From the Start, I Am Immortal and Ageless, Cultivating Alongside the Landlord's Son

While the writing style is somewhat immature, the approach is correct, and the outline is fine. A more nuanced portrayal of the characters' personalities and experiences would be even better. Since "The Immortal" is inherently an ensemble piece, it can have a protagonist, but it shouldn't focus solely on the protagonist.

Wow, the protagonist transforms from an initially naive, timid, and cowardly individual into a mature and powerful being through repeated setbacks and trials. Each transformation is logical and traceable, allowing me to witness the entire process of a person struggling, fighting, and evolving in adversity. This growth arc not only makes the character more three-dimensional and well-rounded.

Not bad. When I first started reading, I saw a comment about chapter 11. Let me correct that. He didn't have his eyes open. He must have skipped chapter 11.

Hello everyone, my writing style is quite realistic 😄 Thank you so much to all my readers for reading! Please urge me to update! Please give me tips! Thank you everyone! Hello everyone, I am the author of this book. Thank you all for your generous donations, comments, and updates! I don't know why the rating has been so low, sometimes rising and sometimes falling. I apologize to everyone.

This immortality technique was basically never used 🤦 Survival was entirely based on luck.

I'm a seasoned bookworm, and I felt like listening to it, but it was just too short and weak. ੯‧̀͡⬮\

It's the kind of show I like, I can't get enough of it!

Not bad, no major flaws.

It's really good, and very well written. 👍👍👍

The laggards catch up with the advanced! 👍👍👍 Keep it up! Keep it up!