Wuxia Game: The Villain Is the Era’s Beloved White Moonlight

Great article, but all the comments are...,, There is a sub-cp Moreover, let me briefly mention that the character design in the later period is actually a bit ☝️, and there are not many people on the forum. I feel that the main character is simply misunderstood, misunderstood, misunderstood, or misunderstood. It is recommended to read it after the completion. Let's just treat the above as demining. I really can't stand it, so I just keep doing it honestly. I have to have a deputy CP to show off the ruthlessness of the world. Is it difficult to create a sense of humor? A whole group of greedy girls who both want and want everything but also want this cp audience? I really can't delete all the links in my profile, right?

It's very good. It's just that too few people have watched it. Don't be fooled by the ratings [OK] The protagonist's mother is very happy [Shy] The characters are also very vivid and three-dimensional. The vivid portraits of young people in the court are vivid on the page. The author's writing style is also very good. I recommend it ~ emmmm... It looked okay in the early stage, but the plot in the later period was a bit delayed, and there was a suspicion of AI being used... [Aggrieved] Han Zheng seemed to be the Bai Yueguang of the previous era... Simply because All has always been able to leave [Aggrieved]

What I wrote before is quite good, very Jianghu atmosphere, I feel so sorry for Yu! Yeah, but I feel like I've abused the protagonist a lot, But the latter part really shocked me. [Pouts] I looked like a CP, and everyone looked at you with a disappointed look on their face! ! What is this Han Zheng? ? Or is it a white moonlight level? ! After reading so many chapters, I finally can't stand it anymore. I like the purebred heartthrob Baozi Lightning! !

Don't worry about my duration, it's up to the semicolon. I can't give it too low a rating, because some of the plots really poked me. But I really don't know what to say about the CP issue. At the beginning, the introduction marked "all direction", and many protagonists (such as me) came in immediately. In my understanding, all means all, which is the central direction of all members. But what the hell is Han Jiang? I understand that the relationship between Jianghu characters is complicated, but in the 213 speech, the author personally mentioned the cp name of "Han Jiang" and said that he was an omnivorous person? So what is the significance of the all label? I really enjoyed watching the plot design in the early stage, but when it came out like this in the later stage... The introduction clearly marked the all-orientation and also contained private goods, just to trick the mysophobic into killing it. . . The degree of trauma is no less than that of the all protagonist who is obsessed with germs and opens a barrage to watch KyoAni. The official picture has no attributes but sells balance... In addition, the effect of the forum discussion (for example, Qin Yu's women's clothing is not ridiculed by viewers who suspect the vest or teases Jin Sehua, this is also a famous scene), the connection between the previous and later plot details (for example, Qin Yu Yu's body was not afraid of pain when he met the protagonist group at Jiuquanhua, but he felt pain when he and the cicadas were clearing evil obstacles, cutting flesh and bleeding) (for example, Jin Sehua suspected that Qin Yu was a person, but did not say that he was not afraid of pain when blocking the arrow, but was not contacted by the "amazingly observant" Jin Sehua). Some of the plots are indeed remarkable, and I like them very much. I am looking forward to everyone's reaction during the whitewash, and the plot design of the whitewash. The crematorium never goes out of style. I read more than 200 chapters in one breath, but I saw something like ■■... At the moment, I can only say that the author's writing style is indeed good, but the cp classification is a big mistake. Come on

