Thus Spoke Nidhogg

I think it's pretty good to watch, with a strong plot without throwing away the setting, and the writing isn't great but definitely not bad. It's watchable! Especially the protagonist's faint sense of death, Dragon Mother is also very charming! What? You say I am the author selling melons to Wang Po? Look, please! Gua!

Very, very, very promising book I don't know if the author is a big boss, but judging from my years of reading experience as an old bookworm, it is already the highest quality book in Tomato - the setting is meticulous and huge, the plot is reasonable, the characters are complete, the protagonist has a clear growth arc, the personality is suitable, and the author has no literary talent. There are no abrupt scenes, formulaic sense of déjà vu, and no vulgar plot. It focuses on rendering the tone of the world where everything is collapsing, revealing the heaviness and coldness buried under the punk style. At the same time, the author said that there are also a large number of "little stories" and high-quality illustrations, and the reading experience is absolutely first-class.

The author's writing is super good and has aroused my spirit of resistance, because I hate dark themes very much. I hate the kind of society where the whole society is a dark side. Even clean air has to be bought with money. What I think in my brain is that I must kill all those people and put an end to that kind of thing. Haha, maybe I am too naive.

This book is undoubtedly a perfect score in terms of storytelling. It is novel and flamboyant, broad yet not confusing, and has themes and depth (at least for now) But in some ways it might be too much: ① Detailed description should mainly serve the plot, but in fact too many irrelevant and complicated details are violently buried in each chapter, which makes reading a bit difficult. This seems to be a way to shape the world view, but I have observed that they may be a pair of contradictory points that need to be balanced to promote the plot. Find a balance point and the article will be concise, clear and full of profound meaning, outlining a real world without losing the experience of reading a novel. ② There are too many proper nouns, they are too dazzling and crowd out the eyesight. This is a problem that I pay close attention to, because I really get tired of seeing too many new words that appear without much foreshadowing and exaggeration. Generally speaking, this is caused by releasing too many nouns with "double quotation marks" and conveying too many concepts to readers in an instant (I am exhausted) From my point of view, the solution is very simple. Don't be too anxious to pour out all your own Pegasus travelers in the world. Instead, you can be guided and guided, and the water will flow slowly, gracefully and gracefully. Finally, this book is definitely worthy of a rating of 9.0 Or above, which is why I gave it a high score. The above opinions are for reference only. I have no malice and respect that everyone has their own preferences - I am just giving my opinion. A book depends on your preferences. In some aspects, if you like complicated and rich details, then the shortcomings listed above in my opinion may be your own advantages~

It has an AI flavor, a bit depressing and crazy, but very inspiring and probably not bad at all.

The structure is rigorous, the characters are vividly drawn, the plot is not procrastinating, and it is not cliché. It is a very rare good book. The author really tries his best to describe the world in his heart to us. I finally found gold. (˵¯͒¯͒˵) I stayed up late to read this book, but I have class tomorrow, what should I do? (=ＴェＴ=)

Awesome, good looking This novel is very different from the traditional Western fantasy novel. It even has the same background name as the traditional Western fantasy novel. It is very beautiful when written well, but it is very confusing when not well written. I don't know how to put it, but it feels very similar to "Dr. Dawn" to me, and most of the characters in this novel are relatively plump and three-dimensional. This sentence is relatively thin in the book review, but it will be more comfortable when reading the novel.

The combination of western fantasy and steampunk has a wonderful world view and a very despairing description of a dark society. But I would like to make a small suggestion. I feel that the content written in the introduction is a bit more relaxed and daily, which is a bit inconsistent with the atmosphere of the main text. People who like this type may quit after seeing the introduction (for example, I did it before). Can the introduction highlight the theme of witnessing death and the decaying darkness of the world? The author must not stop writing.

This book is okay, but the biggest problem is that the pace is too fast (as a time traveler, the adaptability of the protagonist exceeds that of his companions, I hope to add more transitional chapters in the future), and I hope that the name of the protagonist Chen Li can be given back. His behavior is positive and does not fit the characteristics of the world-destroying black dragon. Moreover, the protagonist is too miserable. As a dragon, he was bullied like this (it feels a bit deliberately written like a sword). The suggestion is to increase the suffering instead of all-round abuse of the protagonist. The article has a little bit of depiction of dragons (it may be considered a novel wrapped in dragon skin, so it is recommended to add more elements about dragons). Also, the name really doesn't match the content. I looked at the name and thought it was a casual novel, but it turns out the content is very serious. I even... I hope the author can change the title of the book. In the end, the writing is quite good overall. I hope the author can write more. Come on, I am optimistic about you. Don't worry about criticism, after all, no one is perfect. I originally wanted to give it a four-star rating, so I'll give it a five-star rating to encourage it.

A very good story, a story about a puppet savior, a story about the upper-level game.