The Legend of Luo Xiaohei: The Rebellious Youngest Disciple of the Earth Sect with the Twelve Charms

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Yes, it is the most comfortable of all the Xiao Hei fanfics I have seen so far, and the author must have read all Xiao Hei's chapters. Some fan writing skills are wrong, and they also write randomly, add emotional lines and so on. In Xiao Hei's universe, it is not the current world of immortality. Why does the heroine and the male lead destroy the world if they don't take the initiative? If they have the strength, they still hold back and watch their own people being wronged. Look at Xiao Hei Lu Ye, when he is wronged to death, will he dare to go crazy directly (refer to Feng Xi)

The plot is clean and tidy, and the emphasis on writing is just right. As a fanfic, "Luo Xiaohei's War Chronicles" is well written with a touch of daily charm. It is really good. It is only a pity that the length is short. However, this is not the author's problem. The original work does not have much [face covering]

It's very interesting. I've also read other 12 Talisman and Luo Xiaohei fanfics. I think this book is the most interesting one. The previous one has already collapsed. The adopted daughter was raised well and turned into a wife. I couldn't accept it, and I didn't tell me that there was a female protagonist at the beginning. This book is very good, quite addictive.

To be honest, this is the best Luo Xiaohei War Chronicles fanfic I have ever read. The setting of the 12 spells is also very novel, and the setting of the protagonist is also very three-dimensional from various angles. Especially the early villains. Although the contradiction between the two people is reflected through the protagonist's memories, the author's handling of the details is still very good. Overall, this is a rare and good article. It's also like digging gold out of shit. Author, please update.

So far, it's all very good, including integrating the Wind Breath Team, healing Laojun, and resurrecting Qingning. There are not many Xiaohei fans who have written such enjoyable stories. The author will keep up the good work. (ง •̀_•́)งCome on

It's really good. This book seems to be quite smooth. I can read it from beginning to end in one go. There is nothing bad in the middle. It has a light daily life and logic, and the characters are not broken.

It's a pretty good, very good read of Invincible, much better than the Celestial Master next door who has retired behind the scenes.

The one in Chapter 153 broke my guard [laughing awkwardly], although the author reminded me [face-covering] at the beginning of the chapter (warm reminder, this chapter contains a slight fury in order to pass the review) (some people can't accept fury), but I am a person who listens to books and can make up the scenes in my mind. I can't accept [face-palming] [face-palming] [face-palming]. The previous one is really good (I personally think it is good). Come on, the author. It still makes me feel relieved (for personal reasons, I usually make up the pictures while listening to the book. When I know what I heard, I will have the picture [cover my face] [cover my face]) Come on, the author.

The book looks okay, but the development of the rat talisman is still limited to infusing spirits. Under the premise that the rat talisman can be cultivated and the rat talisman is strengthened, I think if I just create a copy of the twelve talismans and then turn the fake into the real, I will be invincible [smile]