A System for Raising Me? The System Is the One Raising Me

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The setting is very innovative. The heroine is transformed into the strongest master in the world of immortality five hundred years in advance. The starting conditions are simple and there is a system that is hard-spoken and soft-hearted. Knowing the original tragic ending, she gave up her simple pursuit of becoming stronger and determined to use five hundred years to rewrite her destiny and protect the people around her. The writing style is gentle and powerful, and the intention is to break away from the traditional routine of cultivating immortals and upgrading. It is healing and profound, and it is very touching to read.

The novel has a novel and unique concept, which is refreshing. The author uses flowers as the medium and the system as the body to travel through 500 years and weave a fascinating story. The writing is delicate, the language is fluent, the imagination is rich, and the innovation is bold. It is a masterpiece. I am about to finish reading it consecutively, so I would like to express my gratitude and hope that the author will continue with the next chapter. I hope the author will review my books "The Seventh Generation of Huangpu" and "Peace Soldier" and give them support. [Like][Like][Like] The novel is very good and touching. I will continue to read it. Please read back to "The Seventh Generation of Huangpu Students" and give a book review

What a special system. The system is quite interesting and belongs to the Daozizui Tofuxin series. If you have something to do, you can really do it, and if you have nothing to do, you can really lie down. I hope the protagonist can find an apprentice as soon as possible and practice hard.

Plant flowers to build a palace of flowers, collect flowers and plants to unlock special powers, get rich at the Mid-Autumn Lantern Festival, auction, travel to Zhongzhou, and write in a gentle and healing style. The heroine practices in advance to rewrite the tragedy of master and apprentice. There is no cruelty or cruelty. The two-way bond between the system and the host is very enjoyable.

System development, very good ideas, vivid characters, delicate writing, compact and not procrastinating plot, worth watching, keep up the good work!

Very imaginative, I really like this type of book, I must [like] [love] Support the author, it's very interesting.

The time-travel plot is not cliched, and the plot rhythm is okay. Overall, it's pretty good.

It's already very good for a newbie to write like this.

A very interesting article about master and apprentice cultivating immortals, breaking the routine of cultivating immortals and rewriting destiny. The writing style is warm and comfortable, and the atmosphere is full of atmosphere. It is well worth a look!