I Have a Disease. Its Name Is Immortality

It's one of the better ones on the list. 1. This story lacks the unique sense of vicissitudes found in stories about immortality; it's more of a slice-of-life narrative about encountering immortality. 2. The writing skills need improvement; many scenes are too immature.

Write well! I don't want to end with just regrets. The author could write about the main characters dying to provoke readers. Since they've achieved immortality, they should be powerful enough to reverse time and space, like the Desolate Emperor, to undo all regrets. They could reverse the flow of time, forcibly entering other timelines to cause trouble.

The author wrote too quickly towards the end; it felt like it could have been written in more detail. Some plot holes haven't been filled yet, and the relationship between the author and the female lead could have been explored in more detail. The article is very well written, highly recommended! Five-star review! 😄👍👍👍❤️ [Bump][Bump][Bump]

It feels like the main storyline is nearing its end. Although I'm not particularly interested in the plot, it's still quite good 🍉. I especially like the system (the "system barrel"); it's novel. The visuals really improved when it was revealed later that the system barrel wasn't actually a system. The other female leads and supporting characters are also good. But I hope tide Tong gets a happy ending.

This book is truly exceptionally well-written! 👍💕 Unlike other immortality novels I've read, this one is more like a simple dialogue. Unlike other immortality novels where the protagonist has a very clear pursuit of cultivation, the protagonist in this book only cares about his own little corner of the world and the people who are important to him.

It's very good, but too short. It feels like there's so much left unwritten. After finishing it, I felt a bit lost and confused 🤦. I hope the author will keep up the good work and ideally make a sequel, because it's so good! Reading it these past two days has given me a real emo experience [petrified] 👍 Please, author, write a sequel following the plot of this one! [Please update more frequently!] 😢 [Already hooked!]

Excellent! Unlike typical immortality novels, it doesn't focus on cultivation and combat, but rather on the complexities of human relationships. The protagonist's goal in becoming stronger isn't revenge or invincibility, but simply to return home. The emotional aspects are handled flawlessly. Giving it 100 stars wouldn't be an exaggeration for this aspect.

I read the explanation of the manga "Chang Sheng" and it was pretty good.

Overcoming, sadness, and heartbreak (protagonist) The more I watch, the more I love it, and the more I want to watch (me). The updates are getting slower and slower, not enough to keep up with (author). Q: What are the shortcomings of this book? A: Updates are too slow, the articles are too short, and they're not readable. [OK]

It's a very good book. The plot and characters are interesting, and the logic is sound. At the beginning, the writing style had some minor flaws, and some monologues appeared inappropriately. However, these are minor issues. The author has handled the romance between the male and female leads very well; so far, it hasn't become cloyingly sweet.