Honghuang: Has the Taiqing Saint Been Keeping an Eye on His Wife Today?

[Note] It's very interesting. After watching it, I have the urge to follow the show. The interaction between the heroine and Taiqing is very interesting. The vague feeling is the best [laughing] I even ran to watch the clip of Duobao's prototype when he turned into his prototype. It was really cute [laughing]

Ahhhhhh, I really like this emotional line, I really like the atmosphere between the heroine and the hero! ! ! The small details are handled very well [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

The CP of this article is too clear. I personally feel that it is well set up by people who are too clear. There is no OOC, and the whole text is logically smooth. The growth process of the heroine is also very complete. The details are written very clearly. There will be no plot that suddenly pops up. Everything has a cause and effect. It is really, really, really beautiful! ! ! The growth rate of the heroine is a bit slow. The plot starts from the ancient times, which is a bit far away from the plot of the senior brother. But I think it is just right for people who are in the book world. You can read it slowly. In summary: five-star recommendation! ! ! I hope inspiration will come to you like a fountain! ! !

The writing is quite good, but one thing is that I haven't read a lot, I just read about 100 chapters. I feel that the heroine actually doesn't have much need to become a disciple, because her apprenticeship does not bring much help to her. This is one, and the second is that the heroine's apprenticeship actually feeds the people who are being apprenticed, and feels like theirs. The blood pack has this feeling, let me see again, I think now I think like this, even her master, senior brothers and sisters, the help they give to the heroine is not as much as the help from Sanqing and others. It's not that the heroine's growth must have their help, but I don't think they are of much benefit to the heroine's growth. The more I read, the more I feel that it is not enough to become a disciple. It is very strange. It is this apprenticeship that is very strange.

It's not easy to see a book with too clear CP. I'm so fascinated by my senior brother Li's modeling. Come on, author [please give me more updates][please give me more updates]

I have to say that this book is very interesting. I hope the author will continue to update it. [Flowing Kisses]

Thank you very much to the author for generating power for love. I haven't found a few books where CP is too clear. This is one of them. Thank you, wife. But I stayed up late to read this novel and read almost 100 chapters. I really feel that it is too frustrating. I really feel uncomfortable if I don't complain about it. First, how could the heroine, as the incarnation of the little orchid that accompanied Pangu, be so weak? May I ask? Is this a punishment? It's completely incomparable to the benefits he got, right? Moreover, the heroine did not receive any compensation from Duobao or Taoist Tongtian who was the heroine's friend. Is this considered a friend? Not talking about compensation? I should at least give him some thanks. He has turned his disciples into Da Luo Jinxian. Secondly, I know that the author wants to write an emotional line between the heroine and Taiqing in the upgrade flow. But the cool thing about the upgrade flow is that the heroine becomes stronger step by step through her own efforts, and finally stands on the same level as Taiqing. However, I have almost read this novel. There are one hundred more chapters. I didn't see my wife writing about the heroine's upgrade process in the process of shaping the heroine. I only saw these 100 chapters. The heroine's training progress was extremely slow, and she continued to use the spiritual herbs she cultivated to provide Sanqing and his disciples. This does not make me feel that the cp between the heroine and Taiqing is very good. It only makes me feel that the heroine is treated as a blood-sucking bag by Sanqing and their disciples. Finally, I would like to thank my wife again for her power of love. I hope she can persevere. In addition to the above shortcomings, this novel still has many advantages. For example, my wife's writing style is still very good. The description of the background is also very good, and the imaginative setting is also very good. I believe your next novel will be better.

Super beautiful! The narrative is delicate, the emotional line, and the story line are well integrated. The heroine is not just with Taiqing to enhance the emotional line. The career line of the heroine is also very interesting. The plot is compact. I wrote more than 300 chapters about the ancient period! I think the writing style and the story line are very consistent with the original work. Anyway, I highly recommend it!

Very nice! [Adoration] Ayin and Saint Taiqing had a good fight, and they also added a plot, which is the origin of Li Changshou's time travel, which made me burst into tears. Taoism is natural, and the author's writing is so gentle, and the author himself is very gentle [shy]

Personally, I think this article is very interesting. The heroine is not very strong from the beginning, but she gradually becomes stronger. The interaction with the male protagonist is very atmospheric. It's like a long, flowing article. Great author, come on!