Adventurer's Tale

The rise of grassroots adventurers in a DND-like background. The author's writing style is still a bit green, but fortunately there is basically nothing poisonous about it. In the plot, there is no bitterness or hatred, no internal persecution, no level suppression, and no being forced to fight across the ranks all day long. The male protagonist has no other golden fingers except the data panel that ensures that his efforts are directed in the right direction. However, in the difficult battles in the early stage, there were too many scenes where high-level combatants were able to defend the male protagonist from the sword. It's okay to let the male protagonist be the winner in a desperate situation, but since everyone is not related to each other, it's unreasonable to make frequent decisions to sacrifice the chariot to protect the soldiers. I hope I can write better and better. The protagonist of the latest plot suddenly backstabs a Paladin teammate (an orthodox good guy) as if his soul has changed. He will also sacrifice more people in the future, turning into a minion of the evil god.

A great traditional fantasy novel! 👍 The hero and the devil, sword and magic, the protagonist's profession is the magic swordsman! It's very immersive to read! The author's writing is profound ❤️, and the plot content is only vivid! There are two shortcomings. One is that in the previous plot, teammates must be sacrificed every time so that the protagonist can break through on the spot and break the deadlock! [Petrochemical] (It is recommended that such a plot be played once in a short period of time, not two or three times in a row). Secondly, there is no heroine, and the protagonist has no friends! 😄

Although I read the comments and said it was written by AI, I think it's pretty good, at least better than most of the ones on Tomato. It's not as good as having god-level talents or god-level weapon fragments right from the start. The protagonist's growth is also slowly improved step by step. There are also some things that I feel are not good. First, some places are cumbersome and have no effect. They are purely based on the number of words. The second is that all the characters that appeared in the places I watched gave me the feeling that they were all made from the same mold. They had no characteristics and were all bland characters. The same was true for the villains, the blacksmith, the captain of the anvil, the rocks, and the elves, including the guards of the passes and the owners of the mines. Their emotions were too bland, and they were basically the same as the NPCs who issued the tasks. The third is when fighting the boss. I have watched two boss sessions so far, and they are all the same. After defeating the minions, the boss emerges. After the boss is disabled, there are two stages. The key is that more than half of the team members are disabled. On the contrary, the losses to the team caused by the second stage are not as serious as the first stage. Nowadays, it is almost impossible to find this kind of article on Tomato in which the protagonist gradually becomes stronger by himself from an ordinary character. Basically, he has a powerful talent at the beginning, or he becomes stronger purely by relying on the rewards provided by the system. If the characterization of the characters were more vivid, I personally think this book would be as good as 90% of the books on Thin Thin Tomato.

Compared with those traditional Japanese-style Western fantasy, or the refreshing Chinese-style Western fantasy, this book's attention to detail is commendable, and it can be described as slow-burning. This book is worth reading, and it is more suitable for readers who are used to reading cool articles but want to change their taste. I believe it can give you some different experiences. But there is something to note. This book currently has few elements related to DND. Those who come for DND elements must be mentally prepared. I have read too little before, so now I will add my follow-up impression: this book is indeed an AI article, and it is obviously DeepSeek's writing style. "It's not... But..." And the large use of dashes are old problems of D's guidance. In fact, if the author's reasons were more refined, I would still give a high score for the reasons, but the author's subsequent attitude was too perfunctory, so I will lower the score here.

A very good DND article, with a smooth growth curve for the protagonist, and a logical and rigorous framework and description of magic knowledge. It is no longer the rough logic of Xiaobai's novel where there are blue bars and you can cast spells infinitely like in the game. Compared with the spell release machines in the game and Xiaobai's novel, the mage has returned to his role as a researcher and scientist in DND.

The writing is really good, it has its own ideas, and its strength is measured step by step, and there is no bloody part of the hero saving the beauty in the early stage. The plot really makes me feel that I will continue to look forward to it, and the protagonist's goal is very clear I would like to give you a suggestion. The main character's profession is a magic warrior. I think it should be mainly a warrior, with spells as an auxiliary. In the past, some enchantments and defensive spells were very practical and good, but now I don't understand how to learn Dragon's Breath. You are in close combat, so how can you rely on the wizard at all? , And it's too long and unnecessary in the academy. If you start your career by taking risks, you don't need to spend time in the academy every day. I said before that what you wrote is not so vulgar. Now it is also a classic part of being appreciated by a rich girl. I feel that writing this way does not make me feel as comfortable as I did at the beginning.

I hesitated for a long time before clicking on this book. The comment section was indeed a bit scary, but overall it was pretty good. The comment section said the pace was slow, but I didn't feel it. It wasn't slow and it didn't count as a read. I read it if I was bored. After reading more than 100 chapters in one go, I quit and added books to my bookshelf so I might not click on the book.

I've finished reading it for now, and there are still more than 270 chapters in it. I recommend it to old bookworms. A relatively classic DND novel, the economy has not collapsed, and the attributes are not abnormal. In the mid-term, the protagonist can fight 6-7 little goblins alone, which is considered normal. The upgrade method also depends on skill proficiency. Currently, it is only level 6 or 7. The mode of occasionally forming a fixed squad is also very nice. Those who like to pretend to be pigs and eat tigers, and those who like cool writing, please stay away. Worrying point: I'm not afraid of having more female protagonists. I'm just worried that if the protagonist leads a team of harems to fight the boss in the end, one team has one male protagonist and the rest are all female protagonists. It's scary to think about it!

I feel like the writing is quite good. The protagonist slowly grows up step by step, from a novice to a professional. The style is a bit biased towards the previous hot-blooded comic protagonists, which require the sacrifice of teammates in exchange for the improvement of the protagonist, but that's okay, there are no immortals in adventures. The book is more about the struggle between people and monsters. There is almost no struggle between people and almost no plot of intrigue.

The story outline is okay, the promotion system is well woven, there is no exaggerated golden finger, the illustrations are few but relatively detailed, the male and female supporting characters and NPCs are also reasonably depicted, the lack of detailed maps is a failure, the overall score should be above eight points, it is a good kind of Western fantasy adventure novels