This is the first time I have read such a delicious book😋 This martial arts game style is so strong, including some of the author's unique martial arts skills, sect names, poems, etc. Are also very creative, and the language is also very strong in the flavor of the world. The portrayal of the characters and the description of the moves are not cliché. The characters I have seen so far have personal characteristics and flesh and blood. Although the ink in the opening scene is not much, it is extremely vivid, and the chivalrous style is vivid on the page. (Senior Sister Qingping and the temple guardian each have their own personalities in their portrayal) The plot of the story is not draggy, and it is very attractive as long as you can follow it (many people say it is superficial, but I think the main plot is excellent) and the character of the protagonist is also very good. In short, this book is indeed a rare good book with obvious personal style. I highly recommend it😋 How to put it this way, the follow-up of this book is still very exciting, and the author is very good at shaping characters, but should there be a growth line for the protagonists? Otherwise, it will be too thin, and there is also a small problem, the language is a bit cumbersome. There are too many adjectives and words describing emotions (I know the teacher may want to better express the emotions of the protagonist at that time, but if there are too many words, there will be no sense of substitution). Maybe the language can be appropriately left blank, otherwise the article will appear a bit "watery". Of course, it can also be regarded as a personal style, but the audience is a little small (this problem has been reported by many people. Sometimes I feel that the teacher's articles are not like novels but like fanfiction🤔), and the descriptions are too subtle. The overall writing style is relaxed and everyday, and the knife part is also very delicious. (There are some passionate parts, but not too embarrassing) In the end, this book is still recommended to be read, but if you read it just for the sake of reading a certain point, forget it. This book is more of a long-running feeling. (There are also some small questions about labels. I feel that labeling this label will cause misunderstandings among some readers. After all, there are many understandable meanings. Do you want to change it or make it clear? 😯) Comment again. . 🤔 Regarding the following plot, I would like to make a small suggestion. It feels a bit empty and a bit watered down. After two or three chapters, I still feel that there is no progress. I am describing one thing repeatedly, and I feel like I am looking for the plot in the description. The plot before Luoyang was well controlled and didn't feel sloppy. Now it always makes me feel breathless. Finally, there is still the issue of labeling and introduction. It is recommended that the scope of the all-oriented article be clearly stated, including the family-oriented and friendship-oriented emotional lines, otherwise many people will not be able to understand it.

In this book, you can see the young man's youth, the shining stars, the spirit of the world, the court's calculations, the chess game in the world, the rivalry, the hatred of the sea and the love of the sky, the group's favor Bai Yueguang, and the stripping of the waistcoat until the two veins of Ren and Governor circulate. It's so exciting! ! The protagonist is self-destructive, has a high IQ and is weak (?). The beauty Bai Yueguang is doted on by the group. It is known that he has a fox fairy sister, Wu Yan, a younger brother, a medicine man... Etc. ! Secondly, the writing style of this book is excellent. The author has great writing skills and a rich vocabulary. The plot is not broken at all, and there is nothing unreasonable. Regarding the background of the Jianghu, the author is also super meticulous in constructing it! Especially attentive! ! The PS period may be a bit cruel, and family members need to watch it with tears in their eyes. Small lightning protection: 1 About All, the protagonist has no cp in the text, and you can do cp by yourself. (Actually, I feel good about this, because everyone and the protagonist are easy to defeat!!) 2. There is a cp who is not the protagonist that is easier to knock, Jiang Bai × Han Zheng (the family is not an official match, but according to the author's emphasis, it seems to be an official recommendation, the type of hating the sea and the love sky, I feel that it is good to knock this couple as a snack) Everything else is very beautiful, especially super cool! ! Author, please give me a boost and update. I want to indulge in your pen and worship you! ! ! I think the plots in the next few pictures of yours are a bit watered down, and they are repeated inexplicably. I wrote almost dozens of pictures, describing emotions in large sections, and the main plot is intermittent, and there are a few relationships that are particularly strange. These few photos I've taken in the past few days have been both emotional and inexplicable, and I always feel a little bit OOC... (Self-feeling). It's a lot like AI... In the early stages of this book, it could make me cry and torture me to death, but these recent pictures are really hard to comment on...

Nice! The plot is flowing, the vocabulary is great, the writing has a sense of perfection, and the descriptions are very picturesque. I haven't had such a delicious meal at Yangshizi in a long time😋 and there are no long paragraphs of gorgeous words to describe the appearance of the protagonist. The protagonist is not the kind of person who is delicate and dependent on others. He is very strong and has his own opinions and strategies. The plot is smooth, I haven't seen anything strange so far, and each character has a distinct personality It's a pity that it's still a new book [crying], waiting for major updates⋯ This book has a full sense of the world, a novel setting, three-dimensional and vivid characters, and interlocking main content. It can be seen that the author has a profound knowledge [Shy] I really like the overall setting and writing style of this article. The character creation and plot rhythm really poked me. I am really happy to keep following it [Blow kiss] Some chapters have too much vocabulary and overflowing descriptions. The visuals are great, the atmosphere is strong, and the emotions are delicate. However, there are too many details throughout the story. After reading too much, I feel that the pace is a bit slowed down and it seems a bit redundant. Regarding the emotional description of the sub-plot, the love and hatred between Jiang Bai and Han Zheng, the author has some experience with this product, but this is not a sub-CP. Regarding this, there are answers and explanations in what the author has to say, go and look The article describes their relationship mainly around Chapter 200, and the full text accounts for a relatively small proportion. I want to describe that everyone has their own relationship, but it is inevitably centered on the protagonist. Main plot flow, group portraits, and less forum content. Please consider the suggestions coming from the forum. It is rare to see this type of writing in Tomato, with a complete world view, plot, and good writing. The writing is really great୧꒰•̀ᴗ•́꒱୨ (multiple editors)

It's very much like that game, it's so cool. The teacher's writing is very good, and the plot and other aspects are handled very smoothly and comfortably. I really like it. I feel like if there really is a "Tian Xia Yi", I would want to watch it twice. The pv and other things would be interesting if I think about it! ! ! Xiao Qin is also good-looking! The little fox is so cute, super cute! ! ! Teacher, please keep writing! ! Looking forward to it! ! ! ! !

Super pretty!!! 1. The atmosphere of the world is very strong, the plot is very logical, and the characters are three-dimensional and have their own responsibilities and persistence. It's a very group portrait, everyone is the protagonist in the world. 2. The writing style is good, and there are some phenomena of using modern words and ancient words, but it is not dramatic. The power of the Dali Temple Minister is a bit too great. I didn't know that the author was borrowing the official system of that dynasty, so I just ignored it. 3. Regarding losing the horse, my feelings: Quick, quick, quick! - Don't, don't, don't - It's uncomfortable, it's uncomfortable, it's uncomfortable - [cry] [cry] [cry] The author's writing is really fascinating. At least for the first time in a horse novel, I didn't want the protagonist to fall off his horse so quickly. 4. It's a bit nonsense, but it's so beautiful! Finally, the author will update it quickly, and please pay attention to your health! (Staying up two nights in a row to tie the knot, I still feel unfinished [love]) Another point is that the author mentions the suffering that happened to the protagonist a bit repeatedly. It is very awkward to read, just like "I am so miserable, please come and feel sorry for me". This feeling can be presented in the forum and in front of the protagonist. One or two times is enough for readers. Too much is a bit weird. Editor 3: I've finished watching it. It's good to watch. Although the traces of AI were a bit obvious in the middle, the extra chapter healed me [Blow a kiss]

The writing is really good, and the emotional line is well grasped. You can eat a variety of flavors such as hate sea love, white cut black puppy noodles, cold heart and warm colleagues. One of the advantages is that the emotional line is written naturally, not a thin love. It can be seen that Xiao Qin himself is very charming, and the characters attracted by this charm cannot be summed up in the word love for him. I didn't say that a certain character fell in love with him. I really liked the scene where Wei and Qin misunderstood each other. When they were young, they had the ambition to have a relationship. The decision to solve the case may not have worn away Wei's trust and intolerance. The shot that missed the target in the fantasy world really made me experience the complex emotions of the character. Originally, I just thought that Wei was angry at Qin's betrayal, and didn't know the complexity behind it. However, Wei knew that he had no choice but to deal with officialdom, and he always believed and had expectations and trust in Qin Bao. This emotion was downplayed in the follow-up when Wei believed and stopped Qin from doing evil things again and again, but the missed shot and the emotional interpretation at that time really made people feel that he hated but also loved for a moment. The other is Xiao Lin, a cute dog sculpture that makes people feel very cute and is also a very typical image of an enthusiastic martial arts young hero. With the spirit of a knight-errant, the words "Sister Fox Fairy" which is more clay sculpture made a deep impression on me, hahaha. What makes me feel good about it the most is that the descriptions are particularly visual, and the roles in the martial arts setting are very clear. The main line has always been centered around Penglai Xianyu, and they are interlocking. It has a very distinct sense of a martial arts game, the positioning of the three protagonists is very typical, and the various atmospheres are in place. There is not much written about this aspect of the forum. I feel that it is average compared to the main text but it does not look obtrusive. I still like to read this kind of relaxed and funny forum. Looking forward to the next post