have never been exposed to witch novels) Well, what follows is some personal advice. You can read it or not. It's mainly about personal opinions. It would be great if it can give the author some help (I definitely don't mean to teach the author how to write a book orz) To make the story line clear, there are just a few methods Either it is an impending event that is compact enough, and one event after another leaves the reader and the protagonist with not much room to think. In this way, the main line of the story will naturally be clear: solving the current dilemma (short-term goal) and completely resolving the incident (medium- and long-term goal) In other words, it is often said that "the story needs a crisis" Or let the protagonist show a deep enough 'desire' from the beginning. This desire is not, at least not literally. Rather, it is the fundamental driving force that drives the protagonist to show 'subjective initiative'. It can be that the protagonist predicts that some kind of crisis is coming. In order to solve the upcoming crisis in the future, the protagonist needs to take her actions in advance. It can also be a proactive action to solve an existing problem (such as finding a missing family member?). Of course, it can also be based on a certain desire as the literal meaning does (in this case, the desire should be a long-term, fundamental desire that is enough to promote the entire story, rather than a desire that can be realized in a short period of time - the latter will cause the protagonist to quickly lose the reason to act). For example, he accidentally saw the beautiful witch on TV, and then said that a true man should be like this (Fog) In short, they are eager for knowledge (for example, wanting to complete a great creation), eager for wealth (wanted to create the largest financial group in witch society), eager for status (wanted to become the chief witch), eager for power (wanted to become a great witch)... Then, driven by desire, the protagonist naturally takes actions that match his desires - in order to solve future crises (such as World War II?), He begins to make various preparations in advance; in order to achieve great creation, he goes to work in a place with exclusive knowledge; in order to take the first step to become the richest man, he finds a project with great potential... All in all, there is a purpose, and then various main plots are designed based on this purpose. Finally, according to the rhythm of the story, other events (such as posting) are reasonably added to the main plot.

The writing is very good, and it has the flavor of witch civilization, including XP [smile] [smile] [smile]

I actually saw a novel with a comprehensive witch world view on Tomato [laughs]

You can see the shadows of the national witch and the otaku witch at once, but it's also nice to be able to write your own story in the worldview ~

It can be seen that there are a lot of borrowed elements, but it is acceptable. It is eye-catching in terms of major events and world view. I hope the author can write his own new story.

A good story, very similar to 1994 but very different. It feels good to read.

Cat Ao Ao Ao, you are the new boss of the cat! The former boss was really good at pulling, pulling and pulling again and again!

Where is this for the cat, meow?