Her Light Falls on My Shoulder

Let me open an opinion forum here. Let me first tell you why I started a book. Because I like to read some pure love stories, so I also wanted to start a book myself. So I thought about it for a while and decided to start a book. However, Suicheng thought that I might not be able to see any big problems when I look at my own things. If there are mistakes, I am afraid of looking unhappy, but the characters I write are like my own children. I don't want to torture them, I just want them to be happy as they wish, but writing novels and stories must be exciting, otherwise no one can watch it, so I hope that if you find any shortcomings, you can point them out, and I will make serious corrections. At present, I find that the plot may be a bit slow. I wanted to write it with a sense of life before, and I will work harder to make the plot more compact and exciting! To you who are reading this story In fact, ever since I wrote the part where Shen Wangxing huddled on the rooftop, I have been afraid that I would not be able to write about her well. She is not the kind of protagonist with a halo, she does not have a smooth life, and even her "originality" becomes a shadow that traps her later. When she was young, she was silent, had low self-esteem, and lived in a corner like a shadow. She felt that she was not worthy of being loved and did not dare to look forward to the future. It was Su Wanyue who burst in with fireworks, gave her a bowl of hot rice, said "see you tomorrow", and showed no impurity in her tenderness, which slowly pulled her out of the gloom. Later, she went away to a foreign country, wandering around alone in a foreign land, and sewed all her thoughts and thoughts into her clothes, and then she wrote "Watching the Moon". For her, this series has never been about awards or fame. It is her reconciliation with the past, her confession of that light, and proof that she finally dares to be herself openly. On the final stage, she was so nervous that her hands were shaking, but she still mustered up the courage to say "she is in the third row." At that moment, my heart beat faster with her, and my eyes became red together. It's not because of the highlights, but because she finally stopped hiding and finally dared to show her softest and truest side in front of everyone. Thank you for being patient enough to watch her grow, for being willing to understand her timidity and stubbornness, and for falling in love with the quiet and firm company between them. This story is not too bloody or intense, just two ordinary people who have been waiting for each other for a long time. I hope that you who read this can also have your own light, and be loved and chosen firmly. Thank you for being with me 😘

The writing style of the work is delicate and warm, and the interaction between the two heroines is healing. It is suitable for readers who like slow reading and stories that illuminate each other.

The plot is good, the story is interesting and worth reading!