Immortals Hidden Among the Common Folk

Recently, I had a friend who is an author. Because his updates were too slow, when he went out, he was put in a sack and beaten up severely. He was so miserable that he is still lying in the hospital. I don't mean anything else, I just want to tell you!

Super double and invincible. It is different from the ordinary novels about cultivating immortals. The protagonist is clear-headed, organized, and cautious. He can also assess the situation. If he doesn't have the ability, he will just do it. He won't be like many male protagonists in novels who go around causing trouble. Be against the whole world. The most important thing is that the protagonist is not the kind of bastard who goes around in heat, but she is a beautiful girl and she will not let go. The plot of the story has ups and downs, the rhythm is well controlled, the writing is smooth and detailed

Let's give a brief review. In fact, this book is quite good. Different from other longevity novels, in this book, the protagonist seems to have done nothing, and seems to have done everything. He is still a relatively stubborn protagonist. The plot logic and foreshadowing are all there. The writing style can be given 4 stars, because I think some places still need to be polished. It is one of the few good-looking articles. I highly recommend it. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

It feels good, and the writing is pretty good.

I was reading Tomato Novels on the subway today, and a beautiful girl behind me suddenly asked me, "Are you reading novels?" I said, "Yes." She said to me with a look of infatuation, "Are all the boys who read novels like you?"

At least I saw one person. If a person who is born as an immortal never communicates with others, what is the difference between him and the walking dead? Humans have always been social animals. You can be sad, you can be angry. A man without a woman is worse than a eunuch no matter how long he lives.

Watch it to the end in one go, it's very interesting, keep up the good work. Five-star praise.

I have read Chapter 594, and there is basically no problem. I quite like this kind of Immortal Gou, but it always mentions the relationship at certain times. Maybe the characters in the novel are not aware of it, but we can easily detect it from the perspective of God. This will make people who have in-depth investigation and attention of the protagonist notice the relationship between Wan Yu and the original body. As long as there is a slight relationship, it is still a bit dangerous. The setting of the novel should refer to the sky, such as the division of classes and the gods on earth. There is also Danshan Toutuo. I like Danshan very much. I don't know why.

It's okay. I always feel that the male protagonist is like a hypocrite. It's just a feeling (no malice). Although the author also writes a little leisurely, it still doesn't have the feeling of immortality. For example, he has written a little bit about time travel, invincibility, and immortality, but not much about each theme.

It's nice to see the foreshadowing at the front, which opens up the gap between the protagonist and the newly-started immortal cultivators. Also, if the 360 ​​green lotuses and 360 rejuvenation tools are used up, the protagonist will be invincible. This should be it.