Crossover: Sword Warriors in Another World

The author's writing is very exciting and the writing style is very good. Although I only read the first volume and made a hasty evaluation, what I said next may not be very pleasant. First of all, I think the teacher can add some foreshadowing in the front. I still think it is too far-fetched when I see the back part. The connection between Dazai and Anping is very far-fetched, because Anping's character should not be like this. Unless it is foreshadowed first that this is a sword that has just been forged and has not been exposed to a new owner, and then accidentally fell into a different world and lost all memories. Only the instinct of the sword is left, and Anping will be in a situation to protect him after seeing Dazai. But it's not the case. An Ding knows that he has a master. How should I put it? After falling into another world, An Ding should first think about going home, and returning to the government of time. I imagine a normal An Ding. After saving Dazai first, those clear blue eyes should be filled with tears. Wary, body slightly bent, showing a defensive posture (no need to say much about Dazai's temperament, nor the acuity of the sword), but Anping is a sword, and it is Okita Souji's sword, so there will still be an emotion of confidence lingering around him, instead of being godless. Let's talk about it later, Dazai has always made An Ding feel that he is a useless knife? ? ? OK, I will pretend that he knows nothing about this An Ding. If An Ding really faces such a situation, I won't say absolutely, but it shouldn't have too much impact, right? Even if An Ding accepts Dazai as his master, I'm afraid that if he goes too far, he will think that Dazai is a scumbag, right? What is the nature of the pua sword? But Dazai is not the master. The instinct of the sword is to protect the master. This Zhen'an already has a master. He should be thinking about his lord in his heart instead of a person with no connection in another world. Regardless of the fact that this person is Dazai, then the plot will become, [A Yamato Mamoru settled in another world and has recognized his master. He protects the strangers in the other world closely, and can even be said to be meticulous, but he is PUA, and then he still stays with him. Finally, he returns to his master and still misses the stranger]. Baby here is really a bit scary. The author has done a good job, but maybe the teacher can add a little more logic here. I think there are a lot of things that I am not comfortable with in the first volume. I don't know what other readers think about it. Come on, teacher, and I hope the work will get better and better.

I have been reading it for a long time and I like it very much, but there is always a feeling that the characters in the book are OOC but not OOC, which is very awkward. I can only say that the writing is good. It can be seen that the author tried to stick to the original style as much as possible. Please continue reading.

I don't know what to say. The writing is very good, but I don't know if I'm too sensitive or if I read too many sweet articles (I don't think there are that many). When I read the article, I always feel depressed and have an indescribable emotion in my heart. Anyway, I feel depressed and a little irritable... There is no problem with the writing being bad. The author writes very well and it is still worth reading. It's still depressing, I don't have much to say... Although I know it's OOC, I'm having a hard time getting used to it. The author's foreshadowing feels weird. The first article is about an irreversible tragedy, which still makes people feel depressed. Although Ping An is reliable, he is a sword with the title of "The Great Demon King of Ping An." The classic is peace, peace has an owner. The summary is [A Yamato Mamoru peace who fell into a different world, did not miss his master but personally protected a stranger, and after returning, he still thought of that person wholeheartedly] Author, listen to it for yourself, is this right? This doesn't seem right, does it? Generally speaking, the author's writing is very good, the imagination is very good, it is very attractive, and it is worth reading. (From me who continued reading for half an hour: I discovered that it was because the first article was a tragedy, so I felt correspondingly depressed, so that I read it later with a depressed heart, so the more I read, the more irritated I became, and finally I couldn't stand it and got sick. Ah... That's my problem)

This is a novel worth looking forward to. As an aunt of Touken Ranbu, I really like this book! Every swordsman has experienced history and accumulated. They are all calm and tough. I really like them! ! ! I like every sword in Touken Ranbu so much. Hehe, the author writes it well!

It's good to read, but the characters in the first world are a bit weird, and the end of each world is a bit delayed, but the author writes more and more, and it's more readable, and it's very healing. I hope the author writes better and better, and more and more people will read this book [Sending my heart] [laughs]

Well worth seeing