When a Boy Dreams of Becoming a Magical Girl, He Turns Into a Witch

Hey, hey, it still looks good, I hope I won't get lost in the deep river this time [please update] Start high and go low. Since going to the virtual world, the protagonist has begun to suffer, and the emotional line is unclear. There is also a villain, Lu Yuanzhou, who is too active. I can give five stars to the plot before the virtual world, but forget it after the virtual world.

One star less because I wasn't happy watching it 193 I just finished watching. Our blue star is still crawling in the virtual world and is being targeted by the will of the virtual world. It has not yet merged with a single stone slab. It has only climbed 2 floors of the 9th level of the virtual world. You can't see the end at a glance. The sister over there has been completely destroyed. If the copied witch wants to transcend, she will definitely devour the world's resources and advance to the level of the sun. When our Lord Blue Star climbs the 9th level of the virtual world, I'm afraid there will be no human beings here. Our witch, Lord Blue Star, has never suffered such a loss. She has always been self-reliant and can overcome everything by herself. I just want to say, don't make you laugh, Sister Lan Xing. We've had enough trouble. Just return the power to our witch Master Cang Lan Xing. Grasshopper, you don't want to eat a sickle quantum fission chop, right? [Smile] After reading it at 239, I started to feel depressed again, being manipulated by some kind of Nyx god? My friend, do you still remember what you wrote? The biggest growth of Canglan Star is its own system of cultivating immortals. What are you thinking about now? Become a god? Is there a strong cultivator? I suggest that you quickly skip the path of becoming a god by eating and holding back shit. You are a cultivator, do you understand? Let me, Master Canglanxing, enlighten you immediately. This is the right path! Any clown dares to dance in front of me, Lord Canglanxing! Deduct a star if you are not happy💢

Author, I hope you don't change the plot, please

Let me evaluate it based on my own opinions. First: At the beginning of this article, I showed me a powerful, crazy, unscrupulous, and daring person from another world (the protagonist) and a fragile sister who has lost the company of her parents (personally, I feel that all the plots about the sister are extremely irrational) 1: The protagonist pursues power at the beginning and becomes a magical girl. He ignores his family and is too lazy to run to the most dangerous places to get opportunities. Then you tell me that he has power, so he runs back to find a sister and takes him to live in a small shabby house. During this period, some officials said that the protagonist might be gone. I don't care much about her as a younger sister. I feel uncomfortable living as a brother who has my hands tied. 2. The protagonist uses the identity of his brother as his background. During the years when his sister went to school, he created an extremely powerful villain stronghold. There are also capable people and strangers. Why does BYD still have the identity of his brother? Just for a sister? (I personally think it's because the author wanted to write the official version but hasn't dealt with the previous pitfalls yet, resulting in a strong sense of split in the plot) 3. After entering the official field of view as the brother, there was no foreshadowing, and there was no plot for the appearance of the villain. The official people were brainless, and then told me that the villain's stronghold was as powerful as the protagonist. Then the official and the villain have been suffering, and was beaten by the protagonist. The protagonist upgraded his library and educated his sister (personally, I feel that educating his sister is a poisonous point). Summary: All plot points are too divisive, the background of the decent villains is insufficient, and there are big holes left unfilled in the characters, plots, emotions, etc. My feeling is: the protagonist in the beginning is one person, the protagonist in the excessive part is one person, and the protagonist who accompanies my sister is one person. So weird. . . But the whole thing is acceptable to emm. I hope the author can have the energy to write a better work than this one.

This is the second book I've seen on FQ that's similar to Magical Girl's Arrogance for Eternity. It's so visual.

School = Witch Barrier Principal=witch teacher = familiar student=magical girl Exam = the seed of lamentation Failed the test = turned into a witch Unfinished homework the day before school starts=Witch's Night ／◕‿‿◕＼ Excellent work

The plot is generally well written, and the writing is also good. By the way, have some plots been deleted? When I first watched it, I remembered that the protagonist's parents died after a disaster attack. The protagonist also stepped forward to protect his family, and finally the official memory was cleared. Now the plot seems to have changed to the protagonist taking it upon himself to challenge the disaster beast.

Please give me one more chapter. I'm dying. Please. I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I feel like I'm shaking all over. I can't breathe. Please give me one more chapter. Just one more chapter. I won't touch it anymore. , Please, really, just one chapter, I swear I will never touch this thing again, I really can't bear it anymore, I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep, I beg you, just one more chapter (screaming) (twisted) (dark crawling) (crawling) (twisting) (squirming darkly) (rolling) (crawling violently) (twisting) (tilting head) (sitting still) (slowly retreating) (smashing things hard) (gnawing) (darkly juicing crazy) (crawling) (crawling) ( Bending quickly) (twisting and folding) (returning to the original shape and screaming) (crawling again) (pacing) (looking back slowly) (laughing softly) (crazy and attacking regardless of target) (exploding) (eviscerating the abdomen) (laughing loudly) (lasting) (shortly calm)

I remember if I read another book with almost the same plot as Blue Star [Thinking]

Good looking 🤩 I like it. I like the author. Please write some comments (⁎⁍̴̛ᴗ⁍̴̛⁎)❤️ It will be better if you change your gender